NivRen FF...Aur Tum Aaye chapters 20 & 21 updated - Page 2

Aamina u r also starting to write FF,great dear, i always admire your scenes in epic romantic thread,you are a good writter dear,don't think your FF is bore dear... Very good start and iam waiting to read more from you... Well done.. 🤗

awww aamina dii firt chapter was great cant wait 2 read more and cant wait 4 Virens intro u described nivis feelings really detailed and descriptive

hey aamina jaanu starting n ff amazing RABCHIK CHApter meri jaan love it stp criticiszing ur self n update soon do pm me !!!!

Thanx sandiab- sorry don't know your name
Shamima, karan, usha, Jafrina, Sandy, Sana, KM, bowya and manahil. Thanks sooo much sweeties for such sweet comments. It really means a lot. X

u were scared...??of wat..??u hav started it so well..a totally new start..do u need me to say it clearly..well then..since u hav started it..u better finish it..i will b dere..am sure many more will b dere who would want to c hw d story unfolds..thank u so much..luv ya..

Aamina...you started you ff...very good always loved your scenes😊
read the first chapter and loved it very much...you are an awesome writer dear...continue soon😳

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Awww bless you sweeti... Thanks for sweet comments,it really means a lot. I was really worried.x

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pagali worried for wat???

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Chapter 2

'I'm fine Daddi, just a little tired'. Nivi couldn't help but smile as Daadi was always fussing over her. Nivi held onto Daddi's hand and tried to reassure her, 'I'll get ready quickly and then, will help you in the kitchen, don't worry.'

'theek hai betta, but please hurry, Hemlatta (Divya's mum) needs you to go to the Sood house with Divya. Vandanna has just phoned, the tailor is coming to their house in half an hour regarding the wedding outfits. He is in a bit of a hurry so he wants Divya to meet him there at the Sood house'. Vandanna Sood, was Siddharths mum and was like a mother to Nivi.

'But why does Chachi want me to go with Di?'

Daddi rolled her eyes, 'You know how superstitious Hamlatta is! She thinks it's a bad omen for a girl to leave the house on her own, a few days before her wedding. She is busy herself so has asked you to go with Divya.' Nivi felt she had no choice but to agree.

Hamlatta, was Nivi's chachi. She could be very spiteful at times but at the same time did a lot for the family. Divya was always her number one priority and always came first for her. She always desired the best for Divya and was completely ecstatic about her daughter getting married into the Sood family.

Nivi got changed into a pale pink chooridar suit after a quick shower and made her way towards the Sood house with Divya. The Sood house was like a mansion it had the tallest ceilings ever with crystal chandeliers. It was a three storey building that boasted 10 bedrooms with a beautiful terrace. Every bedroom had a bathroom attached with different designs. Nivi's house was tiny and so ordinary compared to the Sood house.

Both girls made their way into the Sood house and noticed a man standing there in the lounge area. He had a cell phone in his right hand and his left hand in his pocket. It seemed like he was texting. He looked a bit too posh to be a tailor, Nivi thought to herself. He looked more like a Movie star to her. He was wearing white leather plimsolls, with black slim fit jeans and a denim shirt. He had thick black hair that was styled really well. He must be some top notch designer or something...after all the Soods are known to spend excessive amount of money when it came to parties and functions and this was no exception. She thought to herself.

'Hi you must be the tailor?' Divya said. He looked up towards them and said nothing. 'Well I'm Divya, the bride, I have selected my wedding outfit, so it's just the measurements you need now.' He didn't seem to be interested in what Divya had just said. He began to shove his phone into the back pocket of his jeans 'Who is this, with you?' He asked Divya, looking at Nivi. Nivi looked worried, why was he asking about her?

Divya looked at Nivi, Nivi was stood by her side. Her hair was still damp and messy, she had quickly towel dried her hair. 'Oh...This is my little sister,' she replied, looking back at him. Divya was a little surprised as to why he was asking about Nivi. He was asking for trouble, she thought.

'Nice eyes' he winked at Nivi. Nivi began to blush she could feel herself going red and felt really uncomfortable. She wasn't use to taking compliments and never knew how to react. She usually got all defensive. 'Don't you think you should get on with your job!' she said in a quavering voice, avoiding any eye contact with him. Divya looked at him and tried not to laugh. He got told, she thought to herself.

He smiled broadly and shook his head. 'Looks like you don't know how to take a compliment. Or then again I don't think anyone has ever paid you a compliment!' Nivi was stunned her eyes widened. He paused for a second and then continued, 'by the way have you ever seen a hair brush before...? You definitely need one!' He laughed. Nivi stared at the floor with embarrassment and began to tuck her hair behind her ears.

Divya was really protective, when it came to Nivi. 'Errrmm excuse me, I think you're being extremely rude!' Divya said angrily, she had her phone in her hand, and wanted to throw it in his head. 'Where is Tai Jee (Vandanna) anyway?' She said raising her voice and looking around.

'You're a feisty one, aren't you?' He folded his arms across his chest. It seemed like he was enjoying himself.

'Viren!' came a voice 'badmaash...tu phir se shuru hogaya?' Vandanna smiled walking towards them with a tall man behind her.

Nivi and Divya turned to look at Vandanna. Divya held both her hands in front of her chest, palms together and slightly bowed her head 'Namastay Tai Jee.' They both were surprised to hear Vandanna call the man in front of them Viren. They had mistaken him for the tailor all this time. The actual tailor was with Vandanna. He had gone to speak to Daddi (Yashodra) and Dadda sahib in their bedroom.

Great intro to our hot handsome dear,, viren tailor,, very funny and i really enjoyed it... Continue soon sweety...*hugs*