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Posted: 14 years ago

Voice Over: Viren

After reaching Delhi I feel like home. I am happy that no one comes to pick me because I can enjoy my journey in my own way.

Chapter 10: Anjaana Anjaani…

She is wearing a light blue Churidar. Its duppatta is flying on air. "Stop the bus Please." Bus stopped. She enters the bus.

She stood near to Viren's seat which is near to the door. He looks at her. She looks like frightened. She impatiently looks around. She is looking for a vacant seat.

At the exit of the Bus Station, there is a small curve. When bus passed through that curve, 'Dhuudd'… Viren heard a sound and feel something heavy on his body. Viren don't understand what has happened. He slowly opens his eyes. There he could see two big beautiful eyes staring at him. Then he could see shivering lips. After few seconds Viren regains his consciousness. Then he understood that she is sitting on his lap. He is holding her. Her hand is on his collar. She still lost in her own world.

Viren looks at her in questioning manner, "Hmmm??". She jerked "Ahhh!!". Viren said, "Arre…. This is not ur cushion seat. U r sitting on my lap." She shocked and bounces back to same position. Viren can see same posture and same emotions. He shook his head. "Do you have planned to fall again? Please sit down here." He pointed the seat next to him. "There is no vacant seat."

She sits near to him in such way that by mistake even her cloth won't touch Viren. Viren look at the huge gap between them surprisingly and whispered "U r soo…." She asks him "What?" He shook his head, "Nothing." Then he turned towards window and concentrate on outside views.

Her phone is ringing. "Haan Dadi.. Haa. I am in bus now. Yaa sure… I will call u when I reach Shimla.. .. Tell Papa also…" Viren said himself, "Ohh.. She also is going Shimla."

Half hour later bus took another sharp curve. This time too Viren heard one sound. He looks at his seat, "Where is she?" then he looked at the ground. There goes 'Miss Crazy'. A smile appeared on Viren's lips. Gradually that changed to a laugh. Viren tried his best not to laugh. He looks at her. Her expression is like baby saying "Mummyyy…Mujhe Bachavoo…." After seeing this he couldn't control himself. He laughed louder. Seeing this other passengers also start laughing.

She becomes very angry at Viren. She tried to stand up. Viren give his hand for support. She rejects it. With the help of one lady she stood up. Then Viren noticed there is a wound in her right hand and it is bleeding. He becomes panic. He shouted for first aid. But it is still bleeding. He asked driver to go a Hospital. He rejects it and said they want to reach Shimla in time. So they cannot go Hospital.

Viren becomes angry. He asked to stop bus and asked her to get down. He picked both of their bags and get down the bus. It is a junction. Viren start searching for a taxi.

Suddenly someone has stolen her chain. She starts screaming and began to chase him. Viren stopped her. "U r injured." She screamed "my chain." You must to go hospital now.." She told firmly, "I don't care…. I don't care about my life. But I need that chain at any cost. " "Ok. I will help u." Viren start to chase him. After few minutes chase thief throw that chain away.

Viren took that chain. That is a thin gold chain and heart shaped pendant in it. He surprised "For this she taking her own life in risk!!!"

She becomes happy. Finally they manage to get one taxi. They reach hospital. They went directly to the casualty. One nurse started cleaning her wound. "Ouchhh!!!!!!!!!!" Both of them jerk a little at the same time. Nurse smiled at both of them. Viren said, "Please carry on. I will wait outside." Then he left room. One lady came there in order to fill the registration form. She asked her name.

She answered. "Niveditha. Niveditha Sharma."

This time Viren is outside the room waiting for her, without knowing who she is.

After completing all formalities they left the hospital. Then Viren approached a Taxi Driver and asked about a trip to Shimla. Finally he decided to go by Taxi.

Then he turned towards Nivi in to ask whether she is also coming with him or not. Before he could ask something, she entered into back seat of that car. Viren is surprised. He sat near driver's seat. He whispered "She is too crazy.. Too crazy like.." he paused for a second and then smiled. "Like my Nivi.."

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Posted: 14 years ago
res will give my views a bit later Meera...right now reserving my first position for commenting in your ff😆😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Meera you're FF is so cute. I can't wait to see when viren becomes aware of her identity.
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Posted: 14 years ago
C'EST VRAIMENT GENIALE VOUS AVEZ UN ESPRIT LARGE VOUS AVEZ ECRIS VOTRE HISTOIRE DIFFEREMMENT .MERCI JE VOUS PRIS DE CONTINUER.
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely updates meera...liked the way u described nivi...enjoyed it...can't wait to see their reactions when they come to know their real identities...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome updates meera,, sorry for the late reply, read your chapters just now... Very nice.. viren's dream in plane, his arrival in india, nivi's intro, niviren cute moments in bus, nivi's stubborn on chain, reaveling niveditha sharma,,,, i loved and enjoyed reading your updates...
Hope next chapter is very interesting,, please continue soon and thanx for the PM... 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely intro of Nivi, Meera..she is so cute..and Viren teasing her was awesome..Love this FF...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Such a lovely update Meera...it'll be nice to see how these 2 interact togeher when they realise who each other is.
Many thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
What a cute chapter, Luved Nivi and Virens interaction.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update Meera..me to laughed on how nivi fell from the seat..love the way viren cared for nivi..😊continue soon

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