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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
Sudha, as am just abt to go I res.
Will edit soon!
*EDITED*
You write beautifully, so its penned down very well.
I liked the way, somethings you connected with d3, batches and all. The way Swayam was missing Sharon, so much was cute I did say, and when Rey was there it was fun.
On a whole it was romantic, but you love the romantic angle, and describe it minutely, like candle light dinner and stuff in ur earlier works.
I liked the way you have described their characters and Sharon being Sharon, I just don't like the shower stuff much, its just me, I guess, I find bathroom romance bit odd, but it was hardly there, :)
Loved the way u ended with the poem. So presented really amazingly, in short.
Thank you for reminding me with pm, was kinda busy and had forgotten abt it too.
Sorry for the delay.
Madhura..
Edited by Madhura.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
A-H-M-A-Z-I-I-N-G !!!
This was so good!!😊
Man, what an imagination !!
CV's shud seriously learn to excute SwaRon's story in this very manner !!

This was really beyond awesome \m/
Very well Crafted.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
One of the most awesomest os ever!so beautifully written..simple yet so sweet..and i loved the poem!!It was not cheesy!!it was romantic!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ok
res for now...!!
love u sudha🤗 4 giving us just beautiful OS n SS n yes not to 4get poems!!😳😉
😉

edited!!

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3167549&TPN=8
Edited by Satluvsd3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
*Reserved*
Will edit later Sudha, have tons of work pending.
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Sudha, its an ethereally beautiful OS with an excellent poem and a perfect title .Loved each and every bit of it. Swayum's POV was superbly penned down. Thanks for giving us dis. A bit cheesy but isn't Swayum damn cheesy at times even in D3? Keep writing more.
Edited by nikita_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Sudha it was really beautifull os
The way u described swayam's emotion was amazing n lastly the poem just loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
whoa!!!
it was a cute..very cute OS!! loveed it..👏
i love reyam.. they are the best.. after swaron... 😊

Awesome sudha... 🤗
Edited by Nehal92 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sudha ur os's r too luk forward for...never disappoiting...super cute swaron...d way dey both missed each other was sooo cute...😊😊thank u for d pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This was truly beautiful !!! Loved Swayam's reaction when he was forced to leave for the meeting and when he came back home to find everyone at home with Sharon !!! The poem in the end really touched my heart and was perfect for SwaRon !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
Sudha It Ws Beautiful 🤗
Well Written 😳

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