Story : On The Bank of River Jhilum - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wah ji wah
main to desperate ho rahi hu ab aage padne ke liye n show me dekhne ke liye
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yayyy...i loved it Aru...thank u so much...plz update the next part asap😛 i love the story of alex and cgm😃


@ Radhi
Alexander had no sign of cruelty on his face...dekha dekha😆 Alex itna bhi bura nahi hai and as far as i know later Alex will have a good relationship with chanakya and Cgm😉...baki toh only Aru can tell😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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carry on jhum, keep on posting !! i hope d sagar's shows dis on - screen also . bdw, who's d writer of d book 4m which u r translating all dis??
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: jhum_86

PART-2

The army camp of Alexandar was temporarily situated on the bank of jhilam..as Greeks won the battle so an atmosphere of happiness had spread among the soldiers of camps...they are celebrating their win..the tent of
Alexandar is in the center of the camp..it was situated on a comparatively high land and its well decorated..after the victory he entered into his tent with pride and kingly attitude..slowly night came ..hundreds of torches of fire started to glow...from a far away place it seemed that countless no. of will-o-the-wisp are glowing and moving in the deodar forest on the bank of jhilam.
On the door of the tent of Alexandar the armed guards were standing...inside the tent the room is very wide and well decorated..weapons are spread here and there ..the room is very bright with the flames of a no. of lamps..a persian carpet is stretched on the floor of the room..king is sitting on the center of which surrounded by his friends and generals..after refreshing himself Alexandar was having dinner..his upper portion was bare two kafri servants were massaging his body with oil..in front of him grapes and other fruits and a huge lamb roast has been served on golden plates... Alexandar
was eating that pieces by pieces and discussing about the ar and their wining strategy with friends..all of them are too happy..they are very excited too..
On that time Alexandar was around 30..he wasn't tall but had a muscular body like iron..his muscles were the proof of his bravery..in this young age h had conquered half of the world ..he knew there was no warrior like him..that's why his good-looking face had expressed pride for that...
He finished his dinner...servants covered his body with a stole of fine silk..he ordered and servants cleaned the dishes and served wine on the glasses made by stones having fine crafts on them..Alexandar was addicted to wine.. this addiction caused his death in the age of only 34...but he didn't lose his sense easily. when his friends and general rolled down on floor then he used to sit straight and laughed at their
lack of drinking capacity.. he was proud of his own drinking capability.
He poured Irani wine into golden glass and was about to drink .suddenly a guard came and with honor told that a prisoner wants to meet him.. Alexandar was surprised..he was famous for his merciful behavior with his prisoners...about 9000 Hindu soldiers were caught in the war of hidaspis and all of them were well-treated by Greeks..that is why never ever any prisoners wanted to meet him..and too at night??..
Alexandar : what does the prisoner want??
Guard : my lord he only wants to meet you and saying he has important talks with you.. he has given dinner but he refused and saying that if he won't get permission to meet the king he won't touch a single drop of water...
Alexandar became curious and ordered to bring the prisoner..
Two soldiers entered with the tied hands prisoner who was none other than our beloved Chandragupta. The king observed him with a halk eye..he watched the prisoner is around 17-18 years old with a well built physic and his face was expressing intelligence..his eyes had an amazing spark and confidence ..no doubt the young prisoner was handsome and brave enough.. Alexandar understood the prisoner was not an ordinary one..sign of aristocracy was being expressed from his look...
On the other hand CGM was also observing him..and thinking is the greatest conquer of world is so young in age..and still there is no sign of any cruelty on his face..CGM felt he has started respecting Sikandar..
Both stared into each others eyes silently for a while..then Alexandar ordered to untie his hands...the guards fulfilled his order and left..


awesum part aru👍🏼..thanx for update..
wow alexander was superb personality haan..thanx for pm n keep updating..loving it..👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh Wow Aru...This story is amazing..Thanks for the PM and please updating..I must say Alexander seems to be a great personality and massive hopefully they take someone with all these talents and who can portray him exactly how he seems to be...I cannot wait for the next part..In our history even the Villon have a andaz and nirala style...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Alex villain nahi hai...Dhannu villain hai...Alex and Cgm are 2 diamonds who were polished in the same century and both are gr8...i mean Alex thoda sa bura hai and Dhannu bahut bura hai🤣
At least Alex ne kisi ki wife ko gift wrap karke present mein nahi diya😡...kisi k bachho sher ka lunch nahi banaya😆 aur kisi brahman laat nahi mari...apmaan nahi kiya😳us hisaab se alex is a hero...main phir se shuru ho gayi uski tarafdari karne mein🤣 sorry😆

On that time Alexandar was around 30..he wasn't tall but had a muscular body like iron..his muscles were the proof of his bravery..in this young age h had conquered half of the world ..he knew there was no warrior like him..that's why his good-looking face had expressed pride for that... WOW😛 wonderful description by the writer... now i'm even more scared...how would production house cast such a nice guy...kahin sagar's wale meri naak na katwa dein😆

Plz Aru...update soon i wanna know aagey kya hua😉
Edited by Historylover - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Jhilum Nodir Teere - By Saradindo Bandhopadhyay, my favourite author...I have yet to read your version, will read and come back to you on this :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: tintiny

Jhilum Nodir Teere - By Saradindo Bandhopadhyay, my favourite author...I have yet to read your version, will read and come back to you on this :)



hello jayatidi...ami jantam je tumi eta janbei...ebong bolbeo..ami khub ekta bhalo translation or presentation korte pari na..tai jatota parchi nijer moto kore korchi..ei great writer ke hubahu present korar khamata amar nei..tai i am presenting it with my touch of imagination..hope you would understand and consider me...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Thanks Aru...AWESOME STORY yaaar...totally enjoyed and savoured every bit of it...
I have a story also ...of why Aambhik sold Gandhar to Alexander...should i start a topic on it...and share it with u all??
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: nivren

Hey Thanks Aru...AWESOME STORY yaaar...totally enjoyed and savoured every bit of it...

I have a story also ...of why Aambhik sold Gandhar to Alexander...should i start a topic on it...and share it with u all??



Ya Abhi we are waiting for your part...

@bhargu & polly

the writer's name is Sharadindu Banerjee...one of the greatest versatile author of the bengali literature...though he was best historical fiction writer ever..but people knows him as the creator of an eternal detective character Byomkesh Baksi...remember in our childhood on Doordarshan actor Rajit Kapoor used to play the role of Byomkesh Baksi..it was a very popular tv show of its time...my this story is written by that greatest author..though i am presenting it in my way as i'm nt gifted with that quality of writing


Edited by jhum_86 - 14 years ago

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