Tere ishq main Zindagi ... ( FF ) Part 4 page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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One year has passed since that day , the day Reyansh lost his everything ' his Baatcutter.
Already one year since his heart had been broken in million pieces '

A lot had happened in this One year '

*Flash *

Rey : I can't , main tumain who pyaar nahin de pahunga..
' : lekin how will know if you don't try'

Flash Flash ( double flash jab ek scene se dusra scene , not flashback then come back )

Rey : dekho tani , tumain mere saath who pyaar nahin milega jo tum chahti ho ..
Tani : Rey, tumara saath pana hi mere liye bohut hai , and I am happy to be at your side ..

*Flash*

Actual day ..

Everyone : wooowww !! congrats !!

Vicky : finally buddy , you are in couple !! humain toh laga tum dono Sharon Aur Swayam ke slow tract se bhi ziada slow niklo ge

Sharon : Shut up vicks !!

Neha : no shut up telling to my babu , truth saying he is

Simi : urmmm ! anyway wow great ! you will be one off the famous couple in our school !!

Sharon : Finaly rey , I am really happy for you

But rey was not really paying attention .. Sharon felt something but was cut by Miss Tani

Tani ( shying ) : thanks , I am happy that you all are happy for us :D

Rimmi : chalo chalo hum saab bahar chalte hai !!

Everyone : yeahhh !!

Everyone was leaving , only Swayam and rey left behind ..

Rey was looking lost , Swayam saw that ..

Swayam : rey '

Rey: mm yeah .. ( fake smile )

Swayam : kiya tum Tani se pyaar karte ho ?

Ray smiled and looked at Swayam

Rey : Pyaar sirf ek baar hota hai .. Aur woh main kar chukka hun .. uske baad toh zindagi jeene ki baat hoti hai..

Swayam : matlab ke '

Rey : kiya tum Sharon ko bhul sakta hai ?

Swayam dull ..

Rey : nahin na ' waisse hi main use bhula nahin sakta ..

Swayam : lekin yeh jo tum Tani ke saath kar rahai ho ?

Rey : ussi ne bola ..

* Flash *

Tani : pyaar lene ka nahin , dene ka naam hota hai ..Aur mere liye yeh hi kafi hai , ke main tumain pyaar dun ' And I am sure ke tum is pyaar main dhub jaoge .. But please rey mera dil na todho ..

* flash *

Swayam : ( smile ) shayad yeh hi who ladki hai jo tumare liye bani ho ..

Rey : joh mere liye bani thi , usne mujhe uska bane nahin diya .. anyway .. agar tani ko apna pyaar mil sakta hai , toh why should I break her heart .. I know ke kaissa feel hota hai jab dil toothe hai ..

Rey left

Swayam : mujhe nahin pata agar jo ho raha hai thik ho raha hai .. lekin I wish ki tumari who khushi wapis a jahai ..

scene shift toh a corridor , were a girl was walking .. walking without any destination .. yeah no destination .. she left her destination , her destiny .. long back ..

' : kriya !!

Yeah it was kriya .. our kriya .. or atleast her body ' Kriya soul his only with one person '

Someone hold her shoulder and turn her

' : kriya kabse bhula raha hun , tum ho ki sun hi nahin rahi !! phir se kider kho gayi !!

Kriya : oh sorry , mayuresh '

Mayuresh : rrr Kriya !! phele toh yeh sorry wala lafz hai na , mind se wash kardo .. aur yaarkiya mayuresh mayuresh laga rakha '

Kriya : mm..

Mayuresh : why don't you call me reshu like before ??

Kriya : sorry ..

Mayuresh : rrr ' ufff .. never mind.. acha suno we are going to dheli !!! ( all exited )

Kriya : uh .. why ?? ( breaking Mayuresh exitment )

Mayuresh : at least show some fake excitement yaar .. anyway Chammak challo , hum apne course ke liye udar ja rahai hai .. aur phir agra because they will be a big function for taj mahal for is 450 years ( its fake guys , but its just for the story ) and renovation .. so we got the assignement .. we have to manage all thing with the company who organize this and they will also be a DANce show ..

Kriya : ok .. I will see if I can come ..

Mayuresh : but kriya .. it's dance ,you '

But kriya left before ..

Kruti : kiya huwa mayu

Mayuresh : damn.. why is she like that !! kuch saal phele main dance ka naam hi leta tha .. ki maharani dance step dikhana shuru kar deti thi .. and now she don't even react on that word .. she is not like the same kriya .. my .. I mean our kriya

Mayuresh and Kruti are friend with Kriya , since before she left for Mumbai .. they knew that kriya left for Mumbai for her dance .. but don't understand why she came back like that .. She has changed a lot . They are in they bissness course , so they have assignment to complete given by their college ..

Kruti : I just want to see that colourfull kriya .. please kriya ke universe ji bring back that kriya !

Flash

Rey : kiya dheli !?

Rdx : yes you all are going to dheli , you will have your classes their , don't worry ..

Vicky : app bhi bada acha joke kartein hain sir ..

Rdx : uh .. kab kiya

Vicky : ley abhi abhi toh kiya , worry for studies ..

Neha : babuuu !!

RDX : anyway , app sab ko udar se ek special training mile gi dance ke liye ;)

Sharon : waow that great

RDX : its not finish ' guys you all are going to perform in front of the taf mahal !!

Everyone : waoowww

Neha : waoww neha becoming mumtaz ! and Babu shah Jahan !!

You can imagine with all the get up lol ..
she start singing ' jab pyaar kiya toh '"

Everyone leaves , even RDX

Neha : ( ;O) were are people !! leaving neha alone they


Precap :

Tani : for valentines days Rey !!

Rey : Tani .. i .. i just don't like bears .. especially heart bears ..


Note: Ok guys , i am an old old old member Kavyanjuli days .. and just creat a new account to write here .. I am a Huge Kriyansh Fan :) .. and i jsut want to keep them alive here ..

It's just a try .. and I will try to improve with days :) .. but please tell me if you like , or comments .. ( next part comming soon )
Edited by ishu-kriyansh - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its amazing dear. Could u plz pm me whn u update nxt...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey its superb yar. I really hope ki D3 me bhi aisa hi kuch ho ki rey uss stalker bride se pyar na karein. Good work dude. Plz do pm me whenever u update.
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nice concept. continue and pm me
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Pm to me whenewere u update its owsome
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its awesome...loved it very much
please continue soon and pm me for next part
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awesum work dear

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Hey i just luved ur writing skills dear !!!!
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Awesome cncept...plz pm me nxt tym u update...wud luv 2 read it...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dis is really good hope it turns out to be like this please continue

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