Sometimes Perfection need to b Imperfect...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Friends...here I am with my First Write - up...A OS on Kriyaansh...

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"Fire Exit"
"yaar , I am so screwed up...I didnt mean to hurt him like that " Rey said Cursing Himself

" It wsnt ur Fault Reyaansh..." Kria ws trying continuously from past half hour...bt it seemed dat he just wsnt going to listen...

"I need to make up to Nil, kya soch rha hoga kria..itti choti si baat k liye daat diya usse" groaning , He once again strtd...

" Reyaansh, listen" turning him to her side , so dat she cud luk in his eyes...The only thing she wants to do...to get lost in a diffent world of theirs...

" look in my eyes" said Kria, while he did so..." Everyone knows that u really do work hard...nd in bw if once or twice u scold him as a Captain so no one will bother...U r and U will be the beastest Frnd ever Rey...Everyone knows dat u r a Perfectionist but u too r a Human, and nt a superhero...and so shit happens...Sometimes Perfection needs to b Imperfect..." she said directly lukin in dose hazel eyes of his...he was lukin so innocently in her eyes dat it seemd to Kria hw lucky she ws to have him...

"Sachi, u r nt lying to me, are u??" he asked as a 5 yr old ...

" Do u think i am?" she said with a confident voice

"But..." he strtd again..
but this tym kria cut him short, " Reyaansh, Shut up...nw dont evn uttr a word till i say..."
She knew he wntd tym to grasp the word she just siad nd so she gave him his space..


After a long silence..

"I think u r right Kria" he said with a confident yet confused voice

" Itti choti si baat k liye , like I just scolded him because he ws nt paying attention to my words, he wont make a fuss out of it..." nw thinking over and over a faint smile appeard on his face fr which Kria ws longing..

" see , I ws Trying to tell u this frm almost 45 mins" she said in a cute voice which melted Rey...

" M sry" he said holding his ears like a kid caught red-handed

"its okay, nw can we join our rest of the friends or else they wud strt wondering where we boht enemies are..."she said with a wink.

Rey ws just staring at his smart yet childish girlfriend without whom he ws sort of pissed...

Kria snapped finger before his eyed which made him come to Earth and gave kria a sheepish smile while his hand ws going thru' the back of his hair ...

"nw lets go..."Kria said with a Wide grin on her Face thinking dat she ws successful in making his boyfriend once again a Normal hunk which he ws rather dan a Devdas which didnt suit him well...

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Hw ws it...even the bitterest Criticism is invited with my hands open...I know it ws a short one...I thought ki jitta chota utta kam risk😉 ...

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Vaish24 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was sweet...''but chhotu the...

pm me when u write more
Black_Stone thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sweet OS
bt itna short...
nt fair
thoda bada nxt tym okk

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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was awesome...loved it very much
and title thats mindblowing
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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M sorry every1...agli bar acha saa bada vala update krungi...😃
Iss bar socha pehli bar likh rai hu faltu risk q lu...bt wid ur encouragement ..lets c hw big will b the othr one...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Diksha97

M sorry every1...agli bar acha saa bada vala update krungi...😃
Iss bar socha pehli bar likh rai hu faltu risk q lu...bt wid ur encouragement ..lets c hw big will b the othr one...😊



ise phir se kheeho ya ise continue karo...mujhe iske aur lamba chahiye
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one😊...but chotu sa tha nxt time bada wala chahiye
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_arsha

it was awesome...loved it very much

and title thats mindblowing
loved it

thank u...and about the title ...it ws impromptu...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was Cute 😃...
Kriyansh are Sweet .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: deetha



ise phir se kheeho ya ise continue karo...mujhe iske aur lamba chahiye



Lets c deetha di...agr I gt any idea in my shaitan dimag ..will surely update (with giving u the credit)...😃

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