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Posted: 13 years ago
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dis is my first post on IF nd dat too 4 swaron...m soo excited as wel as little nervous too...i hope it goes better...as far as title is concerned i wanna say dat sharon loves swayamm...bt he is unaware of it...
The gang somehow manages to lock both of dem in kriya's bedroom. SWAYAM,who is actually unaware of what was gng on jus turns back nd finds sharon in front of him.He is shocked to see har der doesnt knw wats was gng on...
sw: tum yahan????aur woh bhi kriya ke ghar mein????
sh: haa woh actually mujhe tumse kuch baatkarni thi...
sw:mai tumhari koi bhi baat sunna nai chahta toh plzz...(he turns towards d door nd tries 2 open it bt he fails...)
sh:tumhe meri baat sunni hoga kyunki jab tak tum meri baat sunn nai lete tab tak yhe door nai khulne wala...
sw:(nw he understands d point) dekho ab mai tumse argue nai karna chahta unn logon kaho ki darwaza kholeen...nai to meri flight miss ho jayegi
sh:WHAT???FLIGHT???tum ne to kaha tha ki clg chod raheho par tum iss city ko chodd ke jaraheho...par kyun ????
sw:tumhe isse koi lena dena nahi toh plzz jus stay out of it...
sh:(she is hurt by his words she starts cursing herself 4 dng al dis..)tum meri wajah se jaa raheho na...(she asks in a soft tone)
sw: hmm...ab tum mere liye unta imp nai ho ki mai tumhari wajah se aapna frnz,clg sab chodd ke jaaon..UTNA IMP HO SOCHNA BHI MAT..
sh:((she couldnt tak dis ans 4m him))achha toh reason batao kyun clg chod ke jaaraheho???((she asks dis qn vid d tears in her eyes nd also in anger))
sw:tumhari yee faltu bakwaas sunne ke liye mere pass tym nai hai...jaa kar usse sunnao jiske paas bahut saara tym hai...
sh:((she knws whom he was talkn abt...))par swayam ek baaar meri baat suntho lo...
sw:maine kaha na plzzz...akhir tumhari prob kya hai???kyun mere peeche padi hoo???na ab mai tumhare baarein mein sochta hun aur nahin mujhe tumein koi interest hai...nw jus leave me alone...
sharon:((yahan se i wanna discuss nly abt sharon losing al her cntrl))
******actualy humein patah hai ki swayam sharon se kitna pyaar karta hai...aur yhe bhi pata hai ki sharon bhi uske liye kuch feel karti hai lekin uski ego ki wajah se woh nahi bolti...LEKIN LEKIN ab mai sharon ka dusra side dikhana chahti hoon...jo bhi pal usne swayam ke saath guzaare,usne jo kuch bhi kiya swayam ke saath unn sab mein sharon ka pyaar chipa hua tha...shayad woh tapad ho,insult ho,secert admirer wali baat ho,dance ho, kuch bhi...i wanna let inside sharon 2 speak...SPECIALLY D STAIRCASE WALA SCENE ki uss din usne kyun usse reject kiya nt dat she doent love him bt...yeh aapko aaje padke pata chal ga...*****
ALONE huh..!!! Hw cn u say dat??Did u ever left me alone??tum to meri mind ko bhi akele nai chodte toh phir mai tumhe kaise choddun???
tumhare bina meri zindagi bahut achhi thi...phir kyun aayi tum meri lyf mein??kyun??bolo...hai koi javab??
tumhe lagta hai ki tum mujhe samajte ho bt lemme tell u one thng dat tum sirf mujhe jaante hoo samajte nai..((TU JAANE NAA))
mai maanti hoon maine tumhe hamesha insult kiya,bina koi baat ke chillati rahi par kabhi socha ki mai aisa kyun karti hoon???
muhje ab bhi yaaad hai jab tum al d bst kehne ke liya meri pass aiye,maine tumhe looser kaha lekin mujhe kya pata ki ussi loser ko paane ke liya mai ek badi loser banungi...
Pehi baar mai tab impress huyi thi jab tumne dance kiya...muhje pata nai kya hua,kyun hua,kaise hua lekin tumhare saath ek step karne ka maan kiya tha,aisa laga ki mujhe koi khench rahahe...majboor karrahe uske saath dance karne ke liya... issiliye us din stage par aayi thi lekin damn mera yhe so cald DIVA image samne aaya aur tum par haath tak uta diya tha...shayad shayad yahi ek wajah thi ki mein hamesha tumse irritated rehti hoon kyunki bina koi galti ke maine tumpar haath uta diya tha...aaj tak kisi bhi ladke ne muhje aisa impress nahi kiya ki mai khud uske pass jaa kar uske saath dance steps karne ke liye majboor ho jaaoon...

2 b cntnd...


well guys yeh part 1 tha agar aap logon ko pasand hai toh lyk it...so dat ill cntune...i knw dat dis could even bhi better if ny1 else writes it bt still i tuk a chance...baat agar SWARON ki ho toh koi piche kaise ho sakta hai...PLZZZ DO COMMENT ON DIS...

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It is really nice, i loved it . I want you to continue .. :)
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can i plz have a pm it waz amzing and send a autograph with it plz

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