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beeny

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Posted: 13 years ago

awsome update loved d wy of describe d date & srprs loved Os pLz keep writing waiting for maggi part Plz PM me whener write 😃
Thanx😃 for pm

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Amrita Sengupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: beeny

nehal might be mil jaye hope & wait k alva kuch nai hi sakta

True that!!We can only keep hoping and keep our fingers crossed and nothing else!!

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chimpukli10

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey nice end..i was thnkng he wuld make her meet his mom..but the teddy bear part was nyc..nd also d dialogue aster dat..

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Sreya Roy

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesomeee update dear...seriously loved it to the core 😃

The way sharon got angry assuming that swayam might have been planning to setting her up with someone else was really cute 😆

Swayam's surprise...hayee that guy is definitely going to kill me someday 😳

U have done an excellent job with the writing part...really well penned down, keep it up 👍🏼

Do write more...I wud really like to read more from u 😊

Sorry for being late...n thanx for the pm 😊

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lalita

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Posted: 12 years ago

it was really a perfect date where sharon confessed her feelings for the first time

i read both the parts together

first part swayam making some bahana n sharon uske ghar aati hai n uske baad usse voh cute vala surprise milta hai

awww

second part starts with sharon doubting swayam but still trusting him was so adorable

"So Bozo gets a hug, and i don't." 🤣

finally they confessed n

ur description was sooo nice :)

i really imagined that cake with their photo on it n my imagination was so cute coz it had swaron together😳

it was really nice to read this os

keep writing more :D

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Neeraj

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Posted: 12 years ago

*super like*😃
😃Amazing os 👏
👏It was soo cute n romantic 😉

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Nivriti

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Posted: 12 years ago

I just read your One Shot!

Dear, it is Amazinggg..!! :D

Keep Writing More and More and Do PM me! ;)

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Rashmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

A dream for SWARONIANS...

👏👏👏👏👏👏

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priyanka/pari

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Posted: 12 years ago

so awesome date

nice os

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Aisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

JUST LOVED IT!!!
A GIRL CANT ASPIRE FOR A DATE BETTER THAN THIS!!!

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