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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aahana.

hmm the boy's parents are dead

some mystry

ab aage kya hogaaa

Aage Kya hoga...? Read on my dear!! Will update soon, thnx 4 reading
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyasehan

Superb!!!!!!👏👏

Amazing chapter update ASAP, got it ?😆


Is this your first ff?




P.s. There is going to be a leap na, in the first chapter?

Thnx! Yes this is my first FF. To find out the rest u'll Hve to read on!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mystery + Ashok = Just my cup of tea with a pastry!!
Please continue soon.
Will await your future updates.

- Niki
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 1:
10 years later...
A young man of fourteen sped past the growing village, another, slightly younger boy chasing the lad.
"Brother!" The other boy called, his pace slowing.
The fourteen year old paused and oscillated on his heel.
"Don't tell me Abhi, your already tired?" The boy teased.
The breathless boy laughed.
"Of course not!" He suddenly jumped up, clutching the young teen into his grasp.
The shocked boy recovered soon, smiling at his younger brother's skills.
Abhimanyu lend a hand to his older brother, Ashok, who accepted it gratefully.
"Maybe we should head back now, Mother could be worried since its almost sunset," Abhimanyu spoke, already walking in the direction of his home.
"Yes, you're right, we should go back," Ashok smiled, dusting his clothes.
The young lads soon arrived to their destination, only to receive a safety lecture from their Mother.
"Have you two got any idea how worried I was. The sun was almost set and we live near the forest, what if wild animals attacked you two?" Subhadrangi sternly explained.
"Sorry Mother...but if the animal did come to attack us then we would act dead, right?" Abhimanyu said, innocently. As the words left his mouth, Ashok burst out laughing and even Subhadrangi couldn't resist a smile.
"Now, wash your hands, I'll prepare dinner," She said.
"Mother, there's someone outside!" Abhimanyu shouted.
Subhadrangi grew confused and peeked out her door to see an elderly man with a huge staff and a younger man supporting him.
"May I speak to Ashok's Mother?" The elderly man said, to which Subhadrangi nodded.
The two men and Subhadrangi went outside, away from her two sons, who were too busy eating their food.
Ashok was the first to notice the disappearance of their mother. He had bumped into his old friend, who had asked if he wanted to play outside, to which Ashok had ran inside and search every ounce of the house.
"Have you found Mother yet?" Abhimanyu questioned, worry visible in his eyes.
Ashok shook his head slowly.
"Do you remember where Mother was before she disappeared?" Ashok inquired.
"Yeah, I last saw Mother with the two men, who wanted to talk to her about something," Abhimanyu explained.
"Do you remember how they looked or dressed?".
"Well, one was that strange brahman, the one who had asked about the ring on your finger. The other one was younger, but dressed similar to the aforementioned man." Abhimanyu described.
"Great! I gave the ring to Mother this evening!" Ashok groaned.
"We have to find those men," Abhimanyu declared before rushing out the door after his brother.



Subhadrangi returned to her small house an hour later to retrieve her belongings. She had been taken to the palace to visit the critically injured king, who also happened to be Subhadrangi's husband and Ashok's Father.
As she reached her cottage, she realised that her two sons were missing. Later, after questioning tyre neighbours about their disappearance, she came to a conclusion that the two boys had gone in a search for her.
Quickly packing her belongings in a small cloth, she came across an item which was long forgotten. Abhimanyu's toddler clothes. For the first time in ten years, Subhadrangi noticed the clothed were very odd looking.
They were made from some strange material with bright colours that created a pattern among the clothes. The thought had never really occurred to Subhadrangi as she had seen the clothes twice before. But this was the first time she had gone and observed the strange clothes.
The thought itself made Subhadrangi curious as she found herself thinking...
Where was Abhimanyu from?
Or more likely, Who is Abhimanyu?


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyasehan

Amazing chapter! Update ASAP ! There is gonna be a female lead right?

Let it be anyone of your wish but plz introduce her soon.

Thnx!! There is going 2 b a female lead!! Nd she is going 2 appear in the next chap ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2:

Abhimanyu didn't quite understand how he had arrived in such a troublesome circumstance. The mud on his face proved that he was having a rotten day, but his brother was having the worst.
The two boys had met Acharya Chanakya after causing a lot of damage to the soldiers of Magadh.
As their punishment, they were sent to Patliputra to earn the cost of the damage, also they weren't allowed to meet their mother, who was treating the King.
Then they met the monstrous Prince, Shushim, who, by now absolutely despised the two boys.
Then, Chanakya had arranged for them to attend the Royal Academy, which they did, after a lot of persuading their Mother.
After that, Shushim and his gang started humiliating Ashok and Abhimanyu, when to their rescue, came the second Prince, Siamak, and both the boys befriended the Prince.
After a lot of struggles and hard work arrived that particular night, where the students of the Royal Academy were invited to a royal feast.
Ashok and Abhimanyu had decided to not go and stay and practice for their upcoming competition, but Siamak had insisted and the boys couldn't say no.
As Abhimanyu wore the borrowed clothes from Siamak, he felt a strange feeling, as though something extraordinary was going to occur to him that night. And so it did.
The two lads arrived to the banquet, where Siamak had decided to show them around.
"That's my room, and that's Brother Shushim's. Oh, have you met our youngest brother, Drupet?" Siamak asked.
"Yes, we met the Prince last week," Abhimanyu answered politely.
"Okay, I'll show you guys our practicing area...".
Abhimanyu yawned as Siamak chatted about his ancestors and the history of the castle. His eyes travelled towards the lake, no...not a lake, but a garden.
"What's that?" Abhimanyu inquired.
"That's our place for peace you can say. When Father went off to a war and returned a while later, he seemed to be in a sour mood and he built this. He visited this area almost everyday," Siamak explained, then continued with his talk.
Abhimanyu paused whilst the other two carried on walking, he admired the view and the sound of nature. Then, a soothing voice invaded his head. It was calming and so melodic, so sweet and full of passion.
The almost teen shook his head as he tried tracking the voice down, his companions long gone away.
He stepped into the garden, the voice growing louder as he grew nearer. His eyes caught a small figure near the end, where the swing was. Curious, he began approaching the humanoid object, making sure not to create any sound.
As he got nearer he realised that it was a girl, with long beautiful hair, emerald eyes, pale skin and an amazing smile.
The young man was struck by the lady's beauty, his smile growing larger as she sung to the swans resting in the lake.
"Wow..." He breathed. The girl stopped singing and turned to face the voice that had disturbed her.
Her eyes widened at the realisation that someone had over heard her.
"Keep on singing," Abhimanyu whispered, still dazzled by the lady.
The girl gave him a confused look.
"Your voice...it's beautiful..." The boy murmured.
A little surprised, the girl only managed to mumble a "What?..".
"Er...I mean, you sang terribly! Never heard something like that before!!" Abhimanyu spoke rapidly, his mind running crazy. The words were horrible and mean, but his thoughts were sweet and kind.
Your voice is like the nightingale, your eyes are like emeralds, you are beautiful...' His thoughts screamed.
"What?! I have never met a boy as arrogant as you!" The girl yelled.
What Abhimanyu wanted to say:
I'm so sorry! I never meant to say any of that. Your voice is amazing, I've never heard anything so beautiful!'.
But what really came out:
"But it's the truth, you can't deny it," Abhimanyu said.
"God! Your such an ill mannered Prince! You live here, right? A son of King Bindusar, and so manner less.".
With that, the girl left.
Abhimanyu sighed. Tough luck.
"Wait! What's your name?".
But the question still remained,
Who was that beautiful girl?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing first 2 chaptrs⭐️
so entry of a gal hmm
who can this beautiful gal be ??🤔
and abhimanyu is fully fida on her
continue fasttt😆
Edited by Aahana. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh... Abhimanyu gt a new crush... wow...

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