CN SS: ~REVENGE~ part 11 updated at page 31 - Page 3

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

a squeezy hug to you Stuti...🤗

>> 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

darling you did it 👏👏👏, & now i hope after penning down this fantabulous piece you have your peace back which you lost long before...😉

Oh Thank you darling. 😉 😳 Yeah actually I am feeling much better. 🤣 Thinking to extend it to resurrect the peace of mind which gets gravely hampered due to this show. 🤣 😆

i would start with avantika...i liked the way you put her psyche here , i really pity her life what she got in life - first nand who never even respected her...forget loving . she loved this napit & out of this love she betrayed her first husband who was not only a good maharaj but also a loving husband . as they say for betraying such a soul one must pay , so she paid...all these years living her life under the guilt of her wrongdoings with absolutely no one to share her affliction .

then her daughter , whom she considers her everything...actually never understood her . here also i felt bad when nandini asks her maa , isn't she ashamed of such life . i wanted avantika to open up , afterall what better life she before had & its her own wrong doing which has today become cause of their suffering . what came next...burn of hurt ego ahaa ! that was spot on stuti...👏

would love to read something from you on avantika , so plzzz dear author try your hands here also...😉

It seems Manu loves Avantika. 😆 Yes, she is quite an interesting character which has a lot of shades. She is an evil queen from first, and I have no sympathy for her... but as the character matures, one can feel her frustrations too. Your words are apt for her. 😳

There are so many topics on which I have to try my hands. 🤣 Well, I will do it when my heart will say! 😳

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Oh Thank you darling. 😉 😳 Yeah actually I am feeling much better. 🤣 Thinking to extend it to resurrect the peace of mind which gets gravely hampered due to this show. 🤣 😆

>> good good , you have other ffs too going on so do not forget them...😉

It seems Manu loves Avantika. 😆 Yes, she is quite an interesting character which has a lot of shades. She is an evil queen from first, and I have no sympathy for her... but as the character matures, one can feel her frustrations too. Your words are apt for her. 😳

>> not after reading second part , kudos to your writing my all sympathy has blown away...😛

There are so many topics on which I have to try my hands. 🤣 Well, I will do it when my heart will say! 😳

>> sure...👍🏼

Originally posted by: jayaks02

2nd Chapter has leapfrogged into something wonderful. It is written magnificently.

You cannot now stop it - You have to make the love story complete now. 😆

There are only three bright spots in CN for me - Akka posts, Shailaja Story and yours.


PLEASE continue !!!!!!

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

Originally posted by: shailusri1983

Stuti, a brilliant piece. I loved every bit of it. I had no problems with Nandini's characterization. She was literally a vengeful goddess or some natural fury that knows no bounds in spewing destruction. If she starts thinking, she will never be able to take revenge.

Even the Nandini on the show does not think. But then she is stupid, foolish and dumb in the way she executes things. Your Nandini has a wild grace, poise, some deft and intelligent thinking and planning, and a never say die spirit. She uses it for the wrong things but she has it unlike the Nandini on the show who displays none of these qualities. Your Nandini lets her wild and animal instincts take over because she wants her revenge at all costs.

Chandragupt and his behavior and speech to Nandini were epic. Moora was a real treat and revelation here. Chanakya, wily and astute! At the end, Nandini seems suitably chastened and the fire of revenge to some extent quenched by the icy blast of mercy from Chandragupt's side. Is it really the end? I don't think this story is still over. I really want to read more. The show royally disappoints all my expectations.

Originally posted by: jayaks02

2nd Chapter has leapfrogged into something wonderful. It is written magnificently.

😳 😳 Thank you sooo much.🤗

You cannot now stop it - You have to make the love story complete now. 😆

I will try managing my time. 😃

There are only three bright spots in CN for me - Akka posts, Shailaja Story and yours.

Hehe. 😆 Same for me. 🤣

(Btw, what should call you? Aunty or Didi? 😛)


PLEASE continue !!!!!!