Written by Destiny and Etched in Blood: A FF (Ch 54: Pg 100 NEW) - Page 4

Originally posted by: sashashyam

All? None of you? Don't count me in this multitude, my dear, or I shall be forced to protest strongly!

I did not buy this line of thinking, which was why I wrote: I cannot imagine Chandragupta achieving a state of such detachment vis a vis his murderous bride.

I loved the Sisupala-Krishna parallel. More tomorrow, in my reserved slot.

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

You surprised me di...👏👏👏

Never thought it would come in this way but am very happy with chandra's attitude...😃

I think there was a clue in previous chapter in form of that scene where chandra said , " Agar tum margayi iske karan toh mere paas toh tumhe dene ke liye ashroo tak nahin hain " .

Originally posted by: shailusri1983

Yes he wants her alive at the present moment but his murderous intentions are very much there. Hence he prevents her from slow starving herself to death but at the same time keeps a count of her mistakes.

Hi Shailaja :) We haven't interacted till date but I remember Shyamala aunty asking me to read your analytical posts. I kept forgetting to do so because my memory is as good as that of Dory in Finding Nemo😳😆. But when I tentatively ventured into the forum to check if aunty had put up a fresh post, I saw this thread and dimaag ki batti jali on seeing your username😆.

I need to give a disclaimer first. I don't read stories online. I need a book in my hand to be able to enjoy a tale😆. But I did happen to go through the two parts you've posted, and though I'm no expert on story writing, I feel you've done a great job👍🏼. It is clear you have invested deep thought into the story and characters. That by itself is highly appreciable. The story's flavour is strengthened by a sincere compassion for the characters, which indicates an innate awareness of the frailties of human nature. And there is a simplicity in the narration that is quite appealing. Well done :)

Originally posted by: kautilya04

Hi Shailaja :) We haven't interacted till date but I remember Shyamala aunty asking me to read your analytical posts. I kept forgetting to do so because my memory is as good as that of Dory in Finding Nemo😳😆. But when I tentatively ventured into the forum to check if aunty had put up a fresh post, I saw this thread and dimaag ki batti jali on seeing your username😆.

I need to give a disclaimer first. I don't read stories online. I need a book in my hand to be able to enjoy a tale😆. But I did happen to go through the two parts you've posted, and though I'm no expert on story writing, I feel you've done a great job👍🏼. It is clear you have invested deep thought into the story and characters. That by itself is highly appreciable. The story's flavour is strengthened by a sincere compassion for the characters, which indicates an innate awareness of the frailties of human nature. And there is a simplicity in the narration that is quite appealing. Well done :)

Originally posted by: kautilya04

Hi Shailaja :) We haven't interacted till date but I remember Shyamala aunty asking me to read your analytical posts. I kept forgetting to do so because my memory is as good as that of Dory in Finding Nemo😳😆. But when I tentatively ventured into the forum to check if aunty had put up a fresh post, I saw this thread and dimaag ki batti jali on seeing your username😆.

I need to give a disclaimer first. I don't read stories online. I need a book in my hand to be able to enjoy a tale😆. But I did happen to go through the two parts you've posted, and though I'm no expert on story writing, I feel you've done a great job👍🏼. It is clear you have invested deep thought into the story and characters. That by itself is highly appreciable. The story's flavour is strengthened by a sincere compassion for the characters, which indicates an innate awareness of the frailties of human nature. And there is a simplicity in the narration that is quite appealing. Well done :)

Originally posted by: kautilya04

@Shyamala aunty - Ismein mere bechaare dil ka koi kasoor nahi hain, aunty 😔 With the threat of being chopped from your PM list dangling over my dense head like the sword of Damocles, I had bravely braced myself for a future of sneaking into the forum to look for your posts, furtively clicking the 'like' button, and tiptoeing out with the air of a persecuted saint 😒😆 But your words have put fresh heart into me! I shall wait eagerly for your PM :D But yes, please don't tax yourself, and be as kind as possible to your poor fingers.

@Shailaja - You have a natural bent towards writing. With just a little more polishing, your work can shine! Keep up the good work :) and thank you for saying such sweet things about my silly posts :)