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Posted: 14 years ago
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Scene 11

He listened to her and knew that she was right. The storm at home may start as soon as they will be back... Just like it happend in the past and changed his life. He was thinking, but he knew that in her heart there was another world, other desires she was telling him about and for once he wanted to let her live according to the instead of always sacrificing her wishes for others, whom seem never to acknowledge it.

He turned and with that lied her on her back. Her eyes were closed... Her tears must have come to the shore, but then the waves must have driven them away. He hated tears in her eyes. Since he knew her, he could not bear to see her cry... He kissed her right eye and then the left. "What about us, Nivi?" He asked her. She stayed silent... He grabbed the oppurtunity and started slowly place his fingers on her stomach... She moved her face to left side, when he started to tickle her. Unable to take it, she laughed and laughed; asking him to stop doing it. But he was also Viren... Seeing her laughing was making him so happy that he just couldn't stop.

She was totally in his embrace and their nose touched, Viren stopped while looking into her eyes... She placed her hand on his face and her head tilted a bit; before he knew his lips were touched by her lips. He was completely drowned in her arms, letting his saviour decide the fate of his; survival or death! Nothing mattered anymore. "You are unique and so is your love," She said that when they parted and she shyly turned her face to another side. She couldn't believe that she could be active, but his presence was making her go nuts.

He was smiling seeing her new avtar and then he slightly kissed her ear and as soon as he saw she was enjoining he slightly bite it. She uttered a little scream and then Viren ran from the bed and Nivedita after him. Nivedita reached him by the window and then she pinched him. He grabbed her hands and pulled her over to him. While holding her hands, he managed to put the hairlot away which was irritating her beautiful eyes. Then he touched her lips, she stopped struggling to get her hands free. He supported her face by putting his hand on her neck. He kissed her gently and then he said, "You are finally living your life, how can I put you back in a cage again?"

She hugged him and they stood there for a while... "You asked earlier, if there was a wish of mine u could fulfil?" He hugged her harder, "Will you love me this way always?" He knew that her mind was hard to change, but he just couldn't let go of this wonderful oppurtunity of being together. "Hmm... Actually I will love you more and more for every moment we spent together." He kissed her head and noticed how relaxed she was.

"I have an awesome idea, Nivi" Viren was almost jumping and Nivedita looked at him thinking, what will he do now.. He grabbed his phone and dialed a number, "Hello Tayi ji, How are you?" Nivedita looked at him with widened eyes. What was he doing, she was totally in shock. "Tayi ji, do you remember I was talking about a suprise I had in store for Nivi on our Honeymoon?" She couldn't hear anything and she was curious... What surprise was he talking about?

"Well Tayi ji, I had decided to take her to Delhi and we are actually here... Please Tayi ji, do not mention it at home... We just want to be alone and I want to show her all my places in the city. But you know Nivedita, she has to have elder's permission." Viren gave almost no time to Tayi ji to respond! He kept talking and talking. Was it him, the person he was or was it the fact that he knew how to get his way; she was unable to understand. "Thanks Tayi ji... I love you..." Viren was on the seventh sky... his eyes were shinning! "Tayi ji... Could you ask Siddhart to take our lugage home, we left it in Goa because of hurry." She just did not like him mentioning Siddhart's name and then again, why hadn't he and Divya told the family about them being away... There were so many questions...

"Yes, Nivi is hear..." He gave the phone to her and brought her out of the trance. He had noticed the change in her mood when he had mentioned Sidhart... But what to do? They lived in the same house! He knew how to fix her mood... She had hardly spoken on the phone, when he hugged from behind... The phone almost slipped out of her hand. She was not listening anymore and Viren was just started. "Yes, Chachi ji, I am..." She stopped as soon as he started to kiss her on the neck. Being totally puzzled and surprised she almost couldn't talk. He whispered in her ear "Tayi ji wants to know your well-being, answer her Jaan." She was trying to talk again and had just managed to say "fine... I... hhh... aaa am fi... ne." He was unstopable with his hand making sure that it rested on her stomach. Her eyes were pleading Viren to stop, but he was not seeing her in the eyes. He moved his head towards the phone to hear what Tayi ji was saying and was only able to hear "Nivi, I am happy that your holiday has turned into honeymoon," when Nivi turned around to hide her shy and reddish face in his strong arms.

"Tayi Ji... We both love you and will be back in 3-4 days and please do not let anyone know where we are... Promise that!" Viren answered and then after hearing the consent, he had put the phone down. He removed her hair, which were covering her angel face. His fingers tickled her all the way up to the neck. He caressed her face and made sure that she looked up and said, "so from where should I start this journey?" And without waiting for her answer he started by kissing her trembling lips and then finding the path to the heart, where he lived!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great update please do continue soon and I am really sorry for the late comment. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
Wht can I say thank you Abidah...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Abidah...u r just too brilliant with words,👏
even brilliant is a small word for praising u...
superb updates... 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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DI2 – Scene 12

Her head tilted and before she woke up because of no support to her head, he rushed to let her head get the support from his shoulder. He just loved looking at her while she slept. He took her hand in his, which he was not allowed to hold in hand five minuts ago, because they were sitting in a bus… He caressed it and then closed his eyes to enjoy the moment of peace. "Shimla is here," they woke up because of this loud scream! They woke up looking at each other. Five days of amazing moments were over and normality was waiting for them. He looked into her eyes, only to find support and love. He took a deep breath and then both of them went home.

As soon as they had reached the main door, the welcome commit was waiting for them. "So finally have you decided to come?" was the first welcome remark they heard from none other than CC. "Where have u been, I find u so irresponsible Viren…" DS was just started, "Is this the way to behave… Just vanish, let no one know anything? Is this the way to treat your wife?" – Everyone knew that DS was oldfashioned, but his anger, the loud voice, the dispise of what had been done was apparent… No one dare to say him against; not even in the past when he decided to send Viren to Boarding School.

"But…" Nivedita was interrupted by DS "Do you want to take his side now? No one knew where you two were… Siddhart and Divya has to cut their vacation short because of you two?" DS was so angry… He had seen problems between Siddhart and Divya getting bigger and knowing the reason behind, he just went from angry to mad. "You have to say sorry to Siddhart, Viren…" The order was given. Nivedita took Virens hand in her hand, "But why Dada ji?…" She was crying… "We had told Chachi ji about it," she was looking pleading towards VD. "So now you want to tell me that you too have begun irresponsible as Viren? I had not expected this from you!" DS was looking into her eyes and VD said, "They are kids and they had told me about it… It was Viren's surprise for Nivedita and he was with her all the time, so why worry?"

DS did not like VD taking Viren's side… He looked at Viren and asked him to apologise again, Viren looked at DS and then he started to leave from the hall. He still had Nivedita's hand in his, and when he realised that, he stopped and looked at DS and said, "She is my wife and I can take her anywhere I like; the responsibility of her protection is mine, I do not see why someone let our, mine and Nivedita, decision to affect his life." He did not stop there and while passing by VD, he looked in her eyes, did let go of Nivedita's hand and went upstairs.

He had a blast of thoughts in his head! Did Siddhart knew about attack on Nivedita or did he not? Things were getting more complicated… Top of all that, to deal with DS and his accusations… Last time it happend the same way… But not this time, not this time was he allowing ANYONE to take Nivedita away from him!

VD was left with Nivedita, and she knew how delicate Nivedita's heart was. Nivedita embraced her and cried… "It is not his fault, he just wanted to show me all those things which I had not been a part of… Why is he being punished like that?" VD caressed her and said, "Don't worry Nivi, everything will be alright! DS has only been worried about you too…" "But…" Nivedita had only said that when VD interrupted her and said "Go upstairs…, I will come in a minut"

Without saying anything Nivedita went upstairs, while VD went to calm DS and rest of the family…

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Posted: 13 years ago
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finally d fight begins !!!! 😛
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DI2 – Scene 13

Somewhat nervous she went upstairs… She couldn't believe him letting go of her hand, but then his words… He was so complicated! He was standing there, beside the window; he had closed his eyes. He might not have noticed her coming like this… She really did not know what to do; what if he got more upset if she said something "wrong" – but she had to support him. If not now, then when?

She stood behind him for a while, but he had not reacted, so she placed her head on his back and placed her arms on his chest. She did not say a word; she was not even crying… She was just there for him as his wife. He had moved a bit then he had placed his hand on her hands and both stood there without saying anything. Her hand felt his heart's beats…

VD opened the door to the room and saw them standing like that… She smiled and then knocked on the door. They quickly moved aside, but she did not say anything. She moved forth towards Viren and caressed his cheek, and then she said while looking at shying Nivedita, "Now I do not have to worry about him anymore." She kissed his forehead and then signalled Nivedita to come near. She took her hand and placed into his, "Remain like this always… This is what a marriage is all about." Both looked at each other for a moment and VD smiled seeing them like newly wedded couple!

She started to go, "Tay ji…" She looked at Viren, "Woh Dada Sahib…" VD smiled and made him sit on the sofa , "This is a joint family, Viren. You have each right to go wherever you want to, but people have also right to know and show their concern and sometimes they show it in a way we do not like." She caressed his cheek again, Viren knew that but he just couldn't tell the reason and then VD said, "I know you have your reasons, but take care next time."

He almost cried seeing that much of love and affection; he hugged VD as he always did in the past! She was the mother he never had! VD signalled Nivedita to sit on her other side and this how she took both kids under her wings, knowing that they only needed love and affection! While hugging VD, Viren placed his hand on Nivedita's hand, which made her open her eyes to see him, and there was the first smile of the day since their arrival.

"Now I should go, and Nivedita, take rest…" VD was getting ready to go when Nivedita almost ran over to go with her to help her in the kitchen, but VD said no and signalled towards Viren. None of them realised being watched; the danger was not over!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks Abidaah for the wonderful ud so the mystery gets going. Very touching ud viren, DS. Curious to know what happens.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really beautiful chapters just loved it and cnt wait 4 the next update

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