KriyaanshOS-Acche dost se kuch zyaada-Updated pg63 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg dat was so hottt!! pls update soon..pls add me to ur pm list. thanks.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg omg omg!
*dead**Dead*
dat was so freakin hawt!!!
plzz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:))))))))))
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wooo awsum n frikin hawt ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was sizzling hot! plz pm me when you continue 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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man !!! OMG !!! do u wanna kill us !!!! this was damn hawt rey !!!

SHIT !!!! OMG OMG OMG !!!! PLZ UPDATE NAAA !!!!!!!!!

HOT HOT HOT !!! HHEHEHE !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you all so much for the coments...will hopefully post an update by the evening or by tonight...and thank you all once again!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: binx-D3

thank you all so much for the coments...will hopefully post an update by the evening or by tonight...and thank you all once again!!

cant wait for ur update!!! yaaayy!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Kriyaansh0311

Wow...wow...wow..!!
Words are too less to describe how much I liked it...Pls continue this one in your own version!!! It was so sweet...so HAWT!!!! u r a murderer...U really killed me!!!!☺️ Loved it to the CORE!!!!!! 😳😳

omg it was jst hot . do pm me plz continue. really loved it👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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DAMN HAWT !!!!!!!

UPDATE PLS
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PART 4:

Rey loses his balance while trying to pull Kria in front of him and they both fall down on a stack of hay with Rey on top of Kria….Rey has one hand around her waist while his other hand is under her back. Kria has both her hands on Rey's shoulders. She can't deny how absolutely gorgeous he looks without his shirt on and how much she loves the way she feels when Rey is so close to her.

Rey removes the hand that was under her back and moves the strands of hair that are covering her face. LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA starts. They can see how much they desire eachother in their eyes. They can see how much they want eachother and how much they hope that this night would never end.

Kria slowly slides her hands from his shoulder, down his back, up his stomach and up his chest. She is about to release her hands from his body, when he grabs them and pins her down hard against the floor. Kria initially tries to fight back and release herself but soon gives up when she realizes that he's not going to let her go. Rey leans in to kiss her on the lips. They can hear their hearts pounding and they are finding it difficult to breathe. Just as Rey comes even closer to kiss her, a drop of water falls on Kria's forehead. They both look up to realize that there is a small crack in the shack and that water is seeping in through the empty space.

Another drop falls on Kria's face and she struggles to release her hands from Rey's grip so that she can wipe of the water. Seeing what Kria is trying to do he whispers into her ear "mujhe pata hai tum kya karne ki koshish kar rahi ho lekin mein tumhe chodne wala nahi hoon". Saying that he moves his face up and kisses her forehead sucking away the drops of water. Kria closes her eyes and her body trembles with his touch. A drop of water falls on her closed eyes and Rey gently plants a kiss there too. He slowly whispers in her ear "Kria, mein tumhari in badi badi aankhon mein apni poori zindagi bita sakta hoon"…She opens her eyes and LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA starts….After their 2 minute passionate staring session, a drop of water falls on the edge of her mouth. He moves forward to kiss that small drop of water off her face. As he kisses the edge of her mouth and moves away, his lips brush lightly against hers. Both of their bodies freeze and their breathing gets even harder. Kria noticing that Rey's grip on her arms has eased..pushes him aside and runs away blushing….Rey sits there smiling to himself.

After 5 minutes Rey comes out of the room only to notice that Kria has fallen asleep against the door. He gently lifts her up, making sure not to wake her up and carries her back to the car. He gently places her on the seat and silently shuts the door. He works on the fixing the car and within 10 minutes he's all set. As he gets into the car and is ready to start, Kria murmurs in her sleep "rey aap bahaut acche ho. Mujhe please kabhi chodke mat jaana". A huge smile appears on Rey's face as he looks at her fast asleep. He cant help but admire how beautiful she looks, and he silently thanks god for bringing her into his life.

When they finally reach her place, he tries to wake her up by saying her name. When that doesn't work he plants a kiss on the tip of her nose and rubs his nose against hers. Kria slowly opens her eyes and smiles on seeing Rey beside her.

Rey: ghar nahin jaana kya? Poori raat mere saath bitane ka irada hai kya??

Kria: (blushes)..and then says…agar aapki marzi ho to main sirf aapke saath apni poori zindagi bitaana chahoongi. Saying that she kisses him on his cheek and leaves his car blushing.

Rey sits in the car shocked and happy by what she just said.


Hope you guys liked this update. Please let me know what you think!!

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