...*Tum Jo AaYE*... { a niviren FF} chap 3 & 4 ud

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lojain

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Posted: 14 years ago

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what r u saying u r not a good writer ..????? u want me to come and kill u ..but between me and u ya u r not good writer ..u r awesome writer yaar ...u write such an awesome scenes ...waiting for ur update 😉

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love_never_dies

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: aamina1010
Hey Bowya! Finally you have posted your FF. Really interesting introduction and excited to read the 1st chapter. Please pm when you update it. x

thanx aamina,, will PM when i update...😃

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love_never_dies

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Resh_kinhafan
Wow bowya u started ur ff...really excited.

Intro was too good which made me eager to read ur update...continue soon dear.

thank you so much resh... 😳

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love_never_dies

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Thanks roopa and raj,,, i will try to give you girls a good chapter to read...

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love_never_dies

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: love-mystery
what r u saying u r not a good writer ..????? u want me to come and kill u ..but between me and u ya u r not good writer ..u r awesome writer yaar ...u write such an awesome scenes ...waiting for ur update 😉

lj,, thank you so much for encouraging me jaan... love you dear...😳

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Alphabet26

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Good... u started writing ur FF... what abt besharam scene and roopaz game... will u continue that too na 😉

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lojain

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: love_never_dies
lj,, thank you so much for encouraging me jaan... love you dear...😳

Am saying the truth jaan..love u too😳

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love_never_dies

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Alphabet26
Good... u started writing ur FF... what abt besharam scene and roopaz game... will u continue that too na 😉

thanks di,, will update my FF in a couple of hours...

I forgot about the besharam scene di,, try to update it soon and roopz FF game, i will continue after the scene of deepti..😛

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love_never_dies

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

CHAPTER - 1

Its is a sunday,the clouds will any time share its pain with the earth. Nivedita is reading a book in her room, she lifts her head from the book and find the climate. She starts to move to the upstairs,,when she reaches the terrace a cool breeze touches her cheek like pulling her to the beautiful world of nature, which gives happiness and rid to people from the sorrows some time when they needed...

She slowly picks up the tub and starts to take off the clothes which were kept for dry..The climate and singing birds is perfect for her to make her heart out,,tears are filled in her eyes like the clouds those are ready to burst out its pain in the form of rain...

Today is the completion of second year,she remembered that terrific moments till now,the fear of losing her mother forever is still in her heart...She never thought that her sister the most sweet person she had ever met and want to be with her till the end of her life,,,,...Nivi shares her every pleasant and paining moments with her elder sister deepali...

Nivi and deepali lost thier father 18 years ago, when nivi was a two year old baby and deepali was six year old child,,, after his death they were moved to their mama's residence(brother of their mom),,, Sharmila her mother gone through so many hurdels, insults and fought with this mercyless society brought up her daughters ...

Sharmila a strong woman,who always want to give the happiness to her daughters in all the possible way but she is strict too becuase she is playing the role of father also to the chlidren... She is working as a branch manager in a private bank,she had worked hard to reach this stage,, her life is her daugters..Nivi understand her mom very well then deepali,, she knows her mother's aim is to give good life to her and deepali,,,,,,,,, BUT...

Edited by love_never_dies - 14 years ago