ff: destiny chapter 3 pg 4 - Page 2

Originally posted by: aamina1010

i'm angry with you for not sending me a pm😡

but my anger is short-lived 🤗

Omg i can't tell you how happpy i am that you are writing another NivRen ff, coz i loved your last one.

i'm already in love with thiss FF, you write so baeutifully hun... i love the way you have described the care, love and respect Viren has for Nivi.

please continue soon, and don't forget to pm me.

mwah

hi jaan i am so sorry i dnt pm u i swear i remembered to do it be4 i posted the chapter bt than got busy with other things and forget and by the time i remembered it was too long and i had logged of IF. but i knew u are such a sweetheart that u would forgive me. and thank u for liking and i wnt make this mistake again.😛mwah

Originally posted by: Kinshuk_lover

Loved your previous ff and i am sure ill love this one too so please contninue soon

ah thank u love

Originally posted by: jananishan

really nice dear..thanks for another ff...live u... superb story...continue soon

thank u jaanishan

Originally posted by: moniluvskinshuk

Amazing FF Sandia . lovedd it .Plzzz continue soon n Can u PM me whenever u update . It will b good . Thanks

thank u moni 4 commenting

so happy that u started another ff yaar

Originally posted by: sandy_nivren

so happy that u started another ff yaar

amazing ff dear please do continue and

send me a pm

thank u love and will do

Guys there is a little summary of the new characters on page 1 for some reason I couldn't upload a picture of who I think could do the role will try to do it next time I come online.

Chapter 2

Viren stopped the car and sat and looked at a red brick house it wasn't big but at the same time it wasn't too small and thought how perfect not only the house was but the ppl in it. They had so much of love for 1 another and him and their love knew no limits and with them he truly learnt what family and love truly was. It wasn't a commodity or dependent on something it was a feeling that they all had for each other that even though he wasn't related to them through blood he was still the son and brother of that house. He learnt from them that u don't need to be perfect to be loved, that no matter what u do that if u truly love some1 u always stand by them and never leave them. The Sood family where 10 times richer than the Raj family but when it came to love and caring for each another the Sood's where poorer than them and would never match them. He thought about what his mother had done to Sid and couldn't believe it but more than that he was upset with his part in everything. In that moment he just wanted to be with his family, in familiar surroundings and lay his head in his Mom's lap and hear her tell him everything would be fine.

Once he had gotten out of the car he jumped over the wall with total ease as he always did coz he didn't want to make a noise by opening the gate. Once in he had just opened the gate and the front door opened, he looked angrily and said mom how many times have I told u not to open the door before checking who it is. She smiled sweetly at him and said but I knew who it was, as she smiled at him he couldn't stay angry and he said trying to appear angry what do I do with u, u just don't listen to me. He walked in the house than and before he could go on she said sorry and to forgive her and he said in a brattish way ok but this is the last time. They hugged each another than and she looked at him and asked him if ds was ok and Viren just nodded and said there had been no change in his condition from the time he came home. She said u shouldn't have come we all would have been with Khushi for her dance audition and he looked at her and smiled and said how could I not come. If she gets into their summer dance program and is tops in her class its means that when she is done with school she already has a place in their academy and she won't have anything to worry about anything. Just than a young girl in her pink pj's came in the room rubbing her eyes and when she looked up and said bhai u came and she went to him and hugged him. I knew u would come and than looked at him and said bhai u must have been very busy with Sid bhai's wedding right, I am sorry that u had to leave coz of me. U know my auditions where supposed to be next week but 1 of the judges had to go out of town and she had wanted to choose all her dancers before she went away. When she had said Sid's name he lowered his eyes trying to hide the pain from them and just said its ok they have more than enough help and wouldn't miss me.

Priya who had just entered the doorway was using white pj's she wore glasses and her hair was in a ponytail and she had a tray of tea and biscuits for every1 and had seen the pain cross his face the moment he heard Sid's name. Her fingers tightly gripped the tray as she thought to herself what those ppl might have done now to make him upset. From the time she had heard that Dev Sir had agreed to help Viren with his work but he would have to go to Shimla she feared what those ppl would do or say to him. Since the time they were small she had to witness how every time those ppl had tried to get in contact with him he had taken weeks to get back to his usual self and even than she had seen how much of pain he still was in. She came in the room than and faked a smile and said green tea for every1 and Viren went and took the tray from her and left it on the coffee table and than went and hugged her. Viren tightly shut his eyes trying to block out everything and at the same time tried to compose himself so they wouldn't get worried. She hugged him back and the knowledge that he was in pain made her extremely angry and she promised herself that she wouldn't allow him to go back to them. Once they parted she just smiled at him and told him he should have his tea and they all sat and discussed Khushi's audition. Khushi told them that along with her own dance piece she would also be doing a class with her teacher so even if she messed up in that if she did well in the classes she would be fine. Viren looked at her and said u nervous aren't u and she nodded and he said just remember what mom always tells us that if we put our all into something it doesn't matter what the results are coz we are already winners. Priya than said that if u still feel nervous at the audition than u should close her eyes and just imagine that u are dancing for your friends and u will get less intimidated. Khushi smiled at them and said that they were absolutely correct and she would do that and went and gave both of them a hug.

Shraddha looked at them and smiled it always warmed her heart when she saw the 3 of them together and the love they had for each another and she prayed to god that they would always be together. As they continued their usual banter her smile disappeared as she looked at Viren something was definitely wrong she had noticed it the moment she seen him. She had first put it down to him being worried about ds but when she had seen the pain that crossed his face when khushi had mentioned Sid she knew it was more than that. She had thought that maybe this time that him actually being with all of them and not just his parents that he would get closer to them and allow them in especially ds. It was her greatest wish that he have a relationship with them coz she knew that he would never admit it but he had a lot of love hidden is his heart for them. As she watched him and saw the tension go out of him and he started to genuinely enjoy himself her eyes softened and the worry went out of her eyes. She didn't know why god had blessed her with such a precious gift but she thanked him everyday for him coz without him her family was incomplete. She had never needed to fear that if he was near his real family that she would lose him coz from the moment she had seen him he had somehow became a part of her and she him. She remembered than with sadness the 1^st time she had seen him he had been running after his parents car as they had left him at the boarding school. She had been carrying a sleeping khushi and had been holding Priya's hand and as she had taken a step to go, she somehow couldn't leave him like that and went to him. The gates of the school had been locked and the principle had left him at the gate and the guard had felt very helpless looking at him crying so when she asked him if she could be with him he had allowed it. Viren had been holding the gate crying and saying he wanted to go home and be with his Sid bhai and ma. She had sat on the floor with Khushi and Priya was standing next to her silently and she had touched his back than and told him everything would be ok and good boys don't cry. He had sat on the floor next to her than and hiccupped and said that he wasn't a good boy and that's why his ds had sent him away and started crying even more. Priya had gone to him than and had wiped the tears away from his face and told him not to cry and hugged him and after a while he hadn't made a sound. They both had smiled at each another thinking he was ok but than when they had looked at his face they saw that the tears where still falling from his eyes and Priya disappointingly went and put her head on her legs and looked at him sadly as tears welled up in her eyes. She told Priya not to cry and he would be fine as she brought him closer to her and put her arms around him. Khushi who had been asleep the whole time had waken up for a minute and had looked at Viren and had touched his face and gone back to sleep. She didn't know how long they had been like that but eventually the principle had come and told them that Viren had to come inside and very reluctantly she had waken Priya and him up. He had looked at her in shock when she told him that she had to go and looked like he was about to cry again and she said she would see him tomorrow and that they pass here everyday and not to worry. She had given khushi to Priya to carry and had gotten up and she looked at him and said she promised they would come and see him tomorrow. Once she left him she expecting him to go inside but every time she turned back he was in the same spot looking at them leaving him and he had broken her heart.. For days afterwards whenever they passed the school he was there at the gate waiting for them but he either spoke or looked at them and seemed to get sadder and sadder. She hadn't known than that from that night and many other nights that he had been trying to run away to go back home and every night he was caught Whenever they would see him Priya would always be telling him little things about themselves where she schooled and where they stayed and how to get there and she had always thanked god for this. Coz the 1 night that he had actually managed to escape from the school premises there had been a dreadful storm and it had been lightening and thundering very badly. She shivered every time she remembered that day coz the thought of what might have happened to him scared her. She didn't even know how he had found the strength to knock on her door coz the minute she opened it he had collapsed. Thankfully he had only had a slight fever and he was fine in the morning and she had managed to get him back to school before any1 had noticed he was gone. But every night after that she heard a knock on her door and it would be him and she found herself making a bed for him and would tuck him in and go back and do her sewing. But than he would bring his blanket and sleep on the floor looking at her until he eventually fall asleep as she was doing her work. Everyday she would tell herself that it was wrong allowing him to come and she would tell him he couldn't come but every time he came she didn't have the heart to tell him and had soon found herself waiting for him outside the school and taking him home.

She hadn't realized that they where calling her until Khushi had touched her and she had looked at her shocked. Khushi had asked her than if she was ok and after a few seconds she said she was fine and than looked at the time and said u all should be in bed by now. Khushi said she was just going and kissed her and said goodnight to every1 after she left Viren also said he should hit the sack as well and Shradda said she would help him to set his bed. He tried to tell her that he could do it himself and she said that she had been hearing that from the time he was small and he never could. He looked at Priya for help and she told don't get me involved coz u know I agree with mom on this point and said she would see him just now after she had finished washing the dishes and he nodded. Once he went to his room he helped her with everything and they did it in silence and he said u where very quiet tonight and is something wrong. She sat on his bed than and told him to come and sit with her and she looked at him and asked if he was ok and just for a moment his mask slipped but he averted her eyes and told her he was fine. She said Viren u can tell me anything don't u know that by now and he looked at he as tears welled up in his eyes and hugged her and she told him whatever it was everything would be fine. Priya had just come and seen this and she stormed into the room and said this was why I never wanted u to go to Shimla in the 1^st place I knew they would do something to hurt. She went to him than and said tell me what they did to u and I will go there myself and give them a piece of my mind. Viren got up and said no Priya they didn't do anything I am the 1 at fault I made a very big mistake and I can't fix it. They both looked at him and he started telling them how he had met Nivi and than how he had convinced Sid to get married and what his parents had done. They where both extremely shocked and Shradda said that it wasn't your fault u where protecting your granddad and trying to fulfill his wish any1 would have done the same thing. He said that maybe true but if I saw Sid the way I see Khushi and Priya I would have done something to help him but I seemed to almost enjoy him being hurt. What sort of person am I mom, I might not have been close to Sid but I know what sort of person he was if not as a brother at least as a friend I should have helped. Do u know what I said to him when he had wanted to refuse I said that if ds had given me the chance that I would marry my enemy why did I say that what's wrong with me. I don't take them as my own so why did I want to prove myself to him for what purpose so that I could be close to them.

But what kills me even more is that even when I found out that Nivi was the person who they were accusing of doing those awful things to ds I didn't do anything to find out the truth. She is the sort of person if u meet once u will know what sort of person she is she is a very sweet, strong and honest girl she would never have hurt any1 and she was in so much pain and I did nothing to help her. All I did was destroy her life and for what for nothing absolutely no reason.why mom why did I do this and hurt my friend in the process.

Congrazz for ur 2nd FF!!!👏 Both chapters are excellent!!! Plzz continue soon!!!😃