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Prachi

@justjayati

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#181

@bengalscott

awesome story... Sorry ...all these days i was a silent reader of this FF [i know much hard to believe]

But now as the climax is here!!!!

I want to tell u that u r an awesome writer. Very few people have the capacity to pen their thoughts so perfectly and I feel happy to say that u r one of them...

and one more thing... it was ur FF too [along with Aru's] that literally forced me to join the IF...

Carry on the good work...

"Paradise Lost" is an awesome piece of work... one ever has written in this FF!!!!!!!!!👏

Hats off to u from my side!!!!!!!!!!!!

and yes... Waiting desperately for ur next FF... Will comment regularly on that...😃

Edited by justjayati - 13 years ago

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bengalscott

@bengalscott

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: justjayati
@bengalscott

awesome story... Sorry ...all these days i was a silent reader of this FF [i know much hard to believe]
But now as the climax is here!!!!
I want to tell u that u r an awesome writer. Very few people have the capacity to pen their thoughts so perfectly and I feel happy to say that u r one of them...
and one more thing... it was ur FF too [along with Aru's] that literally forced me to join the IF...

Carry on the good work...

"Paradise Lost" is an awesome piece of work... one ever has written in this FF!!!!!!!!!👏
Hats off to u from my side!!!!!!!!!!!!

and yes... Waiting desperately for ur next FF... Will comment regularly on that...😃

Thank you for your kind and supportive words. Really encouraging. Actually I'm not a very good listener, so I always keep that thing in my mind while writing my stories. I use some word combination which would make the readers to find their own way out of my story. I don't like long stories, I love stories which are short but really enthralls me. This is a special FF for me as this is the first time I put my writing online which I hardly ever did. The best part is I never plan my stories, I just let them go as they want to.

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Prachi

@justjayati

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#183

well according to me, that's a good sign of a writer!!!!! Keep it up dear!!!!!!!!

as i said earlier... only a few people have the art to pen their thoughts in form of words... which is a very difficult thing... Trust me I often face it!!!!!! [during writing my FF]

Plz start ur new FF as soon as possible. desperately waiting for it...😊

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Swetha

@swethasyam08

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#184

awesome scott! wating for ur next update! do update soon. too much anxiety to know what it is😆

Swetha

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pallavi guha biswas

@pallo2504

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

Awesome story waiting for ur nxt ff hero

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bengalscott

@bengalscott

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#186

Continued from last post...

Dr. Gilbert's chamber after the meet.

Dr. Gilbert closed the book and put his glasses off to table, "I guess this is your first try, right Chopra?"

Dhanraj is sitting infront of Gilbert along side Dr. Seth. Dhanraj looks at Gilbert with a smile, "Yes, it is."

G:"I guessed so. We doctors are not so good writer, except those thesis. But somehow you managed to keep our attention with your book."

D:"Well, it's not a story, it's very much real. And the reality was too attentive."

Seth shrugged his body, pulled the chair front, "I am also a part of it. I know how true it is."

G:"Suhel, I must say that you are so mysterious in this book but that lobotomy was a real comedy!" smiles Gilbert.

D: "Then let me tell you the whole thing. Radhika Sharma, you know is the student of Georgia, who was the student of the year in 2007?"

G:"Radhika Sharma? Oh you mean the wonder Indian girl who cracked Georgia's toughest entrance exam? She's the one in your novel?"

D:"Exactly. She is the one. Radhika Sharma was the most brilliant student of Georgia. She scored around 98% in her finals...right sir?"

Dhanraj turned to Seth as Seth responded, "Yeah, something like that, 97.5% or something...and she was the gold medalist."

D:"Yes, that's right...she was the gold medalist of 2007 batch."

Gilbert stands up, makes his drink and offers Dhanraj and Seth. Both takes the drinks.

G:"So you mean to say that Radhika Sharma, became a patient, somehow and then died?"

Continued in next post...

Edited by bengalscott - 13 years ago