SwaRon OS- The Most Perfect Date

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Posted: 13 years ago
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So this is my first ever OS...and that too on SwaRon!!..in fact its my first ever work in India-Forums...hope you people like it!!

"I can't come to college today...i am not really feeling well."
Yes, Swayam had finally texted. Sharon had been worried about him since morning. he had not called her a single time since morning. He was not even there in college today. Sitting in the rehearsal hall Sharon was just about to call him when his text made her phone beep. "He is not feeling well?does he have fever?why doesn't he ever listen to me?he got wet in the rain even when i asked him not to!obviously he has caught a cold now!! Sharon thought to herself. She was annoyed but beneath that layer of annoyance was concern. "I will go visit him at his place after college" she decided before leaving the rehearsal hall.

At Swayam's place

"The door is open!Kaka is also becoming careless along with Swayam. I really have to do something about it." Sharon said to herself at the door. Slowly she turned the knob and entered. "Oh-em-gee!!!" Sharon exclaimed as she entered. She was overwhelmed with happiness. She had to be. As soon as she opened the door a grand flower shower welcomed her. Red, yellow, white and pink rose petals fell all over her from a basket which had been attached above the door in such a manner that when someone entered through the door he/she would be greeted by this flower shower. Sharon closed her eyes and felt the soft touch with which the rose petals fell all over her. The beautiful smell of the flowers engulfed her surroundings. The floor was covered by all the petals now but Sharon noticed a blue piece of paper amidst them. She picked it up and read aloud what was written in it.
"I hope you liked the flower shower. For more surprises, you are cordially invited to my bedroom...-Swayam."
Sharon's face broke into a huge smile. So Swayam had planned a surprise for her. She was so happy. her boyfriend had planned surprises for her! But what could be more surprising and wonderful than this flower shower? With hundreds of thoughts swarming inside her head, she climbed the stairs. As soon as she reached the door she looked at herself. "Swayam is going to be inside waiting for me. I look sick. I look like a dead person right now. But i have to enter and face Swayam like this only." She took a deep breath and enterd the room.
Swayam was nowhere to be seen. But what she saw touched her heart.The room was decorated with perfumed candles and bouquets of flowers. In his bed, boxes of chocolates were lying-that too her favourite ones-Swiss chocolates! And among the boxes of chocolates was lying a beautiful white dress. The dress was the same dress she had seen yesterday while Swayam was driving her back home from a shop window. Swayam had noticed that. "Swayam Shekhawat you are just too sweet." she said aloud. She then noticed another note lying on the bed. There it was written-
"Sharon you are just perfect. And white is the colour of perfection. So here is a perfect white dress for the most perfect girl in this world!And even if you finish all these boxes of chocolates and gain hundreds of pounds you will still remain the most perfect girl for me.
P.S. I know you want to meet me. But there is someone else who wants to meet you more eagerly. So come to the terrace and meet him.
-Swayam"
So this was the first part..I will update the second/last part very soon...Please leave your precious comments. Criticism is most welcome..And please do hit the like button...and for pms buddy me up!!
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idiot_box thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: chimpukli10

hey its a nice OS dear..liked d startng..nd his way of surprising too..do update it soon..i m eager to know that whom dey r going to meet..also do pm me once you update..i have sent you request..

thanks for liking it!!i have accepted your request..will surely pm you after i update!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Only swayam can think of something like this. Yaar it is superbbb. I lobed it yaar plz update fast. Who is the other person 🤔 neways it is an amazing update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start. Idea of surprise was nicely done. Update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was a really cute update! 😳
I want this to happen in D3...so badly mahn!!
See your OS was this cutee! 😃
Update soon! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey!
This was so good!!
The choice of gifts were really nice!
Swayam knows Sharon SO unbelievably well!
He just knew she would come to meet him if he told her that he was sick!
Great job!
Do update soon.
And please PM me.
And thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good one..
White stand for perfection and swaron r perfect...
Dsnt seem lyk this is ur first one..
Vry well written..
Pls pm me when u update nxt
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh gosh this is soo cute and romantic! 😳 Typical Swayam behaviour ..Our dear Majnu ❤️ Loved it yaar . Pls pm me wen u update next pls pls. Thanks in advance
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Posted: 13 years ago
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pls pm it to me when you update next😛
Posted: 13 years ago
#10
hey amy first of al wuuuhhaaa

me late to comment on ur first os

swayam is unwell awww

i wanna help him ...

but wat to say it was just perfect

secondly t was beautifully presented i loved the surprises he gave to her

now mai kya bolu it was so touching dat i felt kash even i also get some surprises like this

but ths os was also an suprise for me i just loved it

and the flower shower and chocolates

and please next part update karne se pehale tell me

i want to be the first to comment

and i want the update soon please

and who is waiting for her ?

it was amazing, sweet , perfect i just loved it

and finally this 1 for u

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