my baat-cutter-kriyaansh OS!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys,
so basically after seeing 2days epi, dis whole thing came in2 my mind!
even though, mere xams chal rahe hain, PAR XAMS KE LIYE D3 KI KURBAANI?
NO WAYS!😆
so i'm writg some stuff... actually rey's POV of wateva happened 2day!

Rey (thinking)- GOSH! I STILL CAN'T BELIEVE MY LUCK! 2DAY WAS DEFINITELY THE MOST HAPPIEST DAY OF MAY LIFE N I'VE NEVER FELT SO LUCKY BEFORE!😃
I mean, KRIYA GHAI, MY BAAT-CUTTER after a lot of waiting n my tapasya... FINALLY HUGGED ME!!!!!!
(looking up n talking) Haayyee... meri kriya ke universe ji, TUSSI GREAT HO! FINALLY FINALLY FINALLY MERI BAAT-CUTTER KO MERI BAHON MAIN BHAR DIYA!! (gives a flying kiss) LOVE YOU!!!!! *i sooo wish ki flyg kiss ka ek emoticon hota!!!*
(thinking again) I still refuse to believe ki old stair-case pe kya hua tha! kriya aur mein waha pahunch kar, yeh soch rahe hain ki kaha hide kare! Aur meri ms. dehradun being ms. dehradun ka dimaag chalna shuru ho gaya... I just cudn't help but smile at her innocent, sweet harkate! Soch raha tha ki KAB yeh ms. dehradun meri hogi soon! phir laga ki yeh sab sirf films main hota hain... real life main nahi! but den i realised ki films bhi toh real life se inspired hoti hain... mauka tha (old stair-case), woh thi aur mein tha! kuch toh karna tha jisse ki woh mere paas meri bahon main daudi chali aaye!
1st, i dropped something n spread my arms, but she said- oho rey! awaz mat karo!😆
phir, i dropped d phonen said sorry n again spread my arms, but jab aankhein kholi toh dekha ki kriya mujhe 😕 aise dekh rahi thi n said- preparation achi hain.. secret admirer ko welcum karne ki!😆
i had almost lost hope.. but den i heard kriya's scream n d next thing i knew...
USSNE DARR KE MAARE MUJHE GALE LAGA DIYA!!!!
My arms automatically went around her n she continued 2 hold me tighter... due to fright!
My heart did a little jig inside n i cud feel butterflies inside my stomach as i've neva felt lyk dat b4!
i cud hear her heart-beat... it was going lyk 20cc ki bike pe 100 ki speed se koi chala raha ho!;
i cud LITERALLY feel her breath... going fast... as if ki treadmill pe jog karte-karte kisi ne speed ko 1 point se 6 points main change kar diya ho!:
her sweet fragrance was driving me crazy!!!!!!
Den slowly, she broke d hug n looked at me... N SMILED!
DAT WAS IT! HER SMILING AT ME MEANT THAT SHE TRUSTED ME! IT WAS LYK D SUNSHINE O MY LIFE! I quietly shifted my gaze 2 d pigeon who was perched on my shoulder n slowly winked at it!
Den we heard sm1 cmg; both of us quickly hid smwere close by so as 2 c ki WHO IS DIS SECRET ADMIRER?
v both saw swayam n were confused as 2 wat was he doing here? suddenly, it hit us!
SWAYAM IS SHARON'S SECRET ADMIRER!
both of us came out of r hidg place n teased swayam a lot abt his "new status".; v convinced him dat swaron will hav sm PRIVACY n told him 2 hyd himslf in the old store-room n leave d rest 2 us!
den v made chits taaki sharon swayam ke paas ja sake n den went bak 2 r hidg place! den v saw sharon cmg up, seeing d clues n going 2 d old store-room where swayam was waitg 4 her!
kriya knew it ki sharon will freak out seeg swayam n so, d moment sharon went, she bolted the door frm outside!
she had just turned ard but slipped n b4 she cud fall, i caught hold of her n v both had r "hawa hawa look look" moment! smhw, v came bak in2 r senses n sat down in front of d store-room n decided 2 wait till THE JUDGEMENT comes out! after sm tym, i saw dat kriya was startg 2 fall asleep n b4 she wd fall, i quickly came near her n let her rest her head on my shoulder.
GOSH! she's nevrer lukd so beautiful! Karan Sir WAS RIGHT! Ladkiyan sote hue itni adorable, itni cute aur itni vulnerable lagti hain ki humara dil pighal jata hain! den hearg sm noise, she got up n v both kinda felt awkward! den i dropped her home.
(talkg 2 himself just d way he was spekg 2 kriya yes on phone) HAYE! YEH LADKI MUJHE PAGAL KAR DEGI! (nw lukg at Kriya's photo on his phone n kissing it) I LOVE YOU MY BAAT-CUTTER!

dats it guys!
i hope tum sab ko acha laga ho!
tym 4 me 2 go bak 2 ma studies!
tk cre
taniya

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww that was sooo cute... i luvd it... i hvnt seen 2days epi but ab toh books jaye bhaad mein n exams jaaye gadhe mein i hv 2 c the episode specially aftr reading ur os... it was beautiful
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Rey's POV...I can't even imagine what he might have felt when she hugged him
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Posted: 13 years ago
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kya yaar guys!
67 views aur 2 reply!
itni kanjoosi!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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do nahi 3 replys...!!! hehehe...!!
its sooo sweet yaar...rey was sooo happy...!!! just loved it...!!!

-Saumya
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow...man..so nice...a really long comment comming from me after a while...=D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Luv u my baat-cutter dat was nice :-D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so cute n that flying kiss to universe g was awesome cvs should include this part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome yrr... gud carry on...kria ka bhi POV post kro naa plss!! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww..dat was so cute...love it..

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