ArSha FF-Destiny makes its moves PART 4

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Part 4: New readers please read:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1925917 Part 1http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1933922 Part 2http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1948818 Part 3
Guys I was going crazy with ideas at work today that I vowed to do the next part bySunday...but I completed it (technically Sunday here as well 2 AM...when I have work early morning...but I was dying to write it and complete part 4).Please do comment and/or LIKE...your feedback means A LOT...ENJOY!!


[Narrator]
Weeks go by as Amar is not talking to Shakti even after her several attempts to talk to him. Shakti is sad and angry with Amar as he is not realizing that it she is sorry and it wasn't entirely her fault as he would react the same way if some guy had kissed her. Amar on the other hand is still hurting and finding it impossible to let go his feelings for Shakti. His feelings are deep within and are trying to hide them by avoiding Shakti. He is still upset at her and how she did not trust him. But he admits to himself that his words: "I hate you" was too harsh [Narration ends]. One day on the sets...Amar heads to the vanity van to change...unaware that Shakti was already inside. Shakti is changing and Amar walks in accidentally as she was putting on her green choli [Narrator note…not the same outfit for We Are Just Friends video] which matched her lengha that was on. Shakti is alarmed not realizing the door was unlocked and with Amar in the doorway staring. Amar can't resist staring at her bare back as she putting her hooks on in panic and embarrassment. She keeps missing the hook loops as she feels awkward as Amar was still standing staring and checking her out. Amar is lost in the moment and walks up to Shakti and she stops fusing with her choli. He touches her hands to take over. She is reminded of the diwali tori scene...she closes her eyes as he starts hooking the choli...his cold hands brush against her back making her get goosebumps and her shoulders roll back and her chest expands forward from his touch.

As he is about to hook up the last couple of hooks, Shakti turns around faces Amar looking at him with tears of love glittering in her eyes. He is saddened by the tears rolling down her beautiful face and pulls his hand up to wipe the tears streaming down her face. She is waiting for his touch but he pulls his hand back as thoughts of their break up arise in his mind. Amar watches as Shakti's eyes widen and she bursts into harder tears…Amar looks down trying to avoid her tears. Shakti gains some courage and speaks through her tears "I never thought you would hate me this much" Amar looks up surprised by her words as he did not hate her..he is about to speak but in anger, Shakti pushes him back with both hands. Amar speaks "Shakti, I…" She cuts him off again by pushing him harder again and this time he lands against the wall. Amar is angered by Shakti's behaviour and grabs her wrist as she turned away from him. She tries to fight off his grip, but is unsuccessful. He pulls her up against the wall…she tries to fight him off with her free hand by pushing him, but he grabs her wrist…trapping both hands against the wall. Amar speaks "Shakti stop it!!" She tries again to free her left hand but Amar ties her hand behind her back. She tries many time and Amar becomes aggressive and not letting her win…Shakti struggles to free her hand from behind her…Amar moves closer and he accidentally in aggression digs his fingernails into her back and scratches her back leaving two lines of scratches. Shakti is pain and Amar realizes what he had just done and feels bad and lets go immediately. Shakti runs her fingers over her scratched back and looks at her hand to see blood. She glares at him with tears of anger and pain staining her face even more. She moves in and yells "I hate you so much!" and storms out of the vanity van. Amar is left speechless and feeling ashamed by his behaviour…he lost control of himself. He punches the wall in anger trying to hurt the hand that hurt Shakti. He buries his head in his hands and questions himself for his actions.

[Outside] Shakti runs to her car and drives off not caring about the shoot, which was to start in 5 mins. She drives in anger and pulls the car to side and breaks down. She is in disbelief that Amar would ever do that her. She cries ignoring the constant phone calls from Palki. She realizes that she can't turn her back on her work and Palki is counting on her. She phones Palki and tells her that she left because of a personal issue and apologizes. Palki is irritated and tells her to come fast and that she can't find Amar either. Shakti ignores the last part not wanting to hear his name…and promises to be there as soon as possible. She freshens up and calms herself down, which was impossible. She arrives at the set as she forces herself to act professional and heads to the same vanity van to get her dupatta. She walks in and sees Amar holding his face in his hands. She stops in her tracks remembering what had just happened…she moves closer searching the room with her eyes for the dupatta. She sees it beside Amar on the couch..he hears the jingle of Shakti's dori as she walks closer avoiding her eyes away from him. He looks up at her with his eyes red from crying and face wet from tears. She reaches for her dupatta…he places his hand on her arm to apologize…she yanks her arm back and her eyes finds Amar's face and is surprised by the state of his eyes and face. He stands up to face her..he is about to speak but she forgets his sad face and leaves the room in a hurry. She fights back tears as she was hurt by his behaviour but also in a deep corner of her heart she was hurt to see Amar like that. She heads to the set with an angered Palki….Shakti says Amar is coming. Amar eventually arrives and apologizes to Palki and not able to think of a good enough excuses so he decides to stay silent. They begin the shoot as Amar reads the script….wondering why Shakti was in the traditional outfit again.


. [The script] It is a traditional dress party at St.Louis College and Rey is suppose to hug Kriya in a passionate way when he arrives to the party late. Kriya is worried sick, after hearing the violence out on the streets and all the students are trapped in the college waiting for the riots to end. Here the Kriyansh love story will blossom as Kriya would kiss Rey on the cheek…not aware of what she is doing [Kriyansh script ends]. Shakti does not like the script one bit…but sucks up some courage and professionalism. Amar is happy about the script because he wants to hug Shakti very tight and apologize. The scene is taking place and Kriya leaps into Rey's arms and hugs him…Shakti quickly lets go and directors cut the scene as she let go too quick. Palki watches along side and observes Amar and Shakti. She notices the marks on Shakti's back and starts questioning about it to herself. Her eyes connect with Amar's and she notices the redness and sadness within and he looks away immediately. Palki puts two and two together and realizes that ArSha had a big fight for sure…and her last attempt at helping ArSha had failed when she told them to do choreography after the shoot. She decides not to get within their matter and tries to think of ways to get them together again. Back to the shoot, Shakti runs again into his arms again and this time Amar hugs her tight. She is wanting to let go, but can't because of the shoot. Amar whispers into her ear as the camera circles behind him….he says "Shakti I am sorry" she ignores it and the scene is complete…the only thing left was the kiss…she touches his face as her insides were fighting tears that were trying to come out..she leans in and kisses Amar on the cheek and holds the kiss for 30 seconds on his cheek, as required for the scene. Their scene ends as they will complete the rest of the story the next day. Shakti literally runs off after the shoot and changes and leaves the set with tears streaming again. Amar feels that Shakti will never talk to him again and cries at night thinking of all their good times together and how quickly he ruined it with his actions. Days go by and Amar tries numerous times to apologize, but Shakti keeps giving him the cold shoulder as his behaviour was unacceptable and that he also should know how it feels to chase after someone and apologize over and over, like she did before for Amar. Amar's attempts decrease as he too gets fed up and gets angry that she too was aggressive with him. He feels like it's a game that they both keeping playing back and forth with eachother.

[On another typical day at the shoot] Palki tells the D3 gang that they will get to party tomorrow as Channel V is hosting a party for the success of D3 and Humse Hai Life at a lounge in Bandra. [This was Palki's idea to the channel and also give ArSha time together again] Everyone is excited as they finally get to party again. The next day after the shoot everyone heads home to change and meet up at the lounge party. Shakti wears a tube top dress and feels happy that this will be the turning point for her being happy again. Amar on the other hand feels the same and is ready to be happy, single and ready to mingle. He is impressed by Abigail [lead of HHL] and plans to talk to her and get to know her and forget about the past and move forward. Everyone arrives at the party and Shakti is looking the hottest one out of everyone at the party. D3 and HHL mingle and start partying it up. Shakti notices Amar staring at her observing her beauty, she looks away and starts dancing. Amar hangs out with Abigail and they start dancing and Shakti can't help but take her eyes off of them. She goes to the bar and gulps down a couple of shots trying to forget about them and wants to feel free and loose and ready to party hard. The party starts rocking and everyone is dancing. Amar and Shakti do not realize that they were back to back dancing with in different circles of people. Shakti does a move and Amar does his step and their backs touch…they both turn around to say sorry…their eyes meet and both give attitude one another and look away. Amar goes to the bar with Abigail and they have drinks and chat. Shakti gets irritated as Amar has clearly moved on and she needs to find someone too…not noticing that she was jealous and ready to prove Amar that she too can mingle with others.

She shoots down more shots and notices Rupesh [Vishal of HHL] standing on the side watching the crowd. She decides to go up to him and mingle with him. Shakti speaks "Hi, I am Shakti" he does not look at her as his eyes are fixed upon Amar for some reason. He says "Rupesh" without looking at her. She follows his gaze and sees Amar. She speaks "Why are you looking at Amar?" Rupesh's focus breaks and he faces her and says "Amar?…meine usko kahin dekha hai" Shakti laughs and says "Um…Dil Dosti Dance?" He shakes his head and he goes into deep thought. Shakti is curious to know why Rupesh was questioning about Amar. Rupesh snaps his fingers and says "Charlie!" Shakti is irritated to hear Champa's name again. He explains seeing pics of Chamar on her facebook [Narrator note, Champa dated Nauman Sait…one of Rupesh's best friends—Him and Champa are mutal friends on FB…I did my research….btw I love Rupesh] Shakti starts laughing and starts calling her names and Rupesh is surprised, but laughs along as Champa is Champa. They both make fun of her as Rupesh is not close with her anymore. They both can't help but crack up and tell stories of Champa. Amar is watching for the side as he sees Shakti flirting and laughing with Rupesh and gets jealous. Shakti senses Amar's stare and grabs Rupesh into a dance and a romantic number and they slow dance close as Shakti whispers stories of Champa into his ear and both laugh. Amar gets even more jealous seeing their closeness and them flirting [Narrator note, they aren't flirting, but Amar is thinking their laugh and whispers in each other's ears are signs of flirting]. Amar decides to make Shakti jealous with Abigail, but his plan is not successful as Abigail introduces him to her boyfriend Vishal Singh [Narrator note- Abigail was dating him last I checked, I am not sure if they are currently..he is an actor as well from Saathiya and other shows]. Amar chitchats with Vishal and likes his company, but is not happy to see Shakti all over the HHL guy.

He excuses himself to get some air in the lobby of the lounge as Satrangi Re [another ArSha song] starts playing, which was luckily deserted as everyone was inside. Shakti follows him there, not sure why, but her insides were aching for her to follow him. He paces back and forth thinking of Shakti all over the guy and the music was not helping as it could be heard in the lobby….he stops in his tracks as his eyes meet Shakti. She walks up to him not sure why….maybe it was the alcohol getting to her head. She notices his jealous face and smirks and says sarcastically "Amar…is it just me or is something burning inside of you" She laughs..he looks away and she places her hands on his chest and whispers in his ear, "Nice try..trying to make me jealous…karma is a you know what" he gets angry and pulls her hands off of him. She stops laughing as the song is bringing back memories and the song plays: Tere jism ki aanch ko chhoote hi,Mere saans sulagne lagte hain,Mujhe ishq dilaase deta hai,Mere dard pilaghne lagte hain Shakti stares at him with sad eyes..his angered face calms down as he is noticing the change in her expression. She moves in and whispers along his neck and says "This song was so precious to us" She raises her head back and stares into his eyes as the song continues as they share a look look hawa hawa: Teri raahon mein uljha uljha hoon,Teri baahon mein uljha hoon,Suljhaane de hosh mujhe, Teri chaahon mein uljha hoon. Amar breaks the eye conduct…Shakti says "But you broke my heart" she looks down. Amar looks at her and questions "I broke your heart?" and laughs sarcastically. Shakti gets anger and says "That's why I hate you!" Amar shouts back "I hate you even more!" Shakti grips Amar's shirt with both of her hands and looks him deep in his eyes and they breathe angrly at one another.Amar grabs Shakti's head clutching her hair…and pulls her closer and plants a hard kiss on her lips…she kisses him back with all her strength…he pulls her hair and their lip lock breaks. He grips her hair tighter and leans down and kisses her neck…she wraps her arms around him and holds the back of his neck as he kisses her all over her bare shoulders and lifts her up against him and she wraps her legs around his waist as their breathing intensifies and he seats her in his lap as he finds the couch in the lobby.He yanks his jacket off and kisses Shakti like never before. The song along with this scene ends with,Mujhe maut ki goad mein sone de, Teri rooh mein jism dibone de,Teri rooh mein jism dibone de, Satrangi re manrangi re,Satrangi re manrangi re.


TO BE CONTINUED

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome...awesome...awesome and just awesome...such a romanic part...loved the last sequence!!! Simply loved it... aisa koi nahi likh sakta except u robin...u r awesome... luv ur work...do continue!!!! 😊
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it was just too hot n awesome
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OMG what an hot Update Awesome yar Plz do con soon canr wait for read more Hottt Updates :)

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ROBIN !!!!!!! I LOVE YOU 😳!!!! U r such an AWESOME WRITER !!!! I always Get engrossed in your FF . whenever I start reading it , I Feel as if NOTHING Is around 😍, ITS Me and ArSha and i never want it to end !!!!! U drive me to some other world , ArSha"S world . You make me crazy😃 . I can feel the PASSION with what u create this Megic !!!! And it dosent end here , After reading it , u dont let me sleep for the upcoming nights , leaving me wonder what poison will u create next to make me die once again. U r my favourite !!!! . I Loved it from the core of my heart Robin 😳, N please Pm the next time u write , i wanna die again , Lots of hugs for u🤗🤗🤗 !!!!!
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NO WORDS YAAR...FABULOUS...CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE...PLZ POST IT SOOONNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AWESOME...
DNT FORGET TO PM ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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OMG OMG!! that was HAWT!!! damn robin this is the third time i have repeated my comment..hahahh !! kya likhu??? u r sooo goooddd!!! last scene was super duper hawt!!! ☺️
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Thanks guys...I will thank u guys all individually after work...boy it was hard to wake up :0. Anyways, as I mentioned that I finished late I did not get to PM people asap...I will pm people (that haven't read it and promise to pm everyone next time
Edited by robinc07 - 13 years ago
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OMGGG superrr howtt!<3 I LOVEE THE ENDING!<3
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OMG OMG OMG!!!!! dat was awesum!!!!!! Luvd it!!!!!! It was amazing!!!!!!! I just hope after dis everything between dem bcums fine!!! Nd dey just stop PRETENDING 2 HATE eachother!!!!!! It's just out of d wrld!!!!! Plzzz update soon!!!!!!!! Nd plz plz plz pm me!!!!!


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