Tere ishq main Zindagi ... ( FF ) Part 4 page 8 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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its really awesome
interesting story
plz pm me when u update

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Posted: 13 years ago
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its beautiful..!! hehe...mayuresh and kruti...??? big fan huh..???
anyways...please update soon..and Om me when u do..!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing...n tani rey couple huh...update soon n plzzz pm me i sent u a buddy request...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its end of the day .. everyone going home .. and some for dinner . Yeah today it's valentines day ..lovers day. Actually it's lovers day for everyone .. but for rey it's the day his heart crashed into pieces. The day , he had been rejected by the one he loves.

He watched Viha and Swaron leaving hand in hand .. happily , he smiled at this view .. when his smile changed into sadness.. he saw something else .. he saw kriya .. our what we can say rey imagination .. he saw her looking at him smiling and then giving a dirty smirk .. she turn to leave .. and then turn back to rey and trow his teddy on his face..Rey put his hand on his face to catch it .. normaly he shouldn't feel something in his hand .. but he did .. rey opened his eyes and saw a soft toy in his hand .. he couln't believe it .. looked in front of him .. to see a sign of kriya .. he was going to run to the same direction when he heard a voice

… : Kaissa laga rey !!

Rey looked back .. and saw Tani .. then looked at the toy ..
Rey ( think ) : how stupid you can be rey .. she is not going to back ..

Tani : I know that we just became a couple but .. still I wanted to gift to you..

Rey : looked at the soft toy ..

Rey : uh ..
Tani : its for valentines day Rey !

Rey : Tani .. i .. i just don't like bears .. especially heart bears ..

Tani looked a bit upset .. Rey saw that

Rey : Arey Tani partner !! yeh sad wala chera don't suit you na !! Dekho yeh tu rakh lo .. waisse bhi dekho humarey pass toh phele se gift hai

Tani : mmm?? Who kiya

Rey : we are going to Agra !! saath main it will be fun

Tani smiled and hugged rey : yess !! that will be just awesome !! we will take picture in front of that taj mahal !! wow we will look just great together there !! :D

Rey smiled at her : filial chalein , late bohut ho gaya hai ..

Tani : yup :D dropping me home !?

Rey : like always

Rey show his arm and she put her inside , they walked away laughing J and rey eyes fell back on the soft toy ..

Flash ..

Kriya looking to something and saying :happy valentines day rey …

She was actually looking to the soft toy rey gifted her for valentines day .. she has kept it ..

Kriya : I hope ke app achein hain rey .. I hope ke app mujhe bhul gahain hain.. I don't deserv you .. apne mujhe apna dil diya aur maine use hi..

She started crying .. she was siting at her window side … she looked at the moon at that time..

And other hand we could see rey looking at the moon after droping tani .. a drop fell on his cheek ..

Rey wiped it : its going to rain..

He sit back on his car ..
but it wasn't rain .. it was that moon who saw those lovers .. and connected them , today he saw million of lovers on this hearth , today on valentines day .. but truth love , truth pain, he saw these two people who are actually just one : Kriyansh .. that drop was not rain .. it was kriya's pain .. kriya tears ..



Note : thank for your comments :D , it helps me to continue ..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: neethuuthaman

Hey its superb yar. I really hope ki D3 me bhi aisa hi kuch ho ki rey uss stalker bride se pyar na karein. Good work dude. Plz do pm me whenever u update.



Lol thinking the same.. yaar .. i really don't see her with rey
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Saumya_D3

its beautiful..!! hehe...mayuresh and kruti...??? big fan huh..???

anyways...please update soon..and Om me when u do..!!!!



I am A big fan Of Kriyansh <3 _ <3 .. unke siwa toh koi dikhta hi nahin lol
No actually i really like their dance :P
thanks :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
awesome part...loved it very much
the connection which moon has created between kriyansh was superb...loved it very much
and thanks for the pm
continue soon waiting eagerly for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishu-kriyansh



I am A big fan Of Kriyansh <3 _ <3 .. unke siwa toh koi dikhta hi nahin lol
No actually i really like their dance :P
thanks :P

hehe...i guessed that..!!!

yes...mayuresh and kruti are great dancers...!!

hehe...i made a mistake up there...i wanted to say..PM me when u do..!!!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing amazing amazing...
yaar cant see rey n kriya like dis...
rey trying to hide his pain dats so sweet of him
i especially luved these lines
but it wasn't rain .. it was that moon who saw those lovers .. and connected them , today he saw million of lovers on this hearth , today on valentines day .. but truth love , truth pain, he saw these two people who are actually just one : Kriyansh .. that drop was not rain .. it was kriya's pain .. kriya tears .. its just amazing...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow d water drop scene was out of world n d moon connecting dem just lovd it...can u pm me?

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