#1 [SS+KR]Mines Forever FF Chapters 1-8 - Page 71

Originally posted by: Srishti_SwaRon

Awesome update Khushi. I guess the girls must have given a mind-blowing performance. I liked ho the boys actually said it out tht they wanted to talk to their respective girls. N the girls actually asked the other 2 to stay. That i didn't expect. I loved the how the gals asked "Apni Sharinder/Romaira ko itni jaldi bhul gaye?". That was a nice dialogue. The boys must have suddenly goone from earth to dreamland after hearing that.
Btw, thanx for updating fast & for the PM. :)

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy

Thanks for the pm and I loved the update especially how you brought back the name Romaira and nice name for Sharon

Originally posted by: crazysky

hey its awesome loved it
it was terific...
out of the world
loved rey's expression
loved it

Originally posted by: Nirju99

dat was superv

Originally posted by: nityaa02

haiye... that was such a sweet sweet meet... finally rey knows that it was kriya ... that was really really sweet one...😍 thank you so much for the update... eagerly waiting now for the next one...

Originally posted by: mEgical_arsha

hey khushi..! Hey!

just luved ur update to the exremest core dear !!!😳 Thank you so much!

really Fab❤️ ...outstanding...!!!👍🏼

it ws a sweet update... Glad to know :D

i luved the part where swayam ws giggling on seeing kriyaansh !!!😆

hehehe...nd the way kriya pushed sharon back to her seat nd told her that swayam is not running away!!!!🤣 ROFL, Glad you loved those!!

reallly amazinnn dear!!!!👏

so keep it up wid ur great updates !!!☺️ Will do 😳

just luved these lines~

It was Swayam. He teased, "Keep going. It's quite amusing."

Both narrowed their eyes at the third voice and looked at each other. At the same time, they turned to look at Swayam. Both instantly got up and Rey fumbled, "It's - nothing like that. Couldn't you tell me there was a pole behind?" he faked anger on Swayam.

Swayam was taken aback. "Great! Dost dost na raha," he taunted back. "I did try to tell you if you recall."

"Oh please." He said to Swayam and flashed a smile at Kriya. He still didn't know her name.

She interrupted them saying, "Uh' sorry. But have to go."

Rey spoke dreamily, "Bye'"😆

so whenever u update next do PM me for sure !😃

mwaaah !!!😍 Glad you loved the scene! Surely will =)

Originally posted by: mEgical_arsha

hey khushi...luved ur update yaar !!!👏

reallly...sry i did not notice this update !!! sryyy !!!😔

but i justt luved reading it !!!!😃

truely magical yaar !!!!😍

soo keep up wid the good wrk !!!⭐️

such a Prolific writer u are dear !!!👍🏼

some awe-strucking lines ~

With each passing moment, Rey was feeling more and more attached to the girl. If he didn't find out soon who she was, he suspected that he might go insane. 🤣

Kriya stopped right beside him. It looked as if she was going to continue walking but instead, she stopped. She looked at her one sided face till he turned to look at her. With a tease in her voice, she said, "Apni Romaira ko itni jaldi bhul gaye?"☺️

Rey continued after a pause, "She's'"

"Gone." Swayam said strictly. He was tired of being ignored.😆

so whenever u update next do PM me for sure !!!!😳

mwaaahhh!!!!🤗

Originally posted by: aishasully

it was awsoommmeee luv it cnt wait 4 da next 1 i readd da kriyaansh pov plz update tomrrow actaully everyday and do pm plzzz

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

wowww finally rey got to now dat she is his romaira...his baatcutter..his kriyaaa
awww...n he is acting lyk dumb bt i love it yar n finally u become kind wowww dis is rly shocking...hahaha🤣
nw waiting 4 nxt part despiratly 😃