SwaRon os - I want you ❤️ - Page 8

Awesome os...really luved the way swaron's christmas celebration...n then the gift...very well written...keep on writing.

Originally posted by: ShrutikaSwaRon

Awesome os...really luved the way swaron's christmas celebration...n then the gift...very well written...keep on writing.

Originally posted by: shaani2209

lovely one tanuka...loved the way it flowed...and the gift was awesome...

thanks for the pm...

PS: sorry for being late...

Originally posted by: swaron_d3

heya bestie...! heya bestie 🤗

i know you don't need my comment but i still would. I surely want it

you know this witty girl never leaves you alone and never would. enough of my bak-bak! thank god , i never want u to leave my back .

me too love Christmas and according to me it is one of the most romantic seasons apart from rainy season.i loved your song-selection. Sharon was presented without any alteration and that is what i loved most about this OS. also,Swayam was the very same lover boy who was doing his job of convincing his girlfriend. i liked the concept of Sharon being the self-less creature who doesn't want anything but Swayam. Swayam acts too childish at times he would have guessed it long ago that Sharon wouldn't get impressed with those materialistic attempts but by affection. you used the lyrics at the very right place,it played for more of the dialogues itself. and the kiss what to say about it it was just *PERFECT* with the perfect setting, the mood was made and the surrounding had developed, the time was perfect and the companion was more than perfect. loved it!

all in all a cute OS.

P.S:Sorry for the late comment.

Originally posted by: tanukaswaron

I am so glad u liked it ananya .

thanks for such a lovely comment !!

thanks a lot😃

love u

Originally posted by: Anindita91

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look at me after everyone liked n commented n u also replied to everyone's comment...now i am commenting...stupid me...🥺Its okay anindita , u have ur reasons for commenting late and i totally understand .😊

coming to the os😃

awwiee tanuka this os was awesome...👏 loved reading it...😳 Thank u 😃

swaron's nok jhok about choosing the gift was so cute...😃 swayam not understanding what sharon wants n sharon getting angry with him...n finally he understands n then their first kiss...following his marriage proposal to her n her accepting it...just loved it... ☺️⭐️ great work...👍🏼 do write more...all ur dialogues were awesome...👏 loved them...😳 will be waiting for ur next write up...love u🤗

I am glad u loved the OS anindita 😃