Adopted FF Chapter 2 Up!!

Hello friends, I'm new to this forum, up till now I was just a silent reader, but recently I decided to sign up and join in on the discussions.
The new track in CAS of Ashok and Kaurwaki (I think that's how you spell her name) has really grabbed my attention. Normally I wouldn't be pleased with the Twisting the History' part, but the young budding romance of Ashok and Kaurwaki has attracted me. From the start I have always been a fan of couples that don't get along at first but then fall in love with each other. Since Ashok and Kaurwaki don't quite get along right now, and quarrel quite a bit, I thought of shipping them.
I ship AshKara too, but thought that since Ashok and Ahankara would be a little distant for a while, why not ship the newest pairing, AshWaki.
Lately I've been fantasising about CAS in a different limelight.
Imagine CAS in a different perspective, a way they can add more Drama and humanity.
This is a great opportunity to present my first FF on this forum. It's different in many ways and also similar in others.

Summary:
When a lonely toddler stumbles on the doorstep of Subhadrangi in search for his parents, Subhadrangi decides to help him out only to learn that the Lad's parents passed away in a tragic accident. Subhadrangi, being the soft natured she is, decides to adopt the orphaned boy, naming him Abhimanyu.
Join Ashok and Abhimanyu's journey to the throne, with Abhi's dark past following them.
Packed with love, war, hatred, rivalry and lot's of drama!

Please do tell me what you all think of the idea. I hope you all will like it. I will upload the first chapter later in the day.

Thank you for listening

same here

me three an ashwaki fan

Thank you for your responses, I'm glad people agree with me.


Prologue:

Subhadrangi served the delicious food to her precious little son, Ashok, who instantly gobbled the food down earning a small chuckle from his mother.
A small bang on their door interrupted Subhadrangi, she cautiously peeked through a small crack in her door. Her eyes grew wide as she noticed a small boy flat on her doorstep.
She rushed out, picking up the toddler and checking if his okay.
Tiny noises were heard from the boy's mouth from which Subhadrangi figured that he was calling for his mother. Subhadrangi observed that the boy was in a messy state, and his clothes seemed to be ripped and burnt at parts.
She ran inside with the boy, placing him on a soft rug and treating him with her medical experiences.
As morning approached, the boy opened his eyes and saw a young lady dipping a piece of cloth in a bowl of water.
"Mother..." The boy yelped, leaping into the lady's arms.
Subhadrangi was speechless as the little child hugged her. She couldn't just tell him that she wasn't his mother. Deciding to change the topic for better, Subhadrangi began questioning the boy.
"Where are you from?" She whispered, almost scared to hurt him.
The boy just shook his head, pointing towards the green forest.
"Mommy I came from there," He replied, a saddening expression invading his adorable face.
"The forest?".
The boy nodded innocently.
"What were you doing there?" Subhadrangi asked, her voice hinting worry.
"I don't know,".
Subhadrangi frowned. She had never come across such a scenario before.
"Mommy and Daddy, we were there... with the beard uncle," The boy shrugged.
"The beard uncle?" Subhadrangi asked and received a nod from the boy.
Checking on Ashok, who was sleeping peacefully, Subhadrangi picked up the young lad and carried him to the entrance of the jungle.
"Where did you see him?" She inquired.
The boy pointed towards the river, where a small shed stood.
"There?".
The lad nodded in confirmation.
Subhadrangi started towards the cottage and spotted a bearded man.
"Excuse me, but do you know where this boy's parents are?" Subhadrangi asked the man.
The man looked up at the boy, his eyes widened, his skin turning pale and his hands trembling.
"TAKE HIM AWAY FROM ME!" The man screamed, stumbling over his wooden chair.
Subhadrangi stared in confusion.
"His parents are dead!" The man continued, pure terror visible in his eyes.
"I'm warning you! Stay away from him!" Then without another word the man rushed off deeper into the woods.
Subhadrangi stared in shock as the words His parents are dead!' repeated over and over again. She looked at the orphan, tears filling her eyes.
"I'm your mother," She whispered, boldly.
"I will take care of you from now on," The boy smiled at Subhadrangi's words.
"From now on you will be known as my second son and Ashok's younger brother. You will be known as Abhimanyu," Subhadrangi said, carrying the boy back

Superb!!!!!

Awesome

hmm the boy's parents are dead

Originally posted by: musicndance2

Superb!!!!!

Please do write...

The creative minds on this forum are waking up...

Good job!!!!

Thanks alot! I really appreciate your feedback :)

Originally posted by: jilmil.1

Awesome

continue fast

waitinggg to know more

Thanks! Will write more soon!!