...*Tum Jo AaYE*... { a niviren FF} chap 3 & 4 ud - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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CHAPTER - 2

But life always gives un expected turns to every one,,, the same was happened in the life of nivedita also...
Nivi starts to think about what has deepali done a couple of years ago..Deepali was ranaway with the guy she loved,she did nt tell about her love to nivi or her mother,, she knows that sharmila will never accept it...
The evil day of deepali's exit from their little family,, nivi faces the tough time of her life..Sharmila has heart attack and she was very crictical on that day,, nivi thought she lost her she lost her life,one side her beloved sister gone away from her and her mother was in that condition...
Tear drops are starts to flow from her eyes like flood while thinking about that situation,, she got back her mom after few days from ICU,,her prayers to lord krishna is the only hope for life...
She is now standing near the front part of the terrace and only one saree left to take off... There is sudden sound of jerk of cars make her to come back to the present..Then she see the people coming out from the cars.. In the first car a old man and lady with two little children comes out,nivi's eyes moved to the second car...
From that a girl who is around eighteen is getting down,then her eyes fell on to the guy getting down next,, he is dressed in blue shirt and sandal pant,he is looking genuine and decent with neately combed hair...
Suddenly that guy lifts his head and see nivi who is standing in the terrace and watching them,nivi find that he is seeing her she felt embraced and turns to go,,, but she stops after hearing her name...
TO BE CONTINUED...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi friends,, i know my FF is not so gud,,, sorry for little errors and grammatical mistakes,this my first attempt,,,, If you did nt like it means tell me, i will stop this in the starting stage itself... Thanks for reading my crap...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: love_never_dies

hi friends,, i know my FF is not so gud,,, sorry for little errors and grammatical mistakes,this my first attempt,,,, If you did nt like it means tell me, i will stop this in the starting stage itself... Thanks for reading my crap...



I want to kill u can i 😡...never said that what u write is crap...yaar u r so talented ...i love two chapters...nivi sis run away .....Love nivi here and the way u r making ur ff go to is really interesting ...can i hit u 😆 u stop it in such and excited want to know who call nivi yaar and verin waw love him yaar he is always hansom 😳...wating for ur next 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: love-mystery



I want to kill u can i 😡...never said that what u write is crap...yaar u r so talented ...i love two chapters...nivi sis run away .....Love nivi here and the way u r making ur ff go to is really interesting ...can i hit u 😆 u stop it in such and excited want to know who call nivi yaar and verin waw love him yaar he is always hansom 😳...wating for ur next 👏

lj iam realy tensed to post dear,, dont know you all like it,, that s why asked jaan...
you have all the right to hit and kill me...Embarrassed
thanks for your wonderful comment dear... 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaindeepti9

nice start bowya nivi introd was beautiful😳...wating for the next part😊

thanks deepti...😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: love_never_dies

hi friends,, i know my FF is not so gud,,, sorry for little errors and grammatical mistakes,this my first attempt,,,, If you did nt like it means tell me, i will stop this in the starting stage itself... Thanks for reading my crap...

bowya ..u can feel anything but want u to continue..read 2 chap..its becoming intersting..n i want u to continue ur ff as now we can see our nivren only through ur ff..wating for who is the guy..i think its viren or siddharth
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: love_never_dies

lj iam realy tensed to post dear,, dont know you all like it,, that s why asked jaan...
you have all the right to hit and kill me...😳
thanks for your wonderful comment dear... 🤗



meri jaan u must believe in ur self..and always remember we write coz we love to write if people love and like what we write that's will make us happy coz we bring smile to our friend's faces ...and if they didn't like then that's not mean our write is not good all people have different views ..and once again am saying the truth u r talented ..and no thanx 😆 remember
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaindeepti9

bowya ..u can feel anything but want u to continue..read 2 chap..its becoming intersting..n i want u to continue ur ff as now we can see our nivren only through ur ff..wating for who is the guy..i think its viren or siddharth

yes deepti,, now we have to live with niviren only in FFs,,,😭
ya your right in guessing,,,, i will write for you...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: love-mystery



meri jaan u must believe in ur self..and always remember we write coz we love to write if people love and like what we write that's will make us happy coz we bring smile to our friend's faces ...and if they didn't like then that's not mean our write is not good all people have different views ..and once again am saying the truth u r talented ..and no thanx 😆 remember

Ok jaan...😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey bowya..lovely chapters...intro of Nivi was beautiful...pls continue dear..

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