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chand1234 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
Very nice 😃 👏 👏 👏

👍🏼 👍🏼

Plzzz update everyday...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: radhikarani

am damm angry! Grr!
Scott mujhse sggstn liya aur mentn v na kiya.
Tanya aur avni ye mere diye hue naam h and bharti ko raj ki opp rakhne k liye kaun boli?
credit pls,
cholo khud hi bol di. Nw u Chillax 🤣


thnkuuu radhikey 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: bengalscott


@Bharti - I had already planned Rajeev K as the God but you were the last minute addition. Ankita told me to cast you somehow opposite Rajeev



thnx for listening her

@abt chapter 1

it was nice start just love rohit's character, he's sumwat like me n my real bro😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Just loved d frst part update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
Continued from last post...

"What is happening here?" Rohit's elder brother Rohan enters the house.

Mother: "What happen? Why came back so early?"

Rohan: "Ex-Director expired. Company called the day off. But you are mad on something?"

Ma: "What can I say? Rohit is getting crazier day by day. Today I sent him to shop for daal and he came back 'cause the shopkeeper said the price has increased. He's saving for that phone!"

Rohan: "Ha ha ha! That's funny! Why do you send him to shop? Better send the maid."

Ma: "That's not a solution. Almost 24 years, repeated twice in same year of the college. Still to clear the third year...I am fed up with Rohit."

Rohan: "Ma, why are taking it so seriously? He's still growing up. He will attain the maturity soon. Everything will be fine."

Mo: "That's not the answer, Rohan. Look at you...working day and night just for us. Can't he understand that?"

Rohan exhales, "Ma, I had to work because father died. But now I am here so Rohit will take his time. I feel great when I see him enjoying his life. Do you know why I let him to enjoy his life? I miss out those days. So I am enjoying my desires via him. He's not enjoying his life only...he's enjoying mine also."

Ma: "Rohan, what should I do without you?"

Rohan: "Nothing...but if you hadn't been here we should be starving. No get some food. Feeling hungry."

Ma:"Fresh up, I am serving your food."

Son-mother conversation ends on a sweet note. But they never had a struggling life. Although Rohan & Rohit's father died 3-4 years back, he left a good sum for his family. Rohan worked hard because he felt that he needs to get earning as soon as possible after father's death. But he is very protective about his brother Rohit. He loves his brother very much.

Rohit comes out of the bathroom, "Yikes, dada! You here so early?"

Rohan: "Office got closed."

Rohit: "Great! Lets hit the Playstation!"

Rohan: "Before that I need to eat."

Suddenly Rohit's ma enters, "and before that also, Rohit go to your college!"

Rohit: "Aww, ma please. Dada is home, let me spend time with him."

Ma: "No, exam is near. Go to college. Even you have tutions at the evening."

Rohit: "Oh hell! You just said follow Dada, so I have to be with him to follow him right?"

Ma: "Rohit, don't make me angry!"

Rohit: "Okay...okay..chillax...I'm going, I'm going."

Rohan: "Oh, I'm home today, we can play after 9 at night."

Rohit: "Date! 9 pm sharp!"

Rohan comes close to Rohit as his mother walked away, "Now, tell me how about your iPhone?"

Rohit smiles, 'I was just pulling mom's leg, dada. What will I do with iPhone?"

Rohan: "Sensible...what will you do with an iPhone?"

Rohit: "Yes, that is why I don't need iPhone."

Rohan: "Really?"

Rohit: "Yes Dada. Really. But instead of that I thing Samsung Galaxy Tab will do fine!"

Rohan: "Oh crap! Why don't you grow up bro?"

Rohit: "I grew up dada, see, instead of a 3 inches iPhone screen, I'm going for a big 7 inches Galaxy Tab! Growing up isn't it?"

Rohan, confusedly nods his head, "Yes, maybe, you really grew up! I'm still so immature!!"

Continued at next chapter: Some College...isn't it!




chand1234 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Very nice 👏 👏 👏



😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Hey ! Great !!!!!!!!!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
M glued 2 to this story ...nice really nice update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
superb haan, update sooon !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yaar its awesome cant say anything and d cnvrsations b/w d bros and b/w mom and rohan r well writtn well who is there as rohan? waiting for next part really it will be damn good aakhir college ki jo baat hai 😉 ...updt soon scott and keep it up...👍🏼

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