Operation Shaadi-ViHa ff Updt PAGE 16 - Page 14

WOOWWW!!!!
I'm in love with this<3
You write so bloody well. *applause*

firstly, the interesting title is an attention grabber ;)

"Vicky got the ring box from his pocket and opened it. The girls quickly surrounded him to have a look" & "Vicky hadn't asked any of the girls because he knew that if he had asked one of them for help, then the others would've been offended and if he had asked all four then he would probably have to wait for a year for all four to agree on one ring. "
…LOL!! That's SOO girls ;)

"'I mean, of course I'm happy about it. Neha ke jaane ke baad ghar mein kitni shaanti hogi! Thank you Vicky!'

Yeah right. They all knew what he had been about to say but they dint say anything and smiled to themselves."
……True frnds are so endearing esp. the D3 folk's friendship. N Nil is sucha brother material I tell u Xp

eee! I verbatim Neha's mum'S thought about vishaka's smile. I love it too ^__^

"'Neha, actually...accident yahi pe hua tha. And doctor said not to move him. So he's being treated here.'

God! That sounded so lame!"
…..LMAO!! yes it did sound lame…..hahahhahahah



"Vicky loves you so much, he just wanted to plan something special for you. And you know if he had thrown a surprise party on your birthday you wouldn't be surprised at all because you were expecting a surprise party weren't you?"
…..Clever excuse ;)



". Neha had dressed up as Basanti, Nilesh as Gabbar and Vicky as Thakur. It had been Neha's mother's idea"….Pooori ki poori family hi melodramatic hai….nao I kno dat :P … but imagining dem in such attire is soo hilarious : ))))) esp. tiny,timid & witty Nilesh….BAHHAHHAHA

Awww!! Sucha beautiful surprise…shes so lucky :/ ….lovely thought!!!


"Trying to make herself believe that no one was going to jump on her and attack her, she crossed the room and pushed open the door" …..HAHHAHAH….shit! even I need to give such an assurance to my horrored mind at times, being sucha grown up :P




Record :O N a new dress so that she doesn't regret…..AWWW!!!! THIS IS THE CUTEST PART<3



"Once she thought she heard someone behind the trees, but she didn't bother to look. She knew it must be one of her friends."…awiiieE!! such MELLOWING detailing here. So sweet was this



"Rooth Na Jaana Tumse Kahoon Toh."…which 1's dis???



I loved the idea of gift boxes with WHITE ribbon <3

"Nilesh might be blind to things like love but Swayam sure wasn't"….swayam's a treasure as a frnd<3

The WHOLE Vicky's proposal speech was ABSOLUTELY ALLURING ^___^





"'Neha, kya bol rahi ho... why?' Vicky finally found his voice and asked."…awww!!! the whole misery, vagueness, distress ….VERY WELL WRITTEN