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heya guys!!!!!!!!!!!!! finally u can read my works...
are u happy?????//
glad????//
excited????
sad???????
chalo jo bhi ho im gonna wite it...and haa its a os...
i mean updates abhi de nahi sakti...
and wish me luck guys...kal mera performance...
kk...now u can start reading...
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"kriya ...i love u...mai mar jaunga baatcutter agar tum mujhe chod ke jayegi...plzz...aisa kyun kar rahi ho...mere pyaar mei kuch kami hai kya?? agar sach mei tumne jo abhi kaha wo sach hai toh...toh i think i cant take it anymore..."he said...a drop traced down his cheek...he walked back looking at her...and hit the window which he uses to get in...and swayed himself back looking at her and fell down...
"REY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"she sat on the bed...totally wet in sweat...her lips shivering...she looked here and there...she said that she used him a long back and now in dehradun...she closed her eyes tight...took a deep breath...stood up and walked to her window...stood facing her back to the window just lyk him in hr dream...she was abt to sway back when
"baatcutter"she heard him...she looked up...there he stood opening his arms for her...she as soon as she saw him was in his arms...he hugged her very tight...
"we will become one again baatcutter...cant u wait for me sometym???? aisa thodi ki mai kisi aur ki hojaunga...chahkar bhi ho nahi sakta...kyun pata hai?????/ "he spoke in her ear...
she pulled back and nodded no...
he bent down close to her and kissed her on her heart which was on race now...and then pulled back and placed his index finger thre...
"im prisoned here...aajadi mile tab na kisi aur se pyaar karoonga??????"he said...a smile took place on her lips...he bent in to kiss her...she closed her eyes...but no never their lips met...she opened her eyes...he was not there...it was just her imagination...
she fell on the ground and tears were taking their place when she remembered his words...cant u wait for me...she felt happy even if it was just imagination...she wiped her on the way tears and went to bed smiling wide and dreaming abt him...
next morning she got up...today was her big day...she can make herself preoccupied...they were gng on a clg trip...to ooty...
she took her bag...placed his coat...and the gifts given by him...and packed her clothes...and had breakfast with her mother and left to clg...
finally!!!!!!!!!!!!!
she said and got down the bus...they were told where to go...she walked front alone while rest were talking and cmng slow...
"kriya ruko na yaar..."her friend shouted...she turned her head back walking...
"thak gayi yaar baad mei baat..."she hit someone...
and both fell back...
she on the person;...the person wrapped his arms just to balance both and the person on him to be safe...she cltuched his shirt and dug her face in his chest...
"bhagwan ji "she started her chanting but soon the persons arms flew away rom her...she looked up...he was there looking at her shocked...he was hurt...she can easily say that...
but as soon as he saw her a smile appeared...a hope raised...he was abt to wrap his arms when she tried to get up...but fell on him more such that his lips touched her cheek ...he held her tight ...he heard her gasp...
and stood up...she soo released herself and ran away...
days passed...she almost saw him every where with the whole gang...
one day she was gng to the garden by the pool side when some of her crazy friends pushed her into the water as she was being moody always...but she ended ri8 on him making both into the water and then back to surface...
the whole gang was shocked...they were just praying everything becomes ri8...
(pool scene yaad haina...bas waise hi khade hai)
she was abt to move back...when he caught her wrists and pulled her to him...her new friends starred with hanging mouths...
she remembered evrything...
he leaned in...but lyk before she stepped back...but now he pulled her by waist...
" cant u start loving me if i love u more than before?????"he asked...
she was surprised...
"i cant live without u baatcutter"he said and tear was on edge of his eye...
but before he could shed a tear rolled down her cheek...
"i always loved u...just lyk u did..."she said...
he was shocked...he took a deep breath...he leaned more and took her lips in his...
it was a very soft kiss...
every one looked away and walked away feeling awkward...
he was pulling her more into him and kissed her...
she was just responding to him softly totally surrndering her to him...to their surprise they were in somewat the same dresses as before...his hands traced her waist...she cluthed his coat...and pulled him more to her...they kissed eachother giving a secs of intervals in b/w...his hands moved down to her thys and cluthed them and pulled her up...she wrapped her legs around hi waist and kissed him again...finally they pulled back...she looked down at their positionshe was abt to get down when he gathered her in his arms and led her to his room...the gang who wer in the garden...were shocked to see him take her to his room...
he took her in and closed the door and windows everything such that none can hear or see them...
there she sat frrzed to place...where he placed her...she was on his bed...fully drenched and water dipping fron her dress...she was pulling her dress continuosly down ...but soon he flopped on the bed sitting on his knees before her...he took her hands into his and settled himself comfortable and asked her never breaking the eyelock...
"if u loved me this much...toh chod ke kyun gayi?????"he asked...
she looking into his eyes ans hipnotised said everything with out any emoction...
soon she was in his arms...
"im ri8 kriya...mai hamesha soch ta tha ki we will be together one day but have to wait...aur itna confident kyun hun pata hai???????/"he qsned her...
she pulled back and nodded no...
he bent down and kissed on her heart...
"u prisoned me here...toh mai tumhare alawa kuch soch sakta hun kya?????"he asked...
she was shocked...
"aap mere ghar aate the kya????? she asked...
"wat?đ"he asked confused...she explained...
"oh...shit mai har kaam half mei yun chodta hun????"
now she was confused but soon he kissed her with all his might showing how he missed her and how he felt after knowing the truth...she too responded...
but suddenly he juped out of bed...said her to get ready to pack her stuff...
she asked why but he said..."baatcutter ab toh mat kaato meri baat jaldi jao...i will be in 15 mins kk..."he said entering washroom...
she went out confused but to do what he said...
all were standing out to tease them...but she was too confused and she passed them...they didnt get why she was confused...
but after 10 mins rey was out...all caught him...he said the truth...swayam cried hard coz of them she did thi much...
"no swayam...never ...ab sirf khush rahenge...she deserves to be happy guys c'mon"sharon said...
all agreed with her...all just wiped the bitter part of their lives...and asked rey why is she confused...he told them something...
and all went away...after 20 mins kriya came out with her bag...bid bye to her friends and came to rey...but was shocked to see the whole gang with their bags...
"ab hume jaldi jaake meri sasuma ko mana na hai iski dance keliye...i soo badly wanna dance with her..."rey said...
"haa toh chaolo wo aa bhi gayi dekh kya raha hai???????"all said...
kriya looked at everyone but hr eyes struck to her best friend...
"swayam tum mujhse naraz...
"kriya hume jaldi nikal na hai...bus mei baat kare?????/chalo..."he said...
all made their way to the bus...kriya stood they confused...
rey took her hand into his...she took her bag...and he too and both walked to the bus hand in hand...if truely said tll her house...
bas aage ka khud sochlo...
hope u liked it...
are u happy?????//
glad????//
excited????
sad???????
chalo jo bhi ho im gonna wite it...and haa its a os...
i mean updates abhi de nahi sakti...
and wish me luck guys...kal mera performance...
kk...now u can start reading...
**************************************************************
"kriya ...i love u...mai mar jaunga baatcutter agar tum mujhe chod ke jayegi...plzz...aisa kyun kar rahi ho...mere pyaar mei kuch kami hai kya?? agar sach mei tumne jo abhi kaha wo sach hai toh...toh i think i cant take it anymore..."he said...a drop traced down his cheek...he walked back looking at her...and hit the window which he uses to get in...and swayed himself back looking at her and fell down...
"REY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"she sat on the bed...totally wet in sweat...her lips shivering...she looked here and there...she said that she used him a long back and now in dehradun...she closed her eyes tight...took a deep breath...stood up and walked to her window...stood facing her back to the window just lyk him in hr dream...she was abt to sway back when
"baatcutter"she heard him...she looked up...there he stood opening his arms for her...she as soon as she saw him was in his arms...he hugged her very tight...
"we will become one again baatcutter...cant u wait for me sometym???? aisa thodi ki mai kisi aur ki hojaunga...chahkar bhi ho nahi sakta...kyun pata hai?????/ "he spoke in her ear...
she pulled back and nodded no...
he bent down close to her and kissed her on her heart which was on race now...and then pulled back and placed his index finger thre...
"im prisoned here...aajadi mile tab na kisi aur se pyaar karoonga??????"he said...a smile took place on her lips...he bent in to kiss her...she closed her eyes...but no never their lips met...she opened her eyes...he was not there...it was just her imagination...
she fell on the ground and tears were taking their place when she remembered his words...cant u wait for me...she felt happy even if it was just imagination...she wiped her on the way tears and went to bed smiling wide and dreaming abt him...
next morning she got up...today was her big day...she can make herself preoccupied...they were gng on a clg trip...to ooty...
she took her bag...placed his coat...and the gifts given by him...and packed her clothes...and had breakfast with her mother and left to clg...
finally!!!!!!!!!!!!!
she said and got down the bus...they were told where to go...she walked front alone while rest were talking and cmng slow...
"kriya ruko na yaar..."her friend shouted...she turned her head back walking...
"thak gayi yaar baad mei baat..."she hit someone...
and both fell back...
she on the person;...the person wrapped his arms just to balance both and the person on him to be safe...she cltuched his shirt and dug her face in his chest...
"bhagwan ji "she started her chanting but soon the persons arms flew away rom her...she looked up...he was there looking at her shocked...he was hurt...she can easily say that...
but as soon as he saw her a smile appeared...a hope raised...he was abt to wrap his arms when she tried to get up...but fell on him more such that his lips touched her cheek ...he held her tight ...he heard her gasp...
and stood up...she soo released herself and ran away...
days passed...she almost saw him every where with the whole gang...
one day she was gng to the garden by the pool side when some of her crazy friends pushed her into the water as she was being moody always...but she ended ri8 on him making both into the water and then back to surface...
the whole gang was shocked...they were just praying everything becomes ri8...
(pool scene yaad haina...bas waise hi khade hai)
she was abt to move back...when he caught her wrists and pulled her to him...her new friends starred with hanging mouths...
she remembered evrything...
he leaned in...but lyk before she stepped back...but now he pulled her by waist...
" cant u start loving me if i love u more than before?????"he asked...
she was surprised...
"i cant live without u baatcutter"he said and tear was on edge of his eye...
but before he could shed a tear rolled down her cheek...
"i always loved u...just lyk u did..."she said...
he was shocked...he took a deep breath...he leaned more and took her lips in his...
it was a very soft kiss...
every one looked away and walked away feeling awkward...
he was pulling her more into him and kissed her...
she was just responding to him softly totally surrndering her to him...to their surprise they were in somewat the same dresses as before...his hands traced her waist...she cluthed his coat...and pulled him more to her...they kissed eachother giving a secs of intervals in b/w...his hands moved down to her thys and cluthed them and pulled her up...she wrapped her legs around hi waist and kissed him again...finally they pulled back...she looked down at their positionshe was abt to get down when he gathered her in his arms and led her to his room...the gang who wer in the garden...were shocked to see him take her to his room...
he took her in and closed the door and windows everything such that none can hear or see them...
there she sat frrzed to place...where he placed her...she was on his bed...fully drenched and water dipping fron her dress...she was pulling her dress continuosly down ...but soon he flopped on the bed sitting on his knees before her...he took her hands into his and settled himself comfortable and asked her never breaking the eyelock...
"if u loved me this much...toh chod ke kyun gayi?????"he asked...
she looking into his eyes ans hipnotised said everything with out any emoction...
soon she was in his arms...
"im ri8 kriya...mai hamesha soch ta tha ki we will be together one day but have to wait...aur itna confident kyun hun pata hai???????/"he qsned her...
she pulled back and nodded no...
he bent down and kissed on her heart...
"u prisoned me here...toh mai tumhare alawa kuch soch sakta hun kya?????"he asked...
she was shocked...
"aap mere ghar aate the kya????? she asked...
"wat?đ"he asked confused...she explained...
"oh...shit mai har kaam half mei yun chodta hun????"
now she was confused but soon he kissed her with all his might showing how he missed her and how he felt after knowing the truth...she too responded...
but suddenly he juped out of bed...said her to get ready to pack her stuff...
she asked why but he said..."baatcutter ab toh mat kaato meri baat jaldi jao...i will be in 15 mins kk..."he said entering washroom...
she went out confused but to do what he said...
all were standing out to tease them...but she was too confused and she passed them...they didnt get why she was confused...
but after 10 mins rey was out...all caught him...he said the truth...swayam cried hard coz of them she did thi much...
"no swayam...never ...ab sirf khush rahenge...she deserves to be happy guys c'mon"sharon said...
all agreed with her...all just wiped the bitter part of their lives...and asked rey why is she confused...he told them something...
and all went away...after 20 mins kriya came out with her bag...bid bye to her friends and came to rey...but was shocked to see the whole gang with their bags...
"ab hume jaldi jaake meri sasuma ko mana na hai iski dance keliye...i soo badly wanna dance with her..."rey said...
"haa toh chaolo wo aa bhi gayi dekh kya raha hai???????"all said...
kriya looked at everyone but hr eyes struck to her best friend...
"swayam tum mujhse naraz...
"kriya hume jaldi nikal na hai...bus mei baat kare?????/chalo..."he said...
all made their way to the bus...kriya stood they confused...
rey took her hand into his...she took her bag...and he too and both walked to the bus hand in hand...if truely said tll her house...
bas aage ka khud sochlo...
hope u liked it...
Kumkum Bhagya
Anupamaa
