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doll_sg

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

its so damn interesting really curious to read further plzzz update soon😃

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tanuka

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Awesome start himani !!

the stubborn swayam can only fix the swaron problem.

totally loved it :D

eager to read more.

update ASAP...

thanks for the pm.

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Sameera Dhanraj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

WHEN U R GOING TO UPDATE . . UR DEMAND HVE MET TO UPDATE NAA . . DNT MAKE US WAIT . . . PLS UPDATE . .😕

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tumdeep

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

ousm yaar sorry for late comment😭 plz update next part soon

hope it would be happy one😊

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Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Awesome start. Eager to know what is gonna happen next!!!

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Rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Wow FANTASTIC dear:-):-) Please PM me when u update:-) and plz cont..

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Himani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

A big thank you to all of you guys...Love you all...
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Here's the update guys...enjoy...

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Himani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Sorry for being late guys...
End prt...

Sw- sharon mai chala gaya to wapas nahi aunga...the choice is yours..!!!
And cuts the phne...he waited for two hours but she didnt came down...swayum was literally on tears..."i got ur answer sharon...i promise ab yeh swayum shekhawat tab tak tumse baat ya milne ki koshish nahi karega..jub tak tum nahi chahogi...tum mujse baat nahi karna chahti...milna nahi chahti..agar tumhe isi main khushi milti hai than its ok with me...coz ur happiness is my only priorty...and i want you to be happy always..." till now he was crying badly...suddenly his phone rang...he wiped his tears and pickd up the call..."yeah dude...kya hua..??"
"Dude to kahan hai...i need your help!!!" Rey behaving very strange... "ab ise kya ho gaya..."swayum in mind...
Rey again.."tu sun raha hai naa...??"
"ummm...ha..haan bol na kya hua..??"swayum asked
Rey.."yaar ye vicky...ise abhi neha se milna hai...nd tu janta hai..wo kahan hai...aur mai aa nahi sakta to tuje is ranjhe ki help karni hai..got it!!??"
Swayum in he bhagwaan types expressions on face..and without having any choice he has to do this for vicky..."ya dude i understand...mai aata hoon"
In no time swayum was there with all boys and get to know the reason behind vicky's restlessness so he gonna help him and will do anything vicky to meet neha...
Vicky nd swayum in the car swayum to vicky "jaa wo ander hai...ja k mil le"
Vicky in full tense mode "arrey mil le matlab kya...tu muje milvayega...aur abhi tu hi use bahar le k ayega.."
Without having anychoice "haan ok...but tuje sab yaad hai na...!!??"
Vicky "yeah dude...and ye hai na...pointing towords earpiece...tu call pe hi rehna...ok"
Swayum.."ok...mai use le kar aata hoon"
Swayum at the enterence...he rang doorbell...kaka opens the door...all the girls were in the living roonm and can easily see who is at the door...
Kaka to swayum...ji aapko kisse milna hai???
Swayum lil consious..."Ji...wo..ji.."
"Kon hai kaka...?" sharon asked and turned around and saw swayum standing at door...sharon in uter disbelief...in her mind "god swayum...aaj tumhe ho kya gaya hai...itna stubborn kyu behave kar rahe ho!!??"
Now sharon comes to swayum and asked in vulnerable way.."tum yahan...swayum tum..." before she could complete swayum cuts in between avoiding eye contact..."muje naha se baat karni hai..use bula do.."
Till than all girls came their and act as they saw a ghost!!!
All in unison..."swayum tum yahan...!!??"..glared at sharon as asking for explanation. Sharon stealing glances and try to hide her vulnerablity and try to act normal..."haan tum yahan kuch kaam tha...??" sharon trying her level best.
Swayum to neha..."neha mere sath chalo muje kuch baat karni hai!!"
Neha "neha not cuming...neha want to be her friends.."
All girls in support except sharon nd simmi...yeah dude its a girls night out..so u better be leave says vishakha...yes swayum..waise bhi girls night out me gorl nai hogi to kaise chalega rinni aur uske ajeeb logic... Swayum now gets annoyed..."neha tum mere sath chal rahi ho yaa nahi...?
All girls again in unison..."NO.."
swayum in full angry mode now...(bechara waise hi uske dimag ki dahi ho rakhi thi..nd ab ye girls)...in top of his voice "why dont you girls understand in first time...kyu baatein bar-bar samjhani padti hai tumhe..." all girle were awstruck at his behaviour and why not for the first time they saw swayum stressed out and in frustration...swayum closed his eyes calm him down and apologize to them "m...umm...m really sorry girls...m really i am"
"Its ok dude...are you ok.."
Shoron who witnessed all his frustration but some where she knows this is not jst frustration...its more than pain in his soul...she desperately want to talk to him now.
Swayum till now cooled down and again asked in polite tone "neha plz come with me."
Neha who was still in a shock doesnt had courage to deny him.."ok baba neha comming"
Swayum back to his normal self..with his hand gestures"after you mam!!"
And once again all girls including sharon were in complete shock in a pleasent way as they got their swayun back in normal mode.
Swayum lead her to car and made viha talk and clear their MU's...finally he succeded. Girls who were watching all his efforts to unite viha was adoring him and praising him in every way...listenig this sharon get jealous but some where deep in heart she knew that he is only hers...no matter they are different.. always have missunderstandings...different opinion... Have differen way of looking things...but above all they share a common thing ...their heartbeats...which beats for each other...and the only person in the world she would look for is him, same thing goes with swayum.
Next day they reach khandala...move to thier respective rooms freshen up and came back to get details of the camp. Girls were waiting for boys near cafeteria...suddenly sharons eyes closed with a pair of hand and asking who am i...sharon recognize and introduce her to girls...yes she was sharons cousin Sneha...(guys assume sneha kapoor of DID as her cousin) meanwhile boys also approaching there...as usual nicky bro and bharat amar busy wid their so called topic..."girls"...and reyum having a conversation regarding camp and their performenses...girls who were lost in their prospective love suddenly brought back to reality by sneha's extreeme excitement..."gosh..who is he...his smile is so cute...he is so damn dashing...freak he has dimple as well...sharon hold me m fainting...awwe he is the most hottest guy i have ever seen!!!"
Sharon "yes he is...rey is all in one and u correctly mentioned him with all these adjectives..."
Sneha "ok...his name is rey right...the guy in the black hoody..."and points towards swayum
Sharon "hoody??? No he is in sleeveless jacket...and the guy in hoody is swayum...swayum shekhawat!!!...In mind she cursing god "why always this happens to her...why he made him so damn perfact...why...why...but abhi to wo bohat gussa hai...but its not my fault...i wanted to came but..."
Rey broke her chain of thoughts..."hey sharon...hey girls"
Sharon "hi rey...hi swayum...hey guys back there"
They all greeted each other but for whom sharon waited he didnt wish her...rather he ignored her completely.
Sneha pulling sharon to introduce her with rest of the gang..."ok...ok..leave my hand first...guys she is sneha my cousin from delhi...and sneha...this is amar,bharat,vicky,nilesh oops sry..nil, rey and swayum.."
Sneha to all "hey boys...hw r u??...forwards her hand...hi swayum" swayum lil awkward "hi...ummm...guys i'll catch you all later...mai details pata kar k aata hoon"
Rey "hmm..ok dude..ceya later" Later at night sharon saw swayum...he was sitting in the bench holding his head in hands...he was looking super upset and seems that he is trying to cope with the situation...sharon couldn't resist and went to him...she kept her hand on his shoulder..."swayum..." swayum looks into her eyes, his eyes asking thousands of questions which were unanswered since footlose finale..."swayum i think we should talk!!"
Swayum turn back and only manage to say..."sharon us din mai bhi baat karne aaya tha...and i wanted to clear all the MU's but you didnt come...it hurts alot sharon...and it seems that you dont want me in your life...mai jab bhi tumse baat karna chahta hoon tum... saying this he broke into tears...and he left the place as he couldn't control his emotions.
Three days passed swayum became silent...he used to be alone...on the other side sharon trying hard to make him understand why she wasnt able to be with him that day...she tried to call,msg him innumerous time but all in vain...she also tried to meet him but...
It was last event nxt day...rey,sharon and swayum were in the rehearsal hall. Rest of the gang decides to go for a bonfire.
Rey and sharon done with their practice and swayum practising now...
At very moment Sneha arrived there, in passed few days sneha had a soft corner or i would say she has start feeling for him. Swayum finished his dance and was breathing heavily...sneha bid hi to sharey...and moved straight to swayum..."hi swayum...may i talk to you for while?"
Swayum controling his breath "...yeah..what happend...anything serious?"
"everything is fine...i jus...she gave a look to sharon and signed her that she is gonna confess her feelings for him...wo...mai...i...jus...ki..."
Swayum held her wid shoulder and said "sneha first calm down...and jo bhi kehna hai keh do..." His sweet gesture gave her confidence and and she is ready to let out her heart "ok..hmm...swayum..i dont knw kahan se shuru karu...i mean..i had never met a single person like you in my life...you are sweet, smart, understanding,...you have cutest smile, all in all your are perfact..." she took a pause.. Till now he was shocked...not just shocked he was like how can on earth she can say these things to me...
Sneha cont. "i never-ever thaught that mai ye kisi se kahungi...swayum...i think...i love you!!"
Swayum was in hell shock he couldnt believe what he heard...and was that correct...swayum unable speak...he was dumbstruck!!!
Sneha "swayum...umm..kuch to...kaho..."
Swayum took a step nd reduce the gap, lift his face look straight into her eyes and said "sneha love is not just a word...for me its a commitment...sneha...i..jus...cant!!!"
Saying this he start walking out. "but why...i like you swayum...and i think you also like me than why not...?"
Swayum turn around and answer her back "ofcourse i like u sneha...but i dont love you...shayad love and like mai yahi fark hai...he said this glaring at sharon..."
Sneha "swayum i just dont get it...u like me, i like you than whats the matter?"
All the time sharey remain quite and want to hear from swayum...
Swayum "you really wanna know...fine to suno i really like you and love you also...but as a friend...i never thought like this...and above all i love someone...and will always love her...she is the sole coz for my life..."
Hearing this tears rolled down from sharons eyes...
Sneha broke into pieces...and start walking out...suddenly she stops and ask "swayum is she a dancer??...if yes..to wo yahan bhi hogi...than why she is not with you??"
Swayum had a smile on his face..."sneha for me she is the best...and wo yaha hai...looking into sharons eyes... Sneha uska yahan mera haath thaam k khade hone se jyada jaruri hai, uska yahan mere dil mai hona, meri dhadkan ki tarah...aur wo yahan hai"
Sneha got all her answers she left the place after bidding best wishes to him...
Rey understanding situation left them alone...
Sharon hugged him from back and crying hard...swayum turned to her without breaking hug...held her in his arms and whispers "sharon you are and always will be my life...i love you"
Shron just nodded...they stood their cherrishing the moment...after a while sharon broke the hug and says " swayum am sorry...i want to come that day but..."swyum cuts her in between..."sharon i never ever want
any explaination or justification from you..."
Sharon with teary eyes..."i love you..." swayum sarcastically "and i like you..."
Sharon hits him playfully...and hugs him again.
"C'mon sharon i cant see you in tears...plz smile...smile na...ok smile now my siren sharon" finally swaron smiling in eachothers arm...

i tried to do my level best guys i hope you like it...
do hit like tab and leave your precious comments...
guys dont throw jute, chappals, and tamatars...
instead throw your lappies and cells...
so that i get benifited with mine pathetic writting...

regards...himani
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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

res suki
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himani meri dosth
yaar it was just so very amazing.
Swayam with attitude and sharon
jealous
is something i like. Sharon jealous is
something
I would love, but end mai swayam
pigal gaya na
That is swaron love, so pure and so
intense.
Loved reading each and every
moment of it.
Very proud that you are my frnd.
thanks re you are just super sweet
updater.

Edited by Luvsd3 - 13 years ago

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beeny

@beeny

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

res soon
hii himani
alwayz fantastic d way swayam react & sneha ka part jo shrn ko confesn me kafi help karta he & sharn ka swayam see baatkarne ke liye worried hona all just too good
loved d update & thanx for PM😃

Edited by beeny - 13 years ago