Karma Aur Niyaati : New FF part 1 pg 5

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Hello guyzzz
M here with a new FF of mine
Sum of you hv read my previous FFs but u all inspired me for writting a New FF
So Here I am with A new FF with Rushi & Manishji as leads followed by many other characters ...


Index

Charactersketch pg 1

Plot pg 1

PM list pg 1

Part 1 pg 5



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Posted: 14 years ago
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oye hoy kya baat kya baat !! now khushi will also write FF !! 🥳
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Charactersketch

Rushi as Abhishek

He's a 14 year old boy , fun loving, naughty n loved his mother nothing like anything, soon his life changes n he lost his mother n then decides to change the circumstances with the help of his guide n philosopher Mr. qureshi.

Deepti as zeenat

Mother of abhishek, she's a lovely lady but fall in love with a hindu guy n married him but the then society dnt except it n she has to face the circumstances by giving away her life.

Manishji as Mr. sadiq qureshi

He's a teacher n brother of zeenat , he takes care of Abhishek n his l'il Sister after zeenat's death n also helps abhishek to fight with the society.

Mohnish behl as Ajay rathi

Father of abhishek n zeenat's husband, love abhishek like anything but due to society he has to sacrifice his love.

Aashika Bhatia as Meera

Best frnd of abhishek , always with him in thick & thin.

Ashnoor as shobha

Abhishek's l'il sister

Will introduce more characters as the story proceedes.
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Edited by BhartiKhushi909 - 14 years ago
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Plot

Abhishek is now a happy person living with his children n wife happily but he'll never forget the struggles of his life, he'll never able to forget the struggle of his mother & father for the survival of their love n dignity.

It was a story during the division of India & Pakistaan...

Zeenat was a sweet girl , she was studying in a medical college , soo she fell in love with a guy Ajay, he's her classmate , both love each other instead of thr difference in caste, thy decides to marry but the society oposses them but still thy marry secretly n soon thy r blessed with a baby boy Abhishek.
Time is changing but the minds r the same , as abhishek is growing up thr struggle is getting bigger n bigger.

Zeenat marries ajay but does not document or acknowledge their marriage as it was done without any traditional upholdings. The fact that she had children with a Hindu man forces her to hide her faith and live her life as a Christian women even in front of her son. After his father's death, Abhishek realises his mother is a Muslim and makes him promise to bury her according to the Muslim faith when she dies, for it is only through a proper burial that she will be able to find herself reunited with her lover in heaven.

The whole story revolves around hw abhishek fight with the world in such a small age for the sake of reuniting his parents in the heaven ..n the 2 person who became his partners n guide are Mr. sadiq n meera.

P.S. = This story is inspired by a hindi movie but it moves as i want it to move.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow di Characterization is so good...
Yeh monish behl kaun hai?
Starting is too nice...👏...plz update soon..it seems interesting .
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PM List

Do hit the Like button if u want PM of Updates
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Originally posted by: indupriya2008

Wow di Characterization is so good...

Yeh monish behl kaun hai?
Starting is too nice...👏...plz update soon..it seems interesting .


😲

u dnt noe mohnish behl😲



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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow intresting👏
waiting for this new story😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ khushi : wow !! it's beautiful, plz carry on !! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Khushi di,,,a very refreshing story...and no PM for me...i will visit ur FF regularly...

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