SwaRon OS THE OTHER DAY last part! - Page 7

AWESUM OS THANX FR PM😆SHARON QUITE AMAZING IN UR OS

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U hav written d update beautifully. After reading d update i am in love with sharon. She watched movies ate tubs of choco chip icecream n d best part was d newtons third law. Their love surely proved dat every action has an equal n opposite reaction

Luved d part wen swayam embraced her in a hug he would have been waiting for it since ages
I also luved sharey's bond in d begginig
N for sharon i have no words u described in a way dat anyone could fall for her
Her each n every action reflected d pain she had gone through
I know d my words are less to describe your update
But sereously i whole heartedly luved d update

Sharey convo was really good indirectly rey want sharon to accept her love in front of him
Then sharon decorate the same place in same way where last time she broke his heart n now she confess her love for him there
I really loved how sharon open her heart n tell everything she feel n how she live without him for 6 months
N that ice cream,hair n physics part was really cute...
Awesome update ananya...:)

Awesome os ...really liked how sharon conffesed her feelings to swayam...n even luved her inclusion of newton's law in ur writing...thnx for pm.

anu...
dis part was damn amazing!!!
the whole scenario, farewell party, sharon' s talk wid sayam... till the end it was perfect to the tee!!!

Originally posted by: -Jum-RulzZ-

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wow! A bang on Super duper spectacular Update, Really loved it! i so wish you continued but! sadly its the end, It was an amazing end though.. You expressed sharon's grief and lamentations perfectly, and what can i say? your an amazing and a Romance-giving writer! I Seriously Felt everything over here, by the way, To tell the official truth, the most impossible and the most Toughest step on writing the OS/SS/FF is that Making the readers Feel the words you have penned down, And YOU WON it! You won my heart for this BEAUTIFUL Update, AND im PROUD of being the 1ST to comment on this! and what the hell!?! sorry if its long?? Gal.. i wanted to read more and more as i was carried away on this, i never wanted it to end, I Wanted it to proceed even more further, and why did you had to end it like that, Awww! now that was super cute, sharon talking about the camera and all.. Hope they 2 in dis OS gets married and remain together like that in the last part! hugging and cuddling each other, loved all your works till now! and this was one among the BEST SS i have ever read, i dont know but, i feel that this was the most Touching Update of any OS/SS because showing sharon's point of view is Mostly impossible and rare to find anywhere, And i feel Happy reading this, Especially after when sharon misses him the most in 6 months! and clutching his frame the whole 6 months! aww! and i also liked the first ShArEy part! :) was nice and beautiful friendship was prescribed here...
And secondly, i seriously wish to see more works of yours, as im upto commenting your "one way" ss, im writing it down after here, I Seriously LOVED reading this OS firstly, and on the first update of yours on this OS which left a cliffhanger, Made me more curious to know whats next ! whats next ! Mainly since its always at the time of crucial parts! and den i go :- "Oh man! When will u update now!" i feel like as if i lost a hundred dollars without buying anything! is my reaction to whenever i see the update End! now also i feel the same.. and wish could read more of this, as i could seriously get to know swayam's Point of view also, His happiness, His way of Expressions and definitely i want to know because its our "Majnu" bhai who loves her more then anything and when she confesses her love to him then There has to be more of swayam! Well, the hug was cute,
I Loved the hug, and it was alot beautiful when he returns after 6 months and loved the way you portrayed on coming back to the place where sharon said that she is comfortable with the book shut, Ok now i seriously wish to see this on TV! and this was an amazing usage of vocabularies to! it was perfectly Enhancing the Interest to read further, and what more can i say darling?
Your works till date has always made me speechless, and sometimes with other writers i feel their words and when they arent at any moods to update and somebody keeps bugging them to "Update.. Update.." the writers gets confused and sometimes the path wasnt going good for them after an outstanding update! and gets frustrated..
But in your works! most of them i feel them and None goes wrong!! thats what i love bout reading your work! and spend my whole time spamming on ur Threads! :) and will also on This if you are still willing to proceed it further and not leave it with the last hug! the last hug was perfect, but it made me want to know more about whats gonna happen next! i am DARN curious to know whats going to happen next,
What can be swayam's reactions?
Will they ever be together? since its their last day of college and the last party!
Will they marry? ok! i know i might be asking some abnormal questions but, Hey i dont know why but this SS has lead me to the path of where im Enhancing the ideas and protruding my brain to think even more! i dont know why !! But, for some reason im still meandering about it! Wish you still updated 2 more Updates.. with swayam's point of view and
they're New Relationship.. and wish you end it with a nice marriage!
😛 ok! ok! i know.. i know.. im getting alot FILMY !! but.. hey! its not my fault! its a person known as "Ananya's" fault for making me fall in LOVE with this SS!
😳 Hope this comment is big enough for yu 😛

amazing update