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swaronilicious

@swaronilicious

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

One of the best os

Pls pm me lyk dis love ya

And hats off for such a concept

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

@ Shree, Sreya and Swaronilicious - Thank you so much Guys 😳

Edited by Sudha-SK - 13 years ago

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

srously amezing...the unconditional love and swayums wait for her angel was beautifully shown...luvd it sudha

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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

loved reading this OS..

it was a pleasure reading it..it was calm and soothing..

loved sharon when she added "for us" to his line..

she is very strict and don't want him to miss any opportunity which could prove to be fruitful..this reflects her thoughtfulness..

swayam surely have a bright future until and unless he has sharon by her side..

and the poem,mam you did it again..you are a *combo*..you could make a person cry,laugh,blush,hate,love everything at the same time.. hats off to you!

P.S:sorry for the late comment.

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Whoa Sudha!

That was one romantic prose. Nicely written. It had a fairytale-ish feel to it. And you know how I feel about those things.🤔 But the way you've written it saved your grace. Like all your works this one too kept flowing and flowing till the very end.

All of us wonder what their life would be like in the future. How would they cope with their conflicting nature? And here you gave us how their love will outweigh all of their problems and their conflicts. This here is an excerpt from their life when it is at it's best. A period of time where there are no problems for the time being and their life are filled only with love. It's truly prosaic.

The poem is very appealing. Simple yet it managed to convey so much.

Nidhi.

P.S. Just next time put your inverted commas around the dialogues, wouldja? 😆

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Sawyer_Tom
Whoa Sudha!

That was one romantic prose. Nicely written. It had a fairytale-ish feel to it. And you know how I feel about those things.🤔 But the way you've written it saved your grace. Like all your works this one too kept flowing and flowing till the very end.

All of us wonder what their life would be like in the future. How would they cope with their conflicting nature? And here you gave us how their love will outweigh all of their problems and their conflicts. This here is an excerpt from their life when it is at it's best. A period of time where there are no problems for the time being and their life are filled only with love. It's truly prosaic.

The poem is very appealing. Simple yet it managed to convey so much.

Nidhi.

P.S. Just next time put your inverted commas around the dialogues, wouldja? 😆

Thanks, i was saved😳 Well it had to be fairytale-ish as its mostly thorough Swayam's POV and you know the love he holds for his Sharon always has to overpower his senses.

I wanted this one to be real simple, just like Swayam. Happy to know you found this one a tad more romantic then cheesy. About the PS - Will try 😆 I am creating a new style 😉 No seriously i myself don't know whats up with that..when i don't edit or make a conscious effort it always turns our like that Now that u have mention..i guess my lil brain has registered the fact😳

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Luvsd3
srously amezing...the unconditional love and swayums wait for her angel was beautifully shown...luvd it sudha

Thanks Himani 😃

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: swaron_d3
loved reading this OS..
it was a pleasure reading it..it was calm and soothing..
loved sharon when she added "for us" to his line..
she is very strict and don't want him to miss any opportunity which could prove to be fruitful..this reflects her thoughtfulness..
swayam surely have a bright future until and unless he has sharon by her side..
and the poem,mam you did it again..you are a *combo*..you could make a person cry,laugh,blush,hate,love everything at the same time.. hats off to you!

P.S:sorry for the late comment.

Thanks Ananya.

Aww you noticed that when she said "for us" because its was equally painful for her to let him go.

Thanks for liking the poem too, it was just Swayam talking in his very style 😳

and no problem dear, you don't have to be sorry for being late.

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Hey Sudha yet another awesome OS from you...quite romantic i must say. 😊

Love how you kept dere characters as original as possible...Sharon the one who always prefer to hide her feelings and Swayam understanding her golden silence.

I really miss Kria on the show..i never liked kria but damn taani made me miss kria and i feel so happy when Taani is not a part of any SwaRon OS, FF or SS so a big thank you fr not including her.

Swayam's reaction when he saw hsi frndz was funny...thank you for the PM and sorry for commenting so late, was not at all active since past few days. Keep them coming Sudha 😊

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Gargi

@gargicool

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Really a nice and a pleasant read. It was lovely to read SwaRon yearning to be with each other on their anniversary, it was beautifully shown.The poem in the end, was really great, like an icing on the cake. I also liked the title very much. 😳