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Awesome twist, Avantika. Loved it!
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Chapter 29


1.5 months later...


It was a Morning time in Barsana . Except for birds , cows and devotees ,the village was not active. It was still trying to get up from slumber.Sunrays filtered through the thick trees and it was reflected in Yamuna's water.Calves were running along with street kids. These Kids used to take them to graze Barsana resounded with the calls of peacocks ,myna and sparrows.There were many ponds which used to cater to water needs of people.Yamuna was flowing silently around the village as garland.
There are many devotees in Vrindavana who regularly bathe in the Yamuna, and this cleanses all the contamination of the material world.

Nandini was sitting in the temple of Krishna in Barsana.She is now heavily pregnant and can go into labor at any time.Mechanically,she prayed to her infallible lord who was showering his nectarine glances onto her. The temple was clean and it was no less than Devaloka. People sang Krishna's glory continuously. When Nandini was small,she used to come to Vrindavan along with her mother Avantika. This place is not new to her. So she has settled here soon and her host Subhadra and Dev were sweet and kind enough to take good care of her. but it was her mind...looks like its not settling here. It was not occupied with the thoughts of labor,but it was filled with his thoughts. What can she do? How can she go to Magadh.. she thought if she can take Subhadra's help.by appraising her situation and truth. .again she was apprehensive! Will revelation of truth lead to further confusion.. will it lead to leakage of plans and push Chandragupt and Magadh to unpleasant situation. Was it wise to keep quiet or can she take some bold steps...How long she should live here..how can she support her baby... What if Chandra never found her ? Well she had no answers ..Mind always asks and thinks about situations but it does not think of any viable solution or find solace.. Isn't it strange..

A cool soothing hands touched her shoulder . When she turned she was astonished and exclaimed "Chandra..you came?"... She cried embracing him.

"Nandini..." he soothed her hair with gentle strokes..."I am here.. I have found you". He smiled ..

Twenty five days ...later

On a fine sunny morning,Magadh was brimming with celebration. Everywhere people wore new cloths and happily decorating their homes. On every cross roads, rose water mixed with sandle and turmeric are being sprinkled. Ladies of the house were decorating their houses with auspicious mango leaves. Kids were happily playing in the roads.

Conch shells of Krishna temple and Shiv temples are blown by respective priests. It was so divine as the sounds of conch shell made sky to viberate and as a result even waters of Ganga had ripples.The city's streets were cleansed by the intoxicated elephants belonging royal family, .The beauty further enhanced the city by placing of trunks of plantain and betel-nut trees in all major places.

Palace was more busier and appeared most beautiful as there were tall, festive columns, and also archways decorated with flower garlands, cloth banners and precious gems. Arrangements of auspicious, full waterpots, aguru-scented incense, and lamps graced every doorway of the palace.Those who belonged to the royal families of the Kuru, Sjaya, Kaikeya, Vidarbha, Yadu and Kunti clans joyfully met one another in the midst of the crowds of people excitedly running here and there.

Avantika was very busy and could not hold her excitement. The brahmanas recited auspicious Vedic hymns, which purified the environment by their vibration. The experts in reciting old histories like the Puranas, the experts in reciting the histories of royal families, and general reciters all chanted, while singers sang and many kinds of musical instruments, like bhers and dundubhis, played in accompaniment.

Moora gave cows, completely decorated with cloth and jewels, in charity to the brahamanas and also gave them hills of grain, covered with cloth decorated with golden embroidery.

Durdhara came to Moora and handed over Mrinalini to her and went to attend chores .She was very busy as she has to ensure that welcome ceremony goes without any hassle.Moora beheld little Mrinalini as she smiled.

"Beta.. Teri Mamashri aur Bua ane wale hein..unke sath do nanhe bache aah rahe hein.. Ek bhai aur ek behan..tere liye..tum unki sabsi badi didi ho"

Durdhara as usual was very busy and was supervising Dasi'. Helena came near Moora and "Ma... Humare ghar ...aj hi roshan hua.. Mene nam thai kar diya hei"

Moora" Helena... tum jo nam thai kar liya hei..whahi hoga unke nam".

Durdhara came.."Ma... weh aah gaye".

Moora" Avantika go bulao..usko arthi lene ko kaho..jaldi.. durdhara tum jakar Chanakya ji aur Sujatha ji ko aane ke liye prasthan kaho.. Humare pas samay bahut kam hei"..

Chandragupt stepped down from horse and went to the palanquin which was carrying nandini.He helped nandini to get down. Along with her Subhadra and Devadutt were also present.Nandini took one baby and Chandragupt took another in his hands.

Avantika took arthi for them and kept tikka in their foreheads.

"Swagatham...suswagatham"..Avantika cried uncontrollably.Durdhara consoled "Ma.. ap bhi... aj apko prasan hona chahiye".Chandragupt smiled at Durdhara consoling words.They both shared glances.Durdhara broke the glance and took the babies in her hands. Avantika became over protective

"Beta sambahlke".

Durdhara did not listen " Ma.. aaj mein apki nahi sunungi.."Helena and Moora too joined them.Chanakya was addressing Dev and thanking him for saving nandini.

Nandini was very tired so,she was taken to her room along with babies..Chandragupt addressed HIS PRIME minister" Tomorrow.. I am planning Namkaran for my children. And also for my sister's daughter. Before that I want to address magadh ki praja..please make arrangement "

Chandragupt after finishing his duties for day went to Nandini's chamber.Nandini was awake and sitting and reading some book.He came and snatched the book and asked where are the babies Nandini"?

"They are with Durdhara and Ma.." Nandini answered with a pride.."Chandra .. You first answer me this question.. How did you locate me?"

Edited by Avantika1115 - 8 years ago
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I am going away for a week. So I may not have internet access for a week. But do send me a PM if you update in the meanwhile. I will catch up with the story after I am back.

Avantika I loved the current chapter. I loved the descriptive sections and also the way Nandini and children were welcomed in Patliputra. You left the ending in suspense. Just like Nandini, I too want to know how Chandra discovered Nandini and her whereabouts.
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Chapter 30

Chandragupt "Nandini.. Well Its a long story".Nandini began to listen his tale with eagerness of a small child.

Let them be in their world for some time.Because before I proceed to say the story ,I Have to tell about some other person who is going to play an important role in the life of our King.

Place

Mathura Kingdom of Sooraseni.

Raja Vajranabh was seated in his palace garden. He was very sad. His wife Sucharithra , Came before him. The Old King did not even pay heed to her.

"Maharaj... What is the problem. Why you are so worried ...Any thing Serious?"Inquired Sujatha."Sujatha.. You don't know.. matter is quiet grave and complicated".

"What is that majesty"? Vajranabh took an parchment and handed over to Sujatha.She opened it and read the contents."Maharaj.. this is from King of magadh. Chandragupt. It says, that we have to accept him as our Emperor. Else We have to face him in war" "Exactly ,my queen.Looks like Chandragupt is planning to expand his kingdom. Do you know Maharani. His wife Helena and His brother madav are very able warrior. When Selucus was stationed at Kapilavasthu,single handedly Madav went and subdued him.While his wife Helen kept King Ambhi at bay in Kausambhi.

Sujatha with tint of Sarcasm" So he trusts his wife. Did his arm loose the strength to wield a sword?

"No.. No.. Its because at that time,he had to be in Pataliputra,because Nand had sieged the south entrance of the Fort".

"I see.. Maharaj I heard his wife Nandini was living in Barsana for some time .I also came to know that she delivered twins in Devdutt Pandit's House".

"Yes..Mahrani.According to my spies,they accused nandini on some pretext of cheating and murder .Later It was revealed as trap laid brilliantly by Chanakya and Chandragupt to nab some traitors who tried to challenge his rule.. They are cunning too maharani. They don't trust their force alone, sometimes they do device some dubious plan to usurp small independent Kingdoms like Ours. Vajranabh was wistful in his talks. Sucharitra"Maharaj.. What you have decided"?

"What else., See ,we cannot oppose them.. So " Vajranabh tried to swallow his words

"No Father.. Mathura will never fall under any Kingdom.."a sweet voice with powerful pitch shrilled in the garden

"Asandhimitra" Both King and queen in accusatory tone

"Putri.." Vajranabh tried to allay her

"Pitashri... We are Soorasenis. How can we forget our valor and surrender before that King of Magadh

Asandhimitra was their only daughter.They had no sons,so King trained her as Prince.she h=is hardly around 15 years. Asandhimitra knew politics,warfare and fine arts.She was beautiful and cultured too.
Sucharitra"Asandhimitra..Putri..you are too young for this matter. Better don't meddle in this. Tomorrow you will be married of to some Kingdom.Its better you learn how to manage house and deal with Husband. You will be mother of sons.When they grow up,you know how it will be to send your children to war"

"Maashri..Aim surprised. Isn't you who made me learn all warfare and acquainted in politics. Today you advise me to look after Family life. Its must,I don't deny that.But freedom Of Mathura is more important than that. Do you think I can live peacefully after seeing my kingdom as slave to Magadh. Will that not hurt me.. What is the use of knowledge if it cannot be put into use. What tales I can say to my sons.. That We are slave to Magadh.Will that not make them coward. Say me Mother. Pitashri I am not afraid of That Chandragupt or Chanakya. .. I am eager to meet Chandragupt in war. Send them strong message.

Vajranabh "Putri... We cannot hold them for even 1 day. Do you have any idea how big is their army,and how meager is our army. We don't have modern equipment.
"So all this reasons are enough for us to accept defeat at the hands of enemy. Lets be happy Can we be Happy as slave. ! Father ... what is use of living as slave. Why our people should be slave to Magadh. They will make our people work for their profit. Is that fine...Is freedom not everyman right. All are born equal ,and die equal.Her parents did not have any reply to her words.

Asandhimitra took her sword and placed in his feet."Pithashri... The ball is in your court. Think once again. Lets all die to his sword rather than living as vassal king. Atleast in coming days people will remember us for bravery with which we stood before Chnadragupt.

Vajaranabh and Sucharitra accepted her talks and both felt proud of her Daughter.

"Chandragupt.. Before you reach Mathura,you have to face me.. Asandhimitra".



Pataliputra

"Nandini.. Do you know How much worried and rrestless we were and completely clueless. As per plan Damodhar had to pick you. But somewhere it was foiled. So instead of him Govind took you. And after that he was nowhere to be heard.All the fisherman folks went upto even Gangasagar,but no bodies were found. Radhagupt and Chanakya however found one decayed body of a woman ,probably pregnant in Shravasthi. Face was completely eaten by fishes.Then they were quiet certain that it was you.I was shattered to hear that news. He stopped and gulped a glass of water.

Flashback

Radhagupt and Chanakya were trying to make Chandra believe that Nandini is dead.

"Chandra .. I think Nandini is dead"Before He completed the sentence

"Acharya..No it cant be true... She is alive.. My heart says so" Said Chandra in an assertive tone

Chanakya"Putra.. Heart does not think.. listen to Brain. Listen to my words.. I think Nandin I is dead

"Acharya.. No Nandini is not dead. Her Krishna will save her".

Chanakya was about to say something but Helena came and stopped

"Chandra.. people have come for your audience. They have nabbed a bandit leader who used to rob travelers en-route from Pataliputra to Mathura."


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Awesome chapter! I loved the way Chandra had such confidence in his heart that Nandini was alive. Similarly the political and historical angle of the story was also very good. The conversation of the king and Queen reveals how all the enemies and neighboring states of Magadh are fearful of being subdued by Magadh. Asandhimitra, isn't the historical one, is she? The chief queen consort of Ashok, CGM's grandson was also a princess of the very same name, Asandhimitra. So this must be somebody different! Is she a fictional character? Is Chandragupt going to marry this princess?
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Yes Shailu ...Asandhimitra was wife of Ashoka the Great.

But here she is different character totally invented by me. She is going to face Cgm in war. Ultimately she is going to marry him as a peace treaty. But this is going to happen after some time.
I am trying to think different from our stupid serial.so Bought this lady.
Problem will be witH Nandini. How is she is going to share Cgm with her...?

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Nice chapter Avantika😊
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Chapter 31

He continued
In court

Chandragupt called immediately his PRime minister
"Whats happening,... Why our kothal is not nabbing the culprit. Why people are doing the job of police?
"maharaj... its looks like he tried his luck on crowd and he could not run away . People hooked him since he was a notorious thief.
"Hmmm "
Prime minister " Hey natwarlal... What did you steal this time"?
Thief's demeanor was shivering because he was caught red handed .This time his charges against him was quiet serious.Just then people's representative "maharaj..Please pardon me..to interfere . He will not open his mouth as he was caught stealing people's gold along with we found he was in possession of jewels belonging to royal palace".
Mukya presented the court "Jewels of people as well as Royal jewels."Radhagupt took the jewels and identified"maharaj.. this is crest jewel of maharani Nandini".
Durdhara stood up and asked "mantri ji..can I have a look"?Mantri handed jewel to Durdhara.
Upon seeing " Wahi.. maharaj... this indeed belongs to nandini. See.. Rajmata gave myself,Nandini and Helena same pattern of crest jewel on occasion of your highness 's birthday.This is made of pearls .. Its Her's"
Chandragupt " Natwar... say me.. where did you get. I want truth"
Natwarlal" Maharaj..."
Chandragupt assertively "Say me truth or I shall Kill you now"
Natwarlal"maharaj...That day... I was wandering in the highway leading to Mathura. Since There was curfew imposed,I did not find any travelers. I was cursing my luck that day. But I was delighted to see a lone bullock cart coming towards me. I was determined to loot the cart. So I hijacked the cart and pointed my sharp knife towards the cart driver. But to my bad luck ,the cart was occupied by devotees not rich merchant.My anger knew no bounds and I was out of money to buy even milk.I became frantic,so i was about to kill them.. Just then I heard a very feeble voice of a young lady. Who was heavily pregnant and along with her there were one elderly couple who were looking helpless.the Pregnant lady begged me to spare their life and in return she gave me this crest jewel.
I was over joyous when she told me that it will fetch him lot of money.

Chanakya who was quietly listening to thief accounts and in a soft voice"So Natwar.. What happened next"


Natwar"I let them go.."
Chanakya" can you say us.. what were their destination?"
Natwar" I think they spoke about some van van ..I dont know"
Chanakya " What else do you deduce from their encounter with you..Listen carefully Natwar..this is not an ordinary hit and run case.. ?His voice reached the crescendo and was resonating along the walls of the courtroom
"Amatya ... They were saying some name of BanBihari Ashram..."
Chanakya "Banke Bihari Ashram...Is it Banke Bihari Ashram"?
Natwarlal repled yes
Chankya did not ask further question and was lost in his thoughts for few minutes. He then addressed Chandragupt"Maharaj.. nandini is alive ..I can give you gaurantee".
Chandragupt "Acharya.. How"
Chankya gestured him to wait..
Chanakya quickly looking into soldiers" Put this Thief in jail for 4 months. In that tenure he will be helping in construction of dam across River Shon. Look natwar... I could have even punished you for minimum 6 years..But You have led me to important clue . SO I am letting you to go with lean punishment.

Natwar was carried away by soldiers and Chanakya looking at Mukya "Mukhya ji... Ap ko dhanyawad.. Mein apki samsaya samaj saktha hoon. Imprisonment wont change his mentality. What do we gain from that! He will be happily eating and sleeping.Upon release he will again rob people. If we put him to work,He will get to know How difficult to work and earn money. He will not steal in future. Either he will be hardworking or afraid of such difficult punishment.
The gatehred people and Mukya were all in praise of Chanakya's words of Wisdom.


Mukhya along with his contingent dispersed from the court.
Chanakya" Chandra..I think Nandini is safe in that ashram.. We may have to start immediately to Mathura...But We will not go as Chandragupt and Chanakya. Since Mathura is captial of Shooraseni kingdom.. We are trespassing into that territory,If we go as King and Amatya of Magadh,People may think that we are suddenly invading them and this will cause unnecessary disturbance .Better we avoid that!! Lets start by evening and we may be there by tomorrow noon.

Chanakaya "Turning to Helena and Madav"
"Helena Since we will be out and I dont trust Nand and malay. They may try to capture our fort. I want you to guard Northern Gate and Madav to guard Sourthern gate. While Veerabhahu and Brihatsena can gaurd other gates. This is a serious time and I dont want any security lapse.
Radhagupt ,Even pilgrims and merchants are to be thoroughly checked and allow them only if they have proper mudrika pass.

Flash back ends
Chandragupt"Thats how I found you! I Dont know what Wrong did i ever do to that thief.. he took revenge by bringing you to me" Chandra with a wistful face and put his hand in his forehead just to tease her. nandini gave him a blow on his bare chest. "I was Joking"

Nandini smiled " I think,our children too waited for their father to arrive . So only after you came I had my waters break and I got fainted."
Chandragupt"Yes nandini.. That was so horrible to see you faint and fall. I did not know what to do... !Subhadra ma too got panicked because you were unconscious and your labor started.
I was waiting helplessly outside the hall and I could hear midwife screaming to bring into senses.
At last I bowed down before Lord Krishna and took his holy tulsi water . The Tulsi water was sprinkled on your face and you started to gain senses. It was a miracle!!!After 20 long hours
you gave birth... When I saw little fingers and face of our children all my pains and struggle was seems to be less...Becoming a King and marrying three women never gave me even fraction of that pleasure .. I was in seventh heaven...

"Yes yes" His voice was joined by Durdhara's voice
"Durdahara .. " Chandra with a sly smile
"Yes... I have bought my children because they are hungry... "
"Your children"?
"Yes they are mine..! Nandini Am I right?
Nandini "Yes Didi"...


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Amazing chapter Avantika⭐️
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Nice one when is the next part coming up ?

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