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Posted: 13 years ago
y dnt u born at goldn era of englsh literature :P
lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
Luved the story waitin for d epilouge n ur next ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
All Parts Were Awesome Simply Just Waiting For The Last Part . 👏👏👏👏👏👏
Edited by Radhikarani123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
The Epilogue: Paradise Lost...Regained


Radhika closes the Paradise Lost book and looks at Dhanraj, "Finished it."

D:"Did you like it?"

R:"Yes...but why so suspense?"

D:"I love thriller."

R:"And why Bharti?"

D:"Because...no reason."

R:"Why me as lead?"

D:"It was necessary."

R:"To kill me and marry Bharti...necessary?"

D:"She was my wife on the first place...didn't you read that?"

R:"Your wife?"

D:"Uh...I mean Dhanraj's wife."

R:"So who are you?"

D:"I'm Dhanraj Sharma...not Chopra."

R:"But I am Radhika Sharma...right?"

D:"Yes...but Mrs. Radhika Sharma."

R:"Or better to say Mrs. Radhika Dhanraj Sharma?"

D:"Sounds perfect."

R:"Now...the main part...you are eyeing my sister Bharti from a long time...so you fulfilled your fantasy with your story, huh?"

D:"Radhika...I'm a writer...and writer have to think fiction with real world."

R:"Is it?"

D:"Ofcourse...didn't you notice Dhanraj went mad after Radhika's death?"

R:"That's because preventing me from getting mad at you?"

Dhanraj's mobile rings, he receives the phone.

D:"Yeah Bharti...yeah your didi is mad at me...writers don't get independence these days...huh...okay...I'll be there with your didi...bye."

R:"Bharti called?"

D:"Yes...she told me that your dad and mom invited us for a dinner tomorrow."

Radhika gets close to Dhanraj and cuddles by him, "Thank god you're a writer not doctor. Otherwise those doctors are mad."

D: So I'm your hubby genius?"

R:"You're my darling."

Suddenly Charu enters the room, "Bhaiyaa, dinner is ready, mom is calling you both. Come on bhabhi lets go."

Radhika smiles, "Coming."

Charu leaves the room and Dhanraj kisses Radhika on her head, "Paradise...isn't it?"

The End
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow suppa suppa suppa suppa. Lvd it. Awesme.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow pata nehi ye kissy wissy padneke baad i fl blush. Ah ha.
Realy paradise
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb end and as aru said happy ending...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!!Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!Great !!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!Great !!!!!!!!!!!! !!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! Great !!!!!!!!!!!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
guys so D is mine. Nly mine.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow too good ending! loved it



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