...*Tum Jo AaYE*... { a niviren FF} chap 3 & 4 ud

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Alphabet26

@Alphabet26

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Very nice chapters bowya.. waiting for ur next update... pls continue soon... 😊

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Aswathy

@achu28

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#42

very good chapters bowya.i really liked it.😊.waiting for next chapter dear continue soon.

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ash_nivren

@ash_nivren

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

bowya very nice dear...u are so talented..loved your intro of nivi...waiting for your new updates...please continue soon...

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@surur

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

very very Very nice chapters bowya.. waiting for ur next update... pls continue soon... 😊

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NiViren-Raj

@NiViren-Raj

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

nice bowya... waiting for the next chapter...

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meera_krishna

@meera_krishna

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

I read ur FF.. I felt i am reading a poem... it is that much beautiful... i loved each and every line of ur FF... u r an awesome writer dear... 👏...

i loved ur Nivi.. she is different.. her story also different..😛.. now waiting for Viren...😊😊

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aamina

@-aamina-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: love_never_dies

<font color="#ff0000">hi friends,, i know my FF is not so gud,,, sorry for little errors and grammatical mistakes,this my first attempt,,,, If you did nt like it means tell me, i will stop this in the starting stage itself... Thanks for reading my crap...</font>

Who said it's crap???? Pagal it's really good
Bowya I honestly loved it and you have made an awesome start. Love the well-defined description of the mother and looking forward to learning more about the other characters. x