Tere ishq main Zindagi ... ( FF ) Part 4 page 8 - Page 4

Wonderful update. loved it. update soon and pm me

hey loved it plz pm me when u update

loved the second part tons and update soon as well

Great FF... plzz continue n update soon...

Originally posted by: Arsha-4-Ever

I like ur concept a lot.

I so so wish that it really happens in D3. Kria comes back in rey's life. Its gonna be so hard to see tanni in Rey's life. Well aab kya kar sakte hain.

So now coming back to ur FF, I like the way you have portrayed Rey's feelings how he still loves kria and is missing her.

I just luv the last part

it was that moon who saw those lovers .. and connected them , today he saw million of lovers on this hearth , today on valentines day .. but truth love , truth pain, he saw these two people who are actually just one : Kriyansh .. that drop was not rain .. it was kriya's pain .. kriya tears ..'

Cant wait for the Delhi episode. Awaiting for an intense Kriyansh reunion scene. Hahaha

Plz update soon.

I so wish too !! Seriously even if she come back Months later , i don't mind ...
just want to see them together ..

:) thank you so much !! i am really happy you all enjoyed it

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

loved it.

plz pm me when u update..

jaldi se unhe milvado na...

Arey : sabar ka phal meetha hota hai na .. ;P lolz
Chalo , parte rahai .. soon or later to mileinge na ..

thnks :) , hope you will read until the end

Originally posted by: star_2012

loved it...

i think in delhi there gone bhi alot of kriyaansh scenes...

can wait please update soon...and pm me...xxx

Thanks :) ,
acha apko aissa lagta hai
dekhtein hai lol 😎

Sure :)

XX

2 days later

Kriya was washing dishes , her mother was looking at her.

Smriti : beta school kaissa ja raha hai ?

(smriti just wanted to share some dialogues with her daughter )

Kriya : good mom .. (and she gave a fake smile to her mom )

Smriti ( thinking) : Ek saal ho gaya ..tum aissi ho kriya .. yeh fake smiles, yeh fake happiness . Who meri kriya jo khul ke hasti thi .. uski ajj muskaan bhi mushkil se milti hai. Beta agar tum samaj pati ..

*doorbell*

Smriti : mmm I will check

Smriti open the door and see Mayuresh and Kruti there.

Smriti : hey kids .. aoo

She hugs mayu and kruti

Mayuresh : hello aunty !! acha kriya kider hai

Smriti : cindrella bartan do rahi hai

Kriya : hey , tum dono yahan

Kruti : check karne ahai hai ki tumne packing ki , ya nahin

Smriti : packing ? kider bhagne ka irada hai tum sab ka

Mayuresh : arey kriya ne bola nahin ?

Kriya: oh .. I forgot

Kruti : Kriyuuu !! yaar

Smriti : arey koi toh batao , ho kiya raha hai

Mayuresh : woh actually aunty humain college ke saath dheli jana hai , for a project !! lekin kriya ne apko bataya hi nahin !!

Smriti: ohh jana kab hai

Kruti and Mayuresh : kal !!

Smriti : kriya !!! tum bhul kaisse gayi

Kriya : mom .. I just don't feel ..

Smriti : Its for college, you are going that final

Smriti thought that it was a good way for her to forget Mumbai..

Kriya : ok mom as you wish .. I will pack ma stuff

Mayu and Kruti give eachother an high five ..

rey : packing done ! fiou .. shukar hai universe ji ke …

rey stopped mid sentence .. " universe ji " , he wasn't surprise by what he said .. its just that , each and everyday that connection , that possession that kriya has on him keep increasing .. he was related to her .. it was like he has kriya's soul in him . he stood their for a while , looking tru the window at the moon when the white curtains flow on his face …

on the other side , Kriya who was also looking at that moon , pulled the curtain that was on her face aside … but she didn't do it immediately .. because the feeling of the curtain on her face , related her to rey .. yes it did . she remembered the day when she was imaginating her dacing with rey

on the other hand rey too remembered that day ..he was imagining kriya tru that curtain , he raised his hand to touch her .. but she faded .. and only the moon was in front of him..

they both looked at that moon .. they somehow felt peacefull , as if that moon made a connection to their heart ..


Note : keep reading guys .. kriya aur Rey pass a rahain hai …

yaar i cannot post the link of the scene of kriyansh :( have to wait until i have 25 post )