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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Didn't knew that Sharon had Tom Riddle's Diary 😆. But jokes apart beautifully compiled. All the emotions , vulnerabiltiy and insecurties of Sharon could not have been better expressed. I have one complain though how did you missed the Shivam party fiasco. That is one hell of a turning point for Sharon. Loved the style of narration . Something innovtive and awesome.

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Beautifulll sudha, you have analysed sharon so well, Poor sharon, I just cant imagine what will happen today. Khair chodo, AS ususal it is just mindblowing.I love to read from sharons pov, you have taken into even the minute details of their love. Supberbbb. Loved it. Thanks.

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Snowey

@Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: varoo28
awesome awesome write up Sudha !! you have totally justified Sharon's character !! u gave her a meaning (not like the 1 in show ) very nice update :))

Thanks dear :)

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: meevee
Hey Sud...why is it that everytime you write sumthing, I invariably happen to stumble upon it - much much before u make it evident...luv u for this one - u breathed life into that diary - cum to think this is one song I had been carrying in my mind the whole time since I had seen that precap from last week abt Swayam saying "mujhe akela chod do" and that look on her face then...that lost, guilt-ridden & dejected one - lost as to what to do next, guilt-ridden that she had hidden facts from him and dejected as to why this keeps on happening to them - to summarize, this OS was a need of the hour and an ode to the Sharon we luv - iHappy!!!!

Hey Meera 🤗

Its destiny that you can't run from..you have to read all my works 😃 😉

Thanks for liking and commenting. I felt the song goes with Sharon's feeling for now. So decided ot write something around it. Glad that it made you happy :)

iThanks !!

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Ritu_Cool_2197
Awesome Sudha...loved it!!

Thanks Ritu :)

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: kritzzz_ArSha
nice os

Thanks Dear :)

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Madhura

@Madhura..

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Sudha, u seem on os spree!

This was beautiful, made a mast read, and you penned down Sharon's thoughts well connecting with d3!

Thanks for pm.

PS I will read ur other os soon!Just dont wanna reserve, as I miss out to unres.

Madhura..

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Anindita91
awesome os sudha...loved it...u gave life to sharon's diary...that's amazing...u have described the journey of sharon beautifully...awesome work...keep writing more...thanx for the pm...

Thanks Anindita, i am happy that you could relate to Sharon's journey. Thanks for liking it.

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booksfreak07

@booksfreak07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Excellent recapitulation of all the swaron have been through. An enjoyable read.
The line about pain tearing your soul apart was fantastic. Keep writing such awesome stuff.

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Snowey

@Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: tanukaswaron
amazing os sudha !!
fantastically written 👏
i really felt someone who knows sharon from in and out other than swayam was talking and telling us the pain and the things she felt after each major event in life regarding swayam.
amazing job done sudha , u actually gave life to sharons diary .😃
it was so good to read sharons inner feelings in this os , because we are always devoid of a sharon pov in d3 .😊
love u for writing this , a big hug 🤗
keep these fabulous os's coming...

Hey Tanuka,

thanks yaar, your comments brings a big smile on my face. yeah i gave life to Sharons diary 😆

thanks for liking it. a big hug to u too 🤗

Will sure try writing more :)