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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: beeny
hey sudha...😊
it's soo nice ye itna simple & sweet he & love is everywhere soo sweet😊
love OS
poem is also good aap achchhe poet bhi ho👍🏼

Thank you so much 😊

Originally posted by: tanzz15
Rightly said by everyone sudha,i was simple yet very romantic.it had mesmerizing effects & the poem...oh...just outstanding!!!...love your creations always...huggs..;)

Thanks Tania 😊 and *hugs back*

Originally posted by: misha24
The post is just bang on!!!
Thanx fr pm and do write more!!!

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: surbhimathur
It was such a sweet OS sudha...! 😳
Light romance and typical husband wife relation you depicted...not like..swayam gave her a surprise and cancelled the meeting! 😆
you kept it natural! 😊
and it was lovely..! ❤️
The poem in the end was really sweet!! 😃
i hope we get to read sum awesome stuff again..if your time permits! 😳

Thanks Surbhi 😳

Yeah it was close to reality and simple and romantic just like Swayam. and sure will try writing more as and when time permits 😊

Originally posted by: nature2
awwiieee
this was amazing sudha !!

sry 4 late comment😭

Thanks for your comments and no problem dear..

Originally posted by: angelofdeathkav
Sudha I just read It now, It's sooo cute, I loved the way you have written it, the little touches made it a delight to read, keep writing more! 😃 Awesome job!

Thanks Kavi 😃

happy that it made a delightful read and sure will keep writing more 😳

Originally posted by: sw1234
really nice .sharon kab real me i love you kahe gi.kab wo special day aayega.but it was good to see them together in ur ss.

Thank you so much 😊

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Snowey

@Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: sadiakajenian
its awesome! Loved reading it 👏

Thank you 😊

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Thank you for the beautiful rose 😳

Originally posted by: shaani2209
lovely one sudha sorry for being late...thanks for the pm...

Thanks Rosh 😊

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Snowey

@Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: swayamsharon
amazing os!!
nicely wrriten!!
poem is lovely!!!
swayam remind whole journey of swayam-sharon to be swaron loved it!!!❤️
thanks 4 pm

Thanks Shree 😊

Originally posted by: sreya19roy
Awieee sudha 🤗🤗

Ohk I might fumble a lil coz like always I'm again SPEECHLESS...n I completely blame u for this sudha...u r the culprit 😆

Ohk now coming to the OS...This was so so sooo amazing yaar...hayee SwaRon romance

This was such a sweet, simple, romantic OS yet it depicts the love of SwaRon for each other so beautifully 😊

Totally different writing from the previous SS that I read bt my reaction after reading ur work still remains the same as it was after reading "The Sunset" 😊

Again brilliant writing...each n every emotions were beautifully penned down 👏

The friends wala thing that u included was superb n I personally loved it a lot 😃

N obviously how can I forget the poem in the end...it was most definitely the cherry on the cake 😊

such a sweet n cute poem 😊 n these last few lines:
I know I am the worst poet, but by far the best poem ever written is You "My Sharon", My "Siren Shaorn" hayee u killed me sudha 🤗
Super duper like from me dear 👍🏼
ps. I can't believe after writing such a beautiful OS, u thought I won't like it 😲

Sreya 🤗 🤗

Thank you so much for your long comments dear. I feel elated 😳

I know this is poles apart from my SS Sunset, for a change something real simple and romantic like Swayam 😳 thanks for liking the poem as its an integral part of the OS and Swayam's thought.

Originally posted by: swaronilicious
One of the best os
Pls pm me lyk dis love ya
And hats off for such a concept

Thank you 😃

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Snowey

@Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: frankyfio
wow
beautifully written

Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: luvSwaron4ever
what a beautiful OS sudha...

amazing...their beautiful trial relation journey turning into marriage and its their first anniversary...

feel good OS...beautifully written dear

Thank you so much dear 😳

Originally posted by: Satluvsd3
so sorry sudha!!i am the last one i guess!!!!!!!to comment!!
so you will have to bear me yet again!
loved your OS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳
awww
i really had a big smile n was really blushing through out ... amazingly written!!!!!!!👍🏼
can it get any better than this!!!!!!!!!⭐️
amazing job done by you!!!!!!! 👏
enjoyed the part where the driver teases him by saying "bhabhi ji" 😆
loved everything from the part they bid goodbyes to each from the airport scene to flight thoughts to presentation to writing in the journal about his SIREN SHARON!!! 😳 to returning back!! awww loved how they hugged each other and wished!😳 n the 1st best part THE GANG 🤣
and the 2nd best part was when u described swayam's arrangements for his SHARON!!! wonderfull!!wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! loved it !!!!!!
i really couldnt stop blushing n smiling n of course saying awww n walking through their memory lane! 😳😳
an sharon's reaction to the gifts!wooowww
and the 3rd n best of all parts "the poem!"
OMG!!!!!!! sudha u really took my heart away
But by far the best poem
Ever written is
You "My Sharon"
My "Siren Shaorn"
Happy Anniversary.
hayyyeee awww really cute n totally SwaRonlicious!
well done sudha!am sorry again for replying late so sorry!😭
love you alot!!!!!! thanks for giving all of us this OS!!!!!!
and what about your sunset SS!!?? 😭

Thank you so much Satu 🤗

as always i loved your comments and it makes me so happy dear 😃

I am so happy that you could also enjoy the humor along with the simplicity and romance.

I love how you quoted my fav bit of poem, and thanks for liking it re 😳

and SS will soon update..and am really sorry for being late.

Originally posted by: ---Priya---
sudha... this was such a cute OS...
very romantic... simply written.. too good yaar 👏
SwaRon such a cute couple...
Swayam's reaction when he saw his friends 😆 😆 poor swayam... didnt expect them 😆
the poem was fab...

so sorry for being late... was a bit busy 😊

Thanks for your comments Priya, so i see you are back. How was ur trip back home?

hope you had fun 😃 I am happy you liked the humor part very much.

Originally posted by: ShrutikaSwaRon
Very beautifully written...bechara swayam was expecting only sharon at home...but his frnds too turned out to wish them...luved reyam's convo...thnx for pm.

Thanks for your comments dear 😊

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unchainedmelody

@unchainedmelody

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

oh wow...SO wel writn n SOOO beautiful!!

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shikha31

@shikha31

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Good Job Sudha...wow...and d poem Superb...Loved each n evry moment...👏

Edited by shikha31 - 13 years ago

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Snowey

@Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: like.no.other
oh wow...SO wel writn n SOOO beautiful!!

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: shikha31
Good Job Sudha...wow...and d poem Superb...Loved each n evry moment...👏

Thanks 😊

Edited by Sudha-SK - 13 years ago

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

this is so full of romance and true love sudha...i dont know how do you manage to describe the love emotion so perfectly yar...i mean whenever i read the story put by you, i just get lost in the love you create in those stories...you seems to have lots of value for love personally...but whatever may the reason be i just enjoyed reading this os...

thank you for pm...do write more and more...

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swaron_ss

@swaron_ss

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Wow this was just awesome. Thanks to ur writing archive i have many other works of urs to read.

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Another swt nd romantic os f urs.😃..well d os strtd wit d bechara Swayam.😆..who has to leave his lady love nd go fr meetin abroad jst bfore deir weddin...bohut na insafi h...😡dis Swayam z seriously such a pleasure to read..😳.he acts lyk a baby nd doesnt wants to go.😆.but sharon makes him leave...Swayam ws uber cute in dis update..."y r u doin dis to me..."jst adorable...i Luvd how he parted frm deir goodbye kiss immediately.😳...he didn't wnt to linger on it or else it wud hav been mre hard fr him to leave.😉..u gave a pov of Swayam here of deir initial days in relationship...how he thought he had lst her den one day she givs slight entry to her hr8 den d ups nd downs...nycly ptryd👏..i loved sharon's part in d story...how she ws longin fr him...usne bhej to Diya...bt she ws missin him so badly.😆..Luvd how our majnu came runnin to his happy place.😆.d way he hugged sharon on meetin...well kinda expected after d day he had...But but itni jaldi nahi...his frnds came...ws pityin him so much.😃😃..Hahahahaha...🤣v🤣🤣🤣"His eyes raged with anger when he saw villainous faces of his friends smiling in front of him. She elbowed him and he gave a fake smile in return. He mentally called for God, "Why Me" as Rey walked to him and gave a smirk and said, job well done dude, I meant the project, and in turn earned another wrathful look by Swayam."
imaginin his expression i ws roflin.🤣🤣🤣..dey wre really lucky dat Swayam didn't kill dem😲...Luvd d small reyam moment...absolutely adored d lst part...it ws so romantic.😳😳..specially d prt wen sharon kissed Swayam's hand...nd we gt to read another poem frm u..😃.it ws really gud as alwys...plss sudha di..its a request wrte mre poems😊...a gr8 os...a beautiful luvin story...👏⭐️

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