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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow ritu...its great update...i loved the part...bas principal ko nhi pehchan payi...but baki sab awesome...keep updating dear...and welcome to writer's group
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Omg ritz sweatheart its sooo gud,such an awesum beigning,character sketch is fab,its really interesting..teri ye pratibha(skill) abi tk khan chupi thi😆,awesum work keep it up n update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow lovely
what a ff
this is relly very nice
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: superdil19

wow lovely

what a ff
this is relly very nice


FF means fan fiction.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: nivren

Veryyy nice idea kanau !! 🤗 Soomaaru chandagi bardidi yaaar !! Baritaa iru kanau ! Matte forum mele neenu Bengaluru goguva tanaka chooru jaasti bartaa iru !!🤗


Thnx Abhi...try madtini..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: jhum_86

wow ritu...its great update...i loved the part...bas principal ko nhi pehchan payi...but baki sab awesome...keep updating dear...and welcome to writer's group


Thnx Aru ji...
aapse acha nahi..aap aur Khushi to masters hai..👏
Aur wo princi ko mai khud nahi pehchanpayi😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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pata hai ajkal mujhe cgm se jyada cgm ff pr interest hai...aur ye sare characters cgm se jyada zinda lagte hai lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: jhum_86

pata hai ajkal mujhe cgm se jyada cgm ff pr interest hai...aur ye sare characters cgm se jyada zinda lagte hai lol


sach kaha...aapka ehsaas kab update hoga?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Amazing story ritu😃...perfect characters👍🏼continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 2

Mr Gupta comes to the staff room..he is a bit disturbed
''Kya Hua Madhav?''
Mr Gupta looks back...there is Mrs Bhattacharya..She is the english teacher...she is older than Mr Gupta...very loving...treats the whole staff as her own family...
''Mai aapko Madhav bula sakti hun na?''
Mr G: sure ma'm...isme puchne wali koi baat nahi...
Mrs B: Aap pareshaan lag rahe hai...yaha ki bachon ne pehle hi din pareshaan kardiya kya?
Mr G: kuch nahi ma'm...
Mrs B: Aap mujhe bata sakte hai...
Mr G: mai ek student ke baare me sochraha tha...Jai...Jai Ahuja..
Mrs B: Jai Ahuja ne aap pe bhi jaado chala diya...
Mr Gupta is surprised...
Mrs B: he is a very smart kid...but bohot silent hai..Bohot buri paristitiyo se guzarna pada tha bache ko...


Bell rings...

Mrs B: Meri class hai..see u later Madhav..


Jai is sitting in the library...Akshay comes running to him..
Akshay: Jai..jaldi bahar aao..mujhe baat karni hai..
Jai: Kya hua...itna haaf kyun rahe ho?..Phir se compound ke bahar wale Doggy ko pathar maara kya?
( there was a dog outside the school comp..Akshay loved the dog very much..but once, accidently he had thrown a stone at him...Since then the Dog used to chase Akshay whenever it used to see him)
Akshay: Gupta sir tumare baare me puch rahe the...
Jai: mere baare me...tune kya bataya?...Wait let me guess...Tum waha se bhage chale aaye..hai na?..
Akshay was quite...
Jai: Tume teachers se itna dar kyun lagta hai...agli baar mai khud Gupta sir se milunga...ab class chale..


Mr Gupta is in the staffroom searching for Student Info Register..and he gets it..


He turns the pages quickly...G, H, I, J...
Mr Gupta: Got it..Jai Ahuja...
Guardian's name: Narayan Swaminathan
Mr Gupta is thinking...
''Jai ne apne parents ka naam nahi likha hai...kya uske parents...I have to find out.''


School gets over...all students have left...Mr Gupta is waiting for Mrs Bhattacharya..
Mr Gupta: Ma'm...one sec..aap mujhe plzz Jai ke baare me bata sakti hai...I mean maine uska info check kiya and waha uska guardian..
Mrs B : I know...ok maine uski story Principal sir se suni thi..I'll tell u


Jai ki maa Tamilnadu se hai. wo Army join karna chahti thi...par uski family nahi chahti thi ki unki eklauti beti army me jaye. Par she was adamant...Wo jab Army camp me thi tab use Jai ke father Ram Ahuja se pyaar hua...
Mr G: Major Ram Ahuja?...wahi jo Mumbai bomb blasts me involved the?

Mrs B: ha wahi...yakin nahi hota...kaise log apna rang badal lete hai?

Mr G: aur Jai ki ma?

Mrs B: Itna sab hone ke baad..aur kya hota...logo ki galiya sune se acha unhone maut ko gale lagaya...Bechara Jai..tab sirf 10 saal ka tha...maa ko apne saamne marte hue dekhkar almost coma me chala gaya tha...

Mr G: phir ye Swaminathan?

Mrs B: Jai ke mama hai...wo bhi ab Mumbai me settle hue hai...unke koi bache nahi hai..to Jai ko hi apna beta maante hai...I really feel sorry for Jai...Jab bhi class me maa pe koi bhi topic aata hai to bechara gumsum ho jata hai..

Mr G: Oh..ab samjha ki aaj class me aise kyun tha?

Mrs B: Ji kya kaha?

Mr G: kuch nahi..thnx ma'm..aap ghar jaye..bohot late hogaya hai..c u tmrow...

Mr G is coming to his room...he is lost in thoughts when he accidently dashes a woman...

Mr G: Iam extremely sorry...

Woman: Koi baat nahi ji..padosi hai.aise hota rahega ji..takrana wakrana...

Mr G: Padosi?...

Woman: ha ji..myself Jasmeet Khanna, wife of Purab Khanna, mother of Geetika Khanna...Namaste ji😊

Mr Gupta was quite...
(to himself)...ye kya non stop apni family ki introduction kar rahi hai😲

''Oye Jasmeet..ab bas bhi kar...bechare school se thakkar aaye hai...''
It was Purab Khanna...he was also a new teacher...Hindi teacher

Purab: Sorry sir...Iam also new here..aapke pados me rehte hai..chaliye..ek chaai hojaye
Mr G:..no thnx Purab..aaj...
Jasmeet: Oye nahi ji..koi bahana nahi chalega..Chandigarh me..
Purab: jasmeet...😡

Mr G agrees and he goes to their home...
The walls r filled with decorative handicrafts, Paintings, and a large India map...made of matchsticks...

Mr G: ye kaha se kharida...

Jasmeet comes in with tea and biscuits...
Jasmeet: Kharida he ji...koi Khareede wareeda nahi hai ji..ye hamari titli ne banaya hai ji..haa

Purab: Ha sir..ye meri beti ne banaya hai...Titli..
A young girl comes in...

Titli: hello sir..myself Geetika Khanna...pyaar se Titli kehte hai sab...

Mr G: Oh hello dear...kaunse school me padhti ho?

Titli: Mai Vidhyaniketan me padhti hu...7th std me hu..😊



Titli is a bubbly girl, very talented and creative...
She loves singing and is very proud of India..uske saamne kuch bhi bura kaho desh ke baare me..then u r at ur own risk😉


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