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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 11: Believe

"Did you find anything?" asks Radhika.

Dhanraj and Radhika sitting on a bench at ICPMF lawn. Radhika looks extremely tired, frustrated. Dhanraj looks at her and then turns his sight forward.

D:"Nothing. No news of Charu. I want to ask you something."

R:"What?"

D:"If I say that no one is Charu? Actually Charu never existed and what you know is just a hallucination?"

Radhika smiles, "You want to make me an inmate?"

D:"No Radhika, no. Lets keep this straight as long as we can. The truth is Charu never existed. She was just a projection of your subconscious mind."

R:"Subconscious mind? What are you talking about?"

D:"Like...uh..like a dream. We all dream when our brain is idle. Your brain actually projecting your vision for fictitious Charu every time. Its just a form of hallucination."

R:"I also know the chapter Dhanraj, but to get a projection your brain needs to be idle. That's the point. Charu was with me even when I was extremely busy...by the way how did you know all these thing? You're a banker right?"

D:"I read it somewhere."

R:"Listen don't you try to show your knowledge on me. I'm far far far better than you."

"Not better than me", suddenly Dr. Bharti comes.

Radhika stands up in joy and screams, "Charu where have you been?"

B:"Now listen Radhika, I'm not Charu. I'm Dr. Bharti Singh. I'm a doctor here and wife of Dhanraj!"

Dhanraj stands up and shouts, "What the hell Bharti? Why are you doing this?"

Radhika looks both of them in a teary stunned eyes. "You both cheated me? You all did?"

B:"Yes, and now admit that you are a patient here, not a doctor of ICPMF."

Continued in next post...
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Posted: 13 years ago
what Dr. Bharti is wife of Dhanraj! 😲 wow tooo goood 👏

how many more twists do u have in ur story more 😆

do continue soon




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Posted: 13 years ago
as always... awesome!! i really really love ur style of writing... :) super cool!!! 👏 wat twists n turns!! amazing.. just love that!!! expect the unexpected, huh?? 😆

sorry i m busy wid studies these days so couldnt comment for ur previous update but this time i just had to!! 🤓

are u fed ur wid ur life ya aur koi pareshani hai kya??? 😒 No?? then why on earth u brought this twist???? 😲
B:"Now listen Radhika, I'm not Charu. I'm Dr. Bharti Singh. I'm a doctor here and wife of Dhanraj!"

boy, u must have underestimated my Radhi's powers!!! find a safest place for urself to hide!!!!!!! 🤣 🤣 run baby run.. she is not gonna leave u so easily now!! and she is not even going to leave me or bharti!!!!!! 😆 God save us!!!!!!!!! 😳
Edited by Charu21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Really Really Very Very Good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏👏👏👏
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Edited by Radhikarani123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
get lost.. Grrr u scott.
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Bt Wrtn stile is gd.
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Posted: 13 years ago
pehle to himalaya cliff se giraungi
fir anaconda k paas chod dungi
fir nile river me duba dungi
kehdo ye jhut hein.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Radhi ke hatho se Dhanraj gaya!!!
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Best ever update!!!!!!! 🥳🥳🥳
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Posted: 13 years ago
mere piskol kaha h? Drawer me. Me runing 2 kill D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Jo jee mein aaye kar lo...after all D is not anymore yours!!!! But I must say that
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"PICTURE ABHI BAKI HAIN MERE DOST!!" 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Continued from last post...

"How's going, Suhel?" asks the man.

Dr. Seth in his chamber with a man in his 50s.

S: "I am losing hope."

M:"I relied on you."

S:"Listen, I am still working on it."

M:"Suhel, you're my school friend. I know you are the most talented and gifted psychiatrist in this whole country...and the better part is you don't accept failure."

S:"I know Prakash, but the whole scenario is going out of my hand."

M:"This is all happening because of that new doctor!"

S:"C'mon don't blame h..."

M:"Please, please", he shouts, "don't you try to save that young one! The whole problem started because of that idiot. You said that everything will be fine. I told you I don't rely on that new recruit of yours."

S:"Cool down, Prakash, cool down. If you lose your patience, we will be in a deep trouble. I am trying to save everything."

M:"Can't you understand my pain? My agony?"

S:"Yes I can. But please be calm."

M:"Now tell me what is left?"

S:"It's our last resort to fight. I have just few hours left. Then I will bring out my best arsenal."

M:"Do it!"

Suddenly Radhika storms in to the room. She looks horrified. She runs in to the room and grabs Seth's arm.

R:"Save me save me. They are trying to kill me. They will push me back to the gorge."

S:"What? Who Radhika, who? Tell me Radhika, who?"

Suddenly Radhika stands up, looks at Dr. Seth, "Charu will kill you all, Charu will kill you all!" and runs away from the room.

S:"Radhika, Radhika..." he turns towards Prakash.

Prakash looks angry and have fierce look in his eyes. He comes closer to Seth.

P:"I told you once. Now see the result. You made your actions. Look at her!"

S:"Prakash..."

P:"Enough! Do you know who she is? Tell me!"

S:"Prakash", sighs Seth, "I am sorry for your daughter...Radhika."

P:"Now tell me where I can find that stupid bast*rd Dr. Dhanraj Chopra!"

Continues in next and climax chapter: Paradise...Lost.
Edited by bengalscott - 13 years ago

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