Originally posted by: SSsanasonu
I've read 6 chapters of ur ff.
WOWWW!!!!!!! Inncredible writing!! I M VERY SERIOUS & SOLEMN on dis-u can really bcome a GREAT DIRECTOR n WRITER !!! Wow! Thanksss so much. Lol you guys are making me think about it so much!
the way u write,the way u switch to chunks wid ease i.e. frm vancouver to india to flash baks to sonias partt to vaibhavis part'WOW!!,ur suspence,language,ur ideas AREE TTERrifiC!! Again, thank you so much Sana. I have no words to express how happy I am to hear it.
Ur intro of kria in a park ws fabBB!! haha. glad to know :D
n wow! U've got VAIBHAVI MERCHANT whom I admire sooo much! Hehe you're the only one who said that. Yes, I admire her too. 😳
swayam on sharons house'dis part ws also very cute!the reluctanat n disinclined sharons a treat to watch evry tym! It is! And here, you'll see lots and lots of that!
I LUVV Sonia for make-up krias mind for dancing AGAN!
ur flash baks r so heart-breaking n pushes me TO DEEP thnking 'WHAT MUSH HAV HAD HAPPENED???' That thought, put aside for while and enjoy the story 😆
sharon n kria FRNDS'WOW!!NICE THOUGHT Hmm!
both glancing the albums n recalling the OLD BEAUTIFUL TIMES ws sooo sweet(elegan thot)
ARRRGHHH!!! Y did sonia hv to disturb the thot n ruin my axiety by interrupting'HUH!!! Thank you. My friend at school made me re-write that scene like three times before she finally approved it! Lol, she read the part and she's like, You change this. I love her for that. 😆 WOW!! KRIYANSH
SH:y did u leave?
KR:I don hv the nerve to contact(OMGG!! WAT HAD REALLY HAPPENED)
THE SWEEETTTEEESTTT PART KR:hope u've told her by nao'AWWW!! I luv u kria (n the writers for this) hehe thanks! I'll pass the messsage to kria 😉
BUT GOD N ONLY U KNO WT IS DIS WEIRD THNG WICH IS KEEPING HER AWAY FRM HER FRNDS N 'REAYANSH' HUH!! M really exhausted n dog-tired thnking ovr this-wt HAD HAPPENED thng over n over again'plsss reveal the mystery ASAP!don killl me dis way.
SWARON PART ws sooo sweett'aww!!she, SHARON RAIPRAKASH is shedding tears for KRIA GHAI'WOWWW!!!!!! So soothing!! it indeed is dear. thanks!
U WRITE REALLY REALLY WELL 'but its time now dat rey is In the story n pLSS disclose the supence! hehe Rey is already in. Just keep reading 😳
wil rew. The othr chapters ASAP!
BUT COMMENDABBLE JOB!! Thanks once again!!