Karma Aur Niyaati : New FF part 1 pg 5 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Good Start Khushi. keep going dear👍🏼...and U get back Rushi back na.
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characterization and plot ..both r awesome khushi 👏 ..loved it..but aaj kal mujhe ajeeb sa dar lagane laga hai...my internship is abt to start in a few days..may be thats why...interviews bhi hone hain 😭 ...nervousness ho rahi hai ajeeb si 😭 ...dont know if i 'll b able to come on forums...but i'll try to visit if get tym 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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All d best bhargu

take few minutes frm ur schedule for urself

@all
thnx guyz, i'll put part 1 soon as u all noe my examz r gng on so pehle study then FF
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@ bhargu :

best of luck 4 ur interns dear 👍🏼..ab jaldi se journalist ban jana aur sabse pehle rushi ka hi interview lena !! ⭐️⭐️
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Karma Aur Niyaati !!! Love the title

yaar aik baat bata .. itna kaise soch lete ho ???
every time new lovely thoughts and stories ??

Hatts off 👏
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Thnkuuu so much guyz for the lovely comments
I'll post 1st part very soon 🤗
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Wow new FF
Do continue soon
Thanks for the PM
❤️ Prachi
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Thnx prachi
will continue soon :)
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Thnku so much guyz for ur comments 🤗
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Part 1

Abhishek is returning from skool with meera ...
A: hey u noe , i hv got gud marks in the test
M: me too , ok lets have ice cream
abhishek dnt want to hv it as he dnt hv money but his best friend understand it
M: chal , i'll treat u
it brings a smile on his face , while thy were having icecream
A: is baar dad ayenge milne to i'll take money n then we'll hv sum more ice cream
both got happy n after having it thy return home

Zeenat was doing namaz when abhi returns home , he knocked the door several times n after few minutes she opened the door , abhi hugs her tightly
A: itni der kyu laga di maa
Z: i was sleeping , dnt heard the knock
A: maa u noe , i hv got gud marks in the test
Z: oh gr8 , then u must want sum treat
A: no , meera has already given me treat
Zeenat feels bad ... abhishek changes n was having food
A: maa , dad kab aayenge
Z: kyu , kya kaam aa gya dad se
A: mujhe meera ko ice cream khilani hai , usne mujhe khilaayi na
Zeenat goes to the room n bring sum money n give it to abhi
Z: take it n hv sum more ice cream
Abhi got so happy , he leaves the food n ran outside the house to meet meera n hv sum more ice cream.
Zeenat too was happy for it.

In the evening
The phone rangs
Abhi: hello , whose there
Ajay: hello son , hw r u
Abhi screamed with joy : papa
Zeenat hears his voice n came outside with joy
Abhi: papa , when r coming back
Ajay: soon my tiger , ok now give the phone to ur mother
Z: hello
Ajay:how r u
z: m f9 , hw r u
Ajay: m coming tonite , we'll have dinner together
the phone cuts , zeenat got so happy
z: abhi, ur dad is coming tonite
abhi: r u serious m yahhh
he starts dancing out of joy
zeenat smiles looking at him n he ran outside for telling it to meera.
zeenat prepare his fav food, its 8.30 om now n zeenat n abhi both r ready n sitting on the terrace waiting for ajay but as time passes , thr wait gets waste
abhi: main kabhi papa se baat nhi karunga
z: listen to me
Abhi : no m not , n he ran away from the house
after few minutes , she got worried n called his brother Mr. sadiq n told him the whole situation
Mr. sadiq goes n search abhi , he was sitting upset in a garden n a hand came on his head , he turns n looks at him , it was his philosopher n guide , he was very close to him after his mother , abhi immidiately looked at him n hugged him tightly.
S: wat happen
Abhi: m very angry with papa
S: y so , wat has he done now
Abhi: he lied again
S: wat if , if he's relly stuck into sum work
Abhi looks at him n as he looks into his eyes , al his frustation n anger is gone down .
S: he's a doctor my son , he got sum responsibility towards his patients n for a doctor , his patients are more important then his family , people call them God.
abhi isslowly getting wat he was saying
Abhi : but he can call n inform us abt the same
S: may be he dnt get time , u noe he loves u n ur mother like anything, its bad when u react like this , it can hurt ur mother, u hv to take care of ur mother , she might too felt bad when ajay dnt came
Abhi: m sorry (he makes a sad face)
S: ok go home now , she's worried for u
Abhi stands n touches his feets n ran back to home. Mr. sadiq stands smiling.

Precap: Ajay came to meet zeenat n abhishek.

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