SwaRon OS: Everytime We Touch I Get This Feeling

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ok guys i know sabki halat kya hai after seeing the promo and so badly want SwaRon to kiss par aisa hone se raha so i thought to write an OS atleast usme muje jo karana hai kara sakti hu... and thanks to Sakina foe motivating me... vhalu ab meri bak bak bandh enjoys reading...




SwaRon OS: Everytime We Touch I get this feeling


She was passing through the empty corridor with her tear strained face, tears still flowing down her cheeks endlessly. Today, she felt as if she was betrayed, betrayed by someone who is… "who is what???" she yelled at herself. Never in her dreams she could think of swayam doing this to her. First of all he cheated along with his disgusting cousin, edited her dance video so that she can be selected as the sixth dancer and then trying to buy me with those dancing shoes again and this time giving them to me through Rey. I always thought he wanted me to dance… live my dream… I always thought that even if the whole world does not care about me or hates me, there is one person who will always stand by me, love me for what I am, but NO I was wrong… I was so wrong… Yesterday after seeing the Sharon corner in his cupboard my opinion for him had definitely started changing but NO… Iwas such a fool to even think that I am special for him. I, I was just a victim, victim of his dirty fantacies…

That's when she felt a strong muscular grip around her wrist. He judt grabed her hand and pulled her into an old empty classroom. He had pulled her and thrown her with a a great force that she almost lost her balance. He held both her hands too tight so that she cannot leave before he completes wat he had to say. Sharon with all her might tried to free herself from his grip but no use. She kept struggling avoiding a direct eye contact. His eyes were bloodshot, cold and filled with hatred instead of that pure and intense love see always used to see there…

Sh: How dare you touch me *still struggling* leave me . I said

Sw: Niche sabke samne toh bahot kuch bol rahi thi… ab bolo na… I am listening. Kya kaha tha tumne I am cheap, disgusting… I used you for my so called dirty fantacies

Sh:That's what you are… and that's what you did…

Sw: I swear Sharon tum sachem experience nai karna chahogi mere dirty fantacies ko…

Sh: *struggling and avoiding looking into his eyes*

He held her chin up and made her look into his eyes forcefully. She could feel the pain and hurt in his eyes…

Sw: me chahu toh ek minute me tumhe pana bana sakta hoon

This sentence literally scared the hell out of Sharon… she knew swayam aisa nai hai but he was not in his senses to think straight. Sharon had almost stopped struggling… she knew what was coming her way… so she sighed and slowly closed her eyes as if to give in to swayam…. Swayam's face moved closer to her… At a point their lips were almost touching… there was no distance left between them at all. She could his hot breath on her face she was ready when suddenly felt his face going away she slowly opened her eyes to find swayam standing two feet away from her…

Sw: you were actually ready to give in… woooaahhh lekin main tumhari tarah cheap nai hu ki muh utha ke kisi ko bhi kiss kardu

Sharon was shocked on hearing what he had just said…

Sw: pehle RDX sir ki party me you were ready to kiss me… then shivam ki party me shivam ko aura b vo chala toh phir se me… Miss Sharon Raiprakash lagta hai ladko ko kiss karna tumhari hobby hai… ab tak kitne ladko ko kiss kar chuki ho???

His words shot draggers into her heart… she felt as if someone has punched a deep hole into her heart…

Sh: you knew, you knew… tumhe kaise pata mere aur shivam ke beech… , she murmured her knees felt so weak that she fell down on the floor on her knees… Her tears were not ready to stop…He went upto her and held her by her shoulders tightly and made her get up and said

Sw: stop Sharon stop ab yeh fake tears wont work for me…

He released her but hos grip was so tight that he left their marks on her shoulders… he was just about to when when Sharon clutching him from his collar, pulled him towards her and just crashed her lips upon his. Swayam was in a state of shock. He just couldn't digest what Sharon just did… but he actually responded he was out of breath but Sharon did not leave his lips…. She kept kissing him vigorously Their lips moulded into one… Sharon pulled him closer to her… pressing their bodies… he was literally on her and she was crashed between him and the wall… atlast when she was out of breath she left his lip… both were breathing heavily…

Slowly Sharon opened her eyes

Sh: tum janna chahte the na ki ab tak me kitne ladko ko kiss kar chuki hoon… well this was my very first one and I truly meant it…

Sw: Don't you dare lie to me Sharon…. I have seen you and shivam kissing…

Sh: well I bet you just saw him trying to kiss me

Sw: uske aage mujme dekhne ki koi himmat nai thi…

Sh: well don't worry uske aage kuch hua bhi nai th… so you dint miss much… When he tried to kiss me all I could see was the moments I have spent with you and so I just him and left… par aaj jo kuch bhi tumne mere saath kia hai na…

Sw: what the hell did I do???

Sh: tumne apni cousin ke saath milke uski audition ki CD edit ki jab ki u knew the fact that she cannot dance and then again you tried to prove that m materialistic by gifting those shoes…

Sw: what ye tum kya keh rahi ho… muje taani ki editing ke bare me koi idea nai tha and those shoes were Rey's gift just that I brought them for him…. And taani usko toh me…

Sh: let it be swayam… congratulationd for the new 6th dancer of your team… and was about to leave when swayam grabbed her wrist not allowing her to go…

Sw: I promise Sharon, 6th dancer wo hi banegi jo deserve karti hai… even if that's you… and don't worry about the kiss I shall forget it and never mention about it to anyone just like the RDX sirs party thing…

Sharon just smiled

Sh: but I don't want to foget it…

And left the classroom leaving a confused swayam…



THE END


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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW di.. ITS AWESOME !!! I MEAN .. AHH .. AESA SHOW MEIN HO GYA TO BHANTADHAR HO JAYEGA ^__^ HEHE..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome, mind blowing...luved it...wish something like dis happens in the show
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Posted: 13 years ago
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HeHeHe Main janta tha ki u will make them kiss in ur OS but loved the twist that it was not Swayam who kissed Sharon but vice versa. Nice one but i felt a little more explaination from both was needed, Because i think even though Sharon gave the clear hint in the end i still think all MU was not cleared between them .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful Man!!!!!!!!!👏 Loved it!!!!!!!!! ❤️Mannu,u r an awesome writer !!!!!!!🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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One promo inspired SOOO many OSs and FFs 😆 ... Not surprised 😛

I liked the fact how the tables turned here ... First Sharon accused Swayam ... and then Swayam accused Sharon ... Swayam dragged her in to prove a point , and Sharon left the room having proved another one .. Sheeesh these two .. Why cant they EVER be direct and .. I dunno ... yeh sad/ depressing wall SwaRon phase KAB khatam hoga 😒
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: marauder

HeHeHe Main janta tha ki u will make them kiss in ur OS but loved the twist that it was not Swayam who kissed Sharon but vice versa. Nice one but i felt a little more explaination from both was needed, Because i think even though Sharon gave the clear hint in the end i still think all MU was not cleared between them .


thats cause i so badly want SwaRon to kiss... :P ya i would have tried doing that but my hand they were paining dude... 😔 thanks for the feedback anyways it always leaves a way to improve...!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: SwaRon911

One promo inspired SOOO many OSs and FFs 😆 ... Not surprised 😛


I liked the fact how the tables turned here ... First Sharon accused Swayam ... and then Swayam accused Sharon ... Swayam dragged her in to prove a point , and Sharon left the room having proved another one .. Sheeesh these two .. Why cant they EVER be direct and .. I dunno ... yeh sad/ depressing wall SwaRon phase KAB khatam hoga 😒


ab vo toh cv's hi bata sakte hai...!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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EEE!!!!!!!! Superrcooll Mannu Di!!!

I=And the best part was Sharon kissing him!!! Ahhh!!!

Lovee itt!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazingly beautiful..hope d same happens in d3..thnkz a lot fr d pm...

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