Story : On The Bank of River Jhilum

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karuu

@Manipadma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#131

suuupeerrrbbb...wowww...kyaa baat haiii !!!!...ek jagat jetaa ko parast karke cgm ne dikha diya k bas wahi akhand bharat ka swapn puara kar sakta hai...wat a wiil power !! Wat a confidance n wat a faith !!!
Thnk u so much aruuu for this lovly stry... Aise laga mano kuchh der k liye hamne sach me zilam ki sair kar lee hai... 😊 👏 👏 ... U hv d power in ur writing dat one can visualise d stry...plzzz dnt stop here...we all want more n more sach beautiful stories frm u... 😊 keep it up...

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Kamalika

@KamalikaG

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Posted: 14 years ago

#132

A Stupendous and wonderful effort jhum.👏 I was thoroughly mesmerised by the story...durdanto, fantabulous..👍🏼 I am speechless...
Please aro likho erom.

Thank you...😊

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Cuty16

@Cuty16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#133

Hye dear,
thanks for the update,
the story was realy nice but it ended that is sad.
Loved the convo dialogs between cgm & chanakya.
Looking forward to see some more
stories by u,u write realy nice.

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Ashi

@ashi.melodyfire

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

superb story so well written aru ji !!!!!

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Prachi

@justjayati

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

wow aru...just loved it...meri liye toh nayi mamories hi hain!!!!!

Loved the conversation between Alex and cgm... simply awesome and absolutely flawless...👏

thnx 4 the pm...

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bengalscott

@bengalscott

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Good translation...but reading hindi in english is another pain! 😆 But kudos for your effort.

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Swetha

@swethasyam08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

wow too good one! loved every part of the story. 👏

Swetha

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Deepa

@harshdb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#138

thanks for the pm... pls give me lil. more time i will read all parts and reply.. i caught up with some problms.. so could not read and can not until sunday...