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Hiii...so this is my first OS so im sorry if there are spelling mistakes or if the OS isn that good...i just had this scene in my mind and i wanted to share it but i hope im able to explain it well in words...
sorry if it isnt all that good
So im continuing from the part where Rey offers to drop Kria home after the first day of the Dance fest. She is wearing her pretty white dress and he is looking gorgeous as usual in his white shirt and jeans...the diff here is that instead of walking they take his car and since i wanted to add rain in this scene :P...we"ll imagine its july instead of january...
PART 2 of the OS is on page 4
PART 3 of the OS is on page 6
PART 4 of the OS is on page 10
PART 5 of the OS is on page 17
PART 6 of the OS is on page 22
PART 7 of the OS is on page 31
PART 8 (1) of the OS is on page 42
PART 8 (2) of the OS is on page 51
PART 9 of the OS is on page 63
PART 1
Rey : tum itni raat ko akeli ghar nahi ja sakti...main tumhe ghar chodd deta hoon.
Kria : don worry rey i'll manage. itni bhi raat nahi hui hai.
Rey : Kria main tumse pooch nahi raha hoon...keh rahan hoon ki tum akeli nahi jaogi.
Kria : aap kyun itni takleef le rahe ho...mere ghar paas mein hi to hai
Rey: ( in a low voice to himself) kaise bataoon ki tumhare saath thoda waqt akele guzarne ke liye main kuch bhi karoonga!
Kria: aapne kuch kaha?
Rey: a..ba..b...aaa...haan..tum..tum behes mat karo..jaldi chalo...warna tumhari Hitler jaisi maa tumhe chodegi nahin.
Kria: tumne meri maa ko kya kaha????
Rey: accha sorry baba...ab chalo!
Kria is about to take her bag and leave when she sees a small mouse sitting on her bag. She screams and jumps into Rey's arms out of fear...
Initially Rey is shocked but loves the way Kria feels in his arms...as usual the LOOK LOOKI HAWA HAWA starts :P
Rey : tumhe pata bhi hai ki tum kitni bhari ho!! ( laughing )
Kria : (angry) she gets down. woh chooha udhar tha, aur mujhe darr lagta hai...isliye..sorry.
Rey : its okay! mujhe pata hai ki tumhe meri baahon mein aana accha lagta hai...mere kareeb hona accha lagta hai...saying that he moves closer to her.
Kria : woh...main...woh...aisa...kuch nahi hai...(blushing) (LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA)...abhi chalo already bohot der ho gayi hai
((IN THE CAR))
Both of them dont know what to say to each other...Kuch Khaas Hai is playing on the radio and both of them are stealing glances at each other...At one point Rey's hand touches Kria's while he's changing the gears and it feels like an electric current has passed through their bodies...again LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA starts
(please don do this in reality warna accident ho jayega đ)
Their eyelock is broken when the car suddenly jerks and stops in the middle of the road. The road is empty and there is no one but them around.)
Kria: kya hua. Ruk kyun gayi gaadi?
Rey: Main abhi dekhta hun. Tum andar ruko.
Just as he says that it starts raining.
Kria: bas ab yahi hona baaki reh gaya tha!!
Rey: Chill...main gaadi theek kar doonga and we'll be out of here in no time
Rey gets drenched as soon as he steps out of the car...his white shirt becomes transparent revealing his hot masculine body that we're all so in love with đł
Kria is mesmerized by how hot Rey looks...his wet hair...his wet body...the way the rain drops trickle down his face...she just cant stop herself from gawking!!
Rey notices Kria checking him out and smiles too himself (sirf acche dost haan baatcutter??..lets c if we can change that today...)
Kria (to herself) : Kyun jab rey paas hota to tumhari dhadkan tez ho jaati hai? kyun tumhaari ankhen usi ko hamesha dhoondhti rehti hai?? Kyun tumhara din use mile bina poora nahin hota!!
Her thoughts are suddenly broken by a loud sound...She jumps out of the car worried that something has happened to Rey.
Kria: REY! REY! AAP THEEK TO HO!! REY!
She gets out of the car only to see Rey's face covered in black smoke. She cant get her self to stop laughing him..
REY looks at her first with anger but is then just mesmerized by her laughter...he cant get his eyes of her...He cant believe how absolutely gorgeous she looks wet in the rain with her dress clinging to her body highlighting all her curves.
Rey: tumhe yeh bahut funny lagta hai na!!
Kria: aap itne funny lag rahe ho to main kya karu (still laughing)
Rey: ek to main yeh sab tumhare liye kar raha hoon taaki tum ghar jaldi pahonch sako..aur tum ho ki mere pe has rahi ho!!
Kria: accha baba sorry...
She moves closer to him and puts her hands on his face to wipe it...LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA starts...she moves her hands from his forehead to his temples...to his eyes..to his cheeks and to his lips...they just cant take their eyes off eachother...Kria is about to take her hand away from his face when he suddenly pulls her closer and puts his other hand round her waist. Her eyes widen but she cant deny how she loves the way he makes her feel...Rey can almost read her eyes...he can see the fear and anxiousness get replaced by joy and passion...He can feel her body tense up and her breathing get hard when he pulls her close.
Kria comes to her senses and tries to relaease herself from Rey's grip only to discover that he is too strong for her...Rey twists her hand behind her waist to stop her from trying to move.
Kria: Rey aap yeh kya kar rahe ho? Mujhe chodo? ur hurting me!
Rey: to tumhe mere itne kareeb hona accha nahi lagta? Tumhe mera itne paas hone se farak nahi padta?
Kria: N...na..na...Nahi padta. Ab mujhe please jaane do.
Rey: Oh Really! Saying that he pulls her even closer...their lips are just a couple of inches away from each other.
Kria is finding it even harder to breathe...She doesnt want to look at him because she knows her eyes will tell him how she truly feels. Rey releases his hand from her wrist and tilts her chin up...and with that he gently places his lips on her forehead. Kria shuts her eyes...her body feels like its on fire with the sensation of his lips against her body...Rey slowly moves his lips from her forehead down the side of her face, along her cheeks., along her jawline to her neck. Kria's body is in a frenzy. She's trying to hold on for dear life.
Rey: tumhe abhi farak nahi padta?
Kria: no answer. But her actions say it all...She slowly put her hands around Rey's shoulders. She leaves one hand on his shoulder while she lets the other one run down his arm to his his wrist to his palm and up his stomach and up his chest back up to his shoulder. Rey shudders with pleasure. Her touch makes him feel like a house on fire...They can feel their burning desire, their love passion and want for each other.
Rey gently plants kisses along her neck to her shoulder...sucking away all the raindrops on her body. She moans with pleasure. Rey loves knowing that he has that effect on her. He picks her up in his arms and says "Sirf acche dost haan??". She looks down and blushes and then whispers in her ear "Acche dost se kuch zyaada".
Hope you liked it. Thank you!!
sorry if it isnt all that good
So im continuing from the part where Rey offers to drop Kria home after the first day of the Dance fest. She is wearing her pretty white dress and he is looking gorgeous as usual in his white shirt and jeans...the diff here is that instead of walking they take his car and since i wanted to add rain in this scene :P...we"ll imagine its july instead of january...
PART 2 of the OS is on page 4
PART 3 of the OS is on page 6
PART 4 of the OS is on page 10
PART 5 of the OS is on page 17
PART 6 of the OS is on page 22
PART 7 of the OS is on page 31
PART 8 (1) of the OS is on page 42
PART 8 (2) of the OS is on page 51
PART 9 of the OS is on page 63
PART 1
Rey : tum itni raat ko akeli ghar nahi ja sakti...main tumhe ghar chodd deta hoon.
Kria : don worry rey i'll manage. itni bhi raat nahi hui hai.
Rey : Kria main tumse pooch nahi raha hoon...keh rahan hoon ki tum akeli nahi jaogi.
Kria : aap kyun itni takleef le rahe ho...mere ghar paas mein hi to hai
Rey: ( in a low voice to himself) kaise bataoon ki tumhare saath thoda waqt akele guzarne ke liye main kuch bhi karoonga!
Kria: aapne kuch kaha?
Rey: a..ba..b...aaa...haan..tum..tum behes mat karo..jaldi chalo...warna tumhari Hitler jaisi maa tumhe chodegi nahin.
Kria: tumne meri maa ko kya kaha????
Rey: accha sorry baba...ab chalo!
Kria is about to take her bag and leave when she sees a small mouse sitting on her bag. She screams and jumps into Rey's arms out of fear...
Initially Rey is shocked but loves the way Kria feels in his arms...as usual the LOOK LOOKI HAWA HAWA starts :P
Rey : tumhe pata bhi hai ki tum kitni bhari ho!! ( laughing )
Kria : (angry) she gets down. woh chooha udhar tha, aur mujhe darr lagta hai...isliye..sorry.
Rey : its okay! mujhe pata hai ki tumhe meri baahon mein aana accha lagta hai...mere kareeb hona accha lagta hai...saying that he moves closer to her.
Kria : woh...main...woh...aisa...kuch nahi hai...(blushing) (LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA)...abhi chalo already bohot der ho gayi hai
((IN THE CAR))
Both of them dont know what to say to each other...Kuch Khaas Hai is playing on the radio and both of them are stealing glances at each other...At one point Rey's hand touches Kria's while he's changing the gears and it feels like an electric current has passed through their bodies...again LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA starts
(please don do this in reality warna accident ho jayega đ)
Their eyelock is broken when the car suddenly jerks and stops in the middle of the road. The road is empty and there is no one but them around.)
Kria: kya hua. Ruk kyun gayi gaadi?
Rey: Main abhi dekhta hun. Tum andar ruko.
Just as he says that it starts raining.
Kria: bas ab yahi hona baaki reh gaya tha!!
Rey: Chill...main gaadi theek kar doonga and we'll be out of here in no time
Rey gets drenched as soon as he steps out of the car...his white shirt becomes transparent revealing his hot masculine body that we're all so in love with đł
Kria is mesmerized by how hot Rey looks...his wet hair...his wet body...the way the rain drops trickle down his face...she just cant stop herself from gawking!!
Rey notices Kria checking him out and smiles too himself (sirf acche dost haan baatcutter??..lets c if we can change that today...)
Kria (to herself) : Kyun jab rey paas hota to tumhari dhadkan tez ho jaati hai? kyun tumhaari ankhen usi ko hamesha dhoondhti rehti hai?? Kyun tumhara din use mile bina poora nahin hota!!
Her thoughts are suddenly broken by a loud sound...She jumps out of the car worried that something has happened to Rey.
Kria: REY! REY! AAP THEEK TO HO!! REY!
She gets out of the car only to see Rey's face covered in black smoke. She cant get her self to stop laughing him..
REY looks at her first with anger but is then just mesmerized by her laughter...he cant get his eyes of her...He cant believe how absolutely gorgeous she looks wet in the rain with her dress clinging to her body highlighting all her curves.
Rey: tumhe yeh bahut funny lagta hai na!!
Kria: aap itne funny lag rahe ho to main kya karu (still laughing)
Rey: ek to main yeh sab tumhare liye kar raha hoon taaki tum ghar jaldi pahonch sako..aur tum ho ki mere pe has rahi ho!!
Kria: accha baba sorry...
She moves closer to him and puts her hands on his face to wipe it...LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA starts...she moves her hands from his forehead to his temples...to his eyes..to his cheeks and to his lips...they just cant take their eyes off eachother...Kria is about to take her hand away from his face when he suddenly pulls her closer and puts his other hand round her waist. Her eyes widen but she cant deny how she loves the way he makes her feel...Rey can almost read her eyes...he can see the fear and anxiousness get replaced by joy and passion...He can feel her body tense up and her breathing get hard when he pulls her close.
Kria comes to her senses and tries to relaease herself from Rey's grip only to discover that he is too strong for her...Rey twists her hand behind her waist to stop her from trying to move.
Kria: Rey aap yeh kya kar rahe ho? Mujhe chodo? ur hurting me!
Rey: to tumhe mere itne kareeb hona accha nahi lagta? Tumhe mera itne paas hone se farak nahi padta?
Kria: N...na..na...Nahi padta. Ab mujhe please jaane do.
Rey: Oh Really! Saying that he pulls her even closer...their lips are just a couple of inches away from each other.
Kria is finding it even harder to breathe...She doesnt want to look at him because she knows her eyes will tell him how she truly feels. Rey releases his hand from her wrist and tilts her chin up...and with that he gently places his lips on her forehead. Kria shuts her eyes...her body feels like its on fire with the sensation of his lips against her body...Rey slowly moves his lips from her forehead down the side of her face, along her cheeks., along her jawline to her neck. Kria's body is in a frenzy. She's trying to hold on for dear life.
Rey: tumhe abhi farak nahi padta?
Kria: no answer. But her actions say it all...She slowly put her hands around Rey's shoulders. She leaves one hand on his shoulder while she lets the other one run down his arm to his his wrist to his palm and up his stomach and up his chest back up to his shoulder. Rey shudders with pleasure. Her touch makes him feel like a house on fire...They can feel their burning desire, their love passion and want for each other.
Rey gently plants kisses along her neck to her shoulder...sucking away all the raindrops on her body. She moans with pleasure. Rey loves knowing that he has that effect on her. He picks her up in his arms and says "Sirf acche dost haan??". She looks down and blushes and then whispers in her ear "Acche dost se kuch zyaada".
Hope you liked it. Thank you!!
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