SwaRon os - I want you ❤️ - Page 6

Originally posted by: ABBY92

That was a really cute OS !! All I want for Christmas is one of my favourite Christmas songs and to base SwaRon upon that was perfect !! The kiss under the mistletoe was beautiful and AWWHHH on Swayam proposing Sharon !!

Originally posted by: -Jum-RulzZ-

Aww! :D
That was super duper CUTE!
really a great effort was Shown on dis! :D
i liked this OS from the place where she giggles when she was supposed to be angry at him !! :P
Hahhaa..

and..
The last part with the ring was really unexpected! was super Amazing and romantic! :D

Originally posted by: pratik54000

Hey tanuka...this was very good...i loved it...thanks 😃

it was sweet, cute and swaron personafied os..i really enjoyed the sharon pov..she was so cute with all the way...from crying to expressing what she needed sharon was there and outstanding as ever i really liked sharon most in this os... same here 😊

swayam was also fab...he was trying hard to make christmas very special for sharon..and man he worked a lot but i loved his innsence that he was not able to see sharon just wanted to be with him...but he was too sweet all the way down..

the kiss moment was just outstandingly written...a soft passionate kiss...and you had a perfect swaron love moment...just as i thought this will be the moment of the os you came up with another mind blowing moment... i am glad u liked it

that momemnt was the proposal moment...the swayam proposed sharon was just brillient...i mean any girl would have agreed if some body as cute and handsome as swayam proposes her like that...he was just breathtaking with the proposal.. yes swayam is like the perfect guy 😳.and this sums up the moment of the os for me... awwiee 😳

a sweet, cute and swaronish os...loved it...thanks for pm...and do write many more tanuka...
regards and best wishes . thanks for the wishes pratik , i will surely write more .

thanks for such an encouraging comment !!

pratik...

Originally posted by: nature2

beautifully wrtten..fabulus👏

Originally posted by: --Rumeli--

dis is such a beautiful sweet OS!!Sharon wanted deir first spl kiss as her christmas present!sooo cute!i really felt the christman season nearing after reading it!mesmering!loved it!do write more!

Originally posted by: idiot_box

Tanu that was awesome!!loved it re!!Sharon wanted a kiss for Christmas!how adorable is that!!and you used one of my favorite songs!!thank you so much for writing this os!!

Originally posted by: dips098

hey tanu... m still in swaron dreamland 😊...such a romantic , sweet n cute OS 😛...he wants to buy her a gift of her choice for Christmas ... but she wants the gift to be their first special kiss 😳...WOW ...luved it ... 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: frankyfio

awesome

Originally posted by: rk_swaron

👏NYYYCCHHH... well written yar... <3 <3 ❤️ loved it...!!! 👏😊

Originally posted by: swaronilicious

Your poem was damn good yaar

And sharon blushing is a dream come true

Loved this os