:: Her Persistent Ex ::|A kriyansh Os |Last CH Pg9

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<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Hey guys dis iz my first os !
And yes the idea iz taken from a short story written by Sarah O'Hara !
NOTE: Dis iz totally diffrent frm D3 !

|Chapter 1|
"I don't know why he keeps calling me Karan!" Kria paced around
her living room as she thought. Karan was seated on the couch.
"I know why, it's because you won't tell him to stop! It's not
normal for an ex-boyfriend to call every week like clockwork Kria
Surely you know that, I know that. That's why it bothers me! He
obviously wants something from you." Kria stopped her pacing and sat
down on the couch.
"Every time he calls I feel like I'm betraying us somehow, even
though I'm not. Reyansh always seems to be holding something back
from me when I speak to him" she mused. "You're right, I should
figure out what's going on and put a stop to it." She turned her
head to look at Karan. He smiled back. Kria sighed heavily. "I didn't
realize it had become a problem, I'm sorry."
"It's ok, I know it's not easy for you, but for our sake we need
Reyansh to back off so we can move forward. I don't mind if you
have him as a casual friend, but right now he seems to be wanting
more than that from you and it concerns me." Karan said
Kria just nodded .They were both quiet for a time. Karan whispered
To Kria. "I have to go now honey."
"Ok, I'll see you later" Karan stood up and stretched, then found
his coat and left the apartment through the front door. Kria leaned
back on the couch and threw her forearm across her forehead.
Kria Ghai had been dating Karan Shakhawat for the better
part of two months before her ex-boyfriend, Reyansh Singhania had
butted into her life again. Kria made sure the phone calls only came
once a week and stayed platonic but Karan was not happy with the
situation and their discussion was the product of their recent
frustrations
He was coming between Kria and Karan's relationship and Kria found
no other solution but to tell Rey to stop calling her. Kria was
not looking forward to it.


So here is the end of chapter 1 !
Should i continue it !??
Plzz give me ur Reviews n Critiscm is Allowd !
Like n Commnt ! 😳
n ya BUDDY ME for pms !
P.S i knoe dis was short but chapter 2 will b big ! I PROMISE !</font>




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Posted: 13 years ago
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INDEX

chapter 1- Page 1

Chapter 2- Page 4

Chapter 3- Page 9



********************THE END********************
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW !! i love it !! continue jaldi !! this was very small !!
and oh my kria and karan dating :O
and rey her EX !?!?!?!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dis is great yaar ...

karan nd kriya dating :OOO

rey ex..@@

ok ...stry line is gng great nd offcourse u need to cont.. nd pm me :D


ps: one question at last kriya will go back to rey rite ? 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujana9

dis is great yaar ...

karan nd kriya dating :OOO

rey ex..@@

ok ...stry line is gng great nd offcourse u need to cont.. nd pm me :D


ps: one question at last kriya will go back to rey rite ? 😕

FOR DIS U HVE TO READ DIS !😉
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Originally posted by: aashi_arsha

FOR DIS U HVE TO READ DIS !😉


chal ok cool..but i wish she ends wid him 😆😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome start.continue soon n plzz pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing do continue n pm me
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awsm do continue and pm me too
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GUYS PLZ BUDDY ME TO RECEIVE PM !

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