SwaRon OS THE OTHER DAY last part! - Page 8

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Wow ananya! 👏
wondeful ending..👍🏼
i am really sorry for being late!
i just read the first edited part and the last too!
both were awesome...i loved how sharon kept swayam's image in his hands throughout the night..and even while talking to rey! 😳
swayam in tuxedo!
the whole swaron convo was adorable and funny too! 😳

sharon did all those things that swayam did!!
swayam likes physics!! poor sharon!! 😆
an awesome update from an truly awesome writer! ⭐️
keep writing more! 😊

Originally posted by: tanukaswaron

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ANANYA 🤗

the last part was amazing !!

beautifully written 👏

the sharon and reys convo was really nice and that talk was the final push sharon required to accept her true feelings for swayam.😊

the emtions of sharon when she got to know that swayam is back was very well described.

totally loved sharons confession and it was fantastically written .☺️

intotal this was an awesome os ananya.😃

thanks for the PM.

will be waiting for ur future works on swaron...

tanuka,my bestie 🤗i'm glad you liked it.i had a hard time writing the confession..! your comment means a-lot to me!

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK

RES for now. Going out now..will soon edit it 😳

Ananya beautifully written my gal 👍🏼

The starting part with Rey and Sharon's convo was effectively written, though Rey did not say much, he gave the final push Sharon needed. The moment she gets to know he is back, all the emotions that rushed through her were beautifully put and i like how close to reality it is knowing Sharon would react the same way. She creating the same environment to finally open her heart to him was a nice touch. and then the confession was the best..very true to both Swayam and Sharon as an individual character. Loved all the lil touch you gave, about the camera,his hair even the ice cream part and newtons 3rd law. And yeah i like physics too 😳

Super awesome OS ⭐️

thank you so much,sudha. i tried my best and am glad you liked it. well,i like physics too. sometimes studies are fun.

Originally posted by: Rutu

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I liked the initial ShaRey bonding. Rey did his bit to make her realize (But we know she was aware of this fact). But Rey made her confess. Good job done there.

The kind of emotional turmoil she had there , beautifully described. Sharon then making arrangements to tell him her feelings was nicely done. You nicely got reference of flowers there, considering the use of same in actual scene!! But of course in different context. Then the way she said how she missed him was again beautiful.

Good job Ananya!!

PS: Swayam's fav subject is physics. He is a genoius then😆

he sure is a genius...our geek-swayam.thank you for the comment.

Originally posted by: reet_26

Awesome

thank you

Originally posted by: beeny

hey anannya 😊
itna bada ek sath grt he ji...
me jyada nai likh sakti & wo bhi itna sara ek hi waqt pe & wo bi itna interesting...😃
u were amazing...loved whole d update...whole d part as swayam once told dat iss baar 1st step wo legi & u did it with whole love .
just love whole d moment & update,😊👍🏼 love it
👍🏼 & dis for u & ur brilliant update

Originally posted by: swayamsharon

awsum!!!
totally, i loved it!!!
sharon opened her heart out❤️...
sharon reading physics book in swayam memory, aaww..
tears in both eyes & swaron hug, perfect lovely ending!!!