NivRen FF...Aur Tum Aaye chapters 20 & 21 updated

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Hi guys,

I am making an attempt to write an ff on our lovely NivRen, as I couldn't refuse my little sis Sandy who had requested me to write. I am really nervous about it as it's the first time I'm going to do this, just hope it makes sense. I really hope you guys like it, or else I will cry... 😭

I'm not too sure about the story yet, as I haven't mapped out the story but hoping the story will progress as I go along and it will continue to flow. I am really scared that I might bore you, so please let me know if you would like me to continue or not.

I don't want to be a pain but If you guys would like me to continue, I need to tell you in advance that I will only be able to update once a week, maybe a weekend depending on how busy I am.

Index
Chapter 1: page 1
Chapter 2: page 3
Chapter 3: page 7
Chapter 4: page 10
Chapter 5: page 11
Chapter 6: page 15
Chapter 7: page 15
Chapter 8: page 18
Chapter 9: page 18
Chapter 10: page 21
Chapter 11: page 24
Chapter 12: page 25
Chapter 13: page 28
Chapter 14: page 31
Chapter 15: page 31
Chapter 16: page 34
Chapter 17: page 34
Chapter 18: page 38
Chapter 19: page 38
Chapter 20: page 41
Chapter 21: page 41
Chapter 1

It was late in the night and the moon glowed dimly surrounded by stars. Nivi could feel a cool breeze coming through the bedroom window as she sat on her bed removing her jewellery, which included bracelets, earrings and a necklace. She was not used to wearing heavy jewellery or being all dolled up in glitzy clothes. She only felt comfortable in her simple and plain chooridar suits. She always looked effortlessly beautiful and hardly ever used make-up to enhance her beautiful features. She was known for her shyness and simplicity.

Nivi had been busy with Divya's wedding function. It was one of the many sangeet nights that took place before the actual wedding. She felt Shattered after all the singing and dancing that went on during the evening. She smiled as she thought of how happy Divya looked. Divya and Siddharth Sood had only been engaged for four months but both had been in love with one another ever since Niv could remember. They both were made for each other.

Divya was Nivi's cousin, her uncle's daughter. They had grown up together and lived in the same house. Divya was very glamorous compared to Nivi. Divya always looked stunning and knew just about everything when it came to fashion and make-up. Unlike Nivi, Divya was known for her boldness. She always seemed to be engrossed with anything that was to do with glamour. She loved reading all the celebrity magazines and always had her head buried in them. To NIvi's annoyance, Divya seemed to have this obsession with testing all her new make-up and other products on her.

Now that Divya was getting married, Nivi would hardly see her and was going to miss her terribly. Although Divya would only be moving to the opposite house from her maternal home, she was going to become busy with her husband and her in-laws after marriage. Nivi still had her brother Yash and cousin Aditya, but it wouldn't be the same without Divya. Yash was Nivi's younger brother and was always annoying Nivi and Divya with his silly jokes and pranks. Nivi would scream with annoyance but Divya always gave as good as she got. Aditya was Divya's older brother and lived away from home, which was due to the work he did. So the family hardly saw him, but because his sister was getting married he had returned home for some time.

With a heavy sigh Nivi put her jewellery away in the jewellery box and got changed into her black legging pyjamas. She went towards the window and looked up towards the sky and said a few words before she turned out the lights and got into bed. In her mind she began to recall all the childhood moments she shared with Divya. After a few minutes of reflecting, she switched on the lamp and stepped out of bed. She took out a photo album, from the cupboard and sat on the bed folding her legs. She rested the album on her lap and began to look at the pictures.

She smiled as she looked at the pictures of her parents and brushed her fingers across at one picture which had her and her mother in it. The picture looked as if it was taken on some ones birthday. There were balloons, decorations and a party banner in the back reading 'Happy Birthday.' She looked at her mum in the picture who was dressed in a dark green satin saree, which had sequin on the anchal. Nivi unconsciously smoothed her long black hair down with her right hand, as she looked at her mum's beautiful long hair in the picture. Her cheeks began to rise and bulge, she smiled thinking she had long hair like her mum. Nivi didn't remember having the picture taken, but it had always been her favourite picture. She must have been four or five years old in that particular picture. She was wearing a white frilly dress with pink ribbon running through her pigtails, sat in her mother's lap.

Nivi told her mum everything and no matter how tired she was she would always talk to her before she went to bed. It was the only time she felt close to her mum. She sensed and felt her mum's presence in the form of a star in the sky. Nivi was only nine years of age when she lost her mum to a battle with cancer. Nivi gave a simple smile as she remembered how her mum would always sing to her while oiling her hair. Although Nivi had her dad, she was brought up by her Daddi (grandma) who also lived with them. Nivi was the apple of her eye.

Nivi continued flicking through the pages and giggled at the pictures she saw. She then stopped for a few seconds and stared at one particular picture. The picture had Nivi, Divya, Siddhart and Viren in it. "Viren!" she said as she narrowed her eyes.

Viren was Siddharth's cousin. Nivi, Divya, Siddharth and Viren had all gone to the same school together, but Viren later moved to Delhi for his studies. Nivi hadn't seen Viren since they were children. She chuckled as she brought to mind, on how Viren was so mischievous and was always in trouble with the teachers. Once he had gone into the school toilets and locked the door from inside, then lied flat on the floor onto his belly, and somehow managed to slide out from underneath...There was a huge gap between the door and the floor surface...he had gone into every cubical and done the same thing. God knows how he got caught she thought to herself, but remembered he was grounded by his dada sahib (Granddad), for a whole week. Nivi shook her head and wondered what Viren would be like now.

Siddharth was completely different. He was a teacher's pet during school days and had all the teachers completely wrapped around his finger. He was very studious and always well behaved. He was very hard working and had now taken over the family business after completing his degree in Business Management. Nivi admired Siddharth a lot as he had achieved so much at a very young age and had a good head on his shoulders. She was close to him as a friend as he was probably the only person who knew exactly what she went through after losing her mother so young. After all he also went through a similar suffering by losing his father very young. He knew what it felt like having a single parent. Despite this Nivi and Siddharth both knew how lucky they were to have amazing families.

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-Atiya- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey aamina u also started ff..gudd !!

i used to luv ur random besharam scenes..must say u r very gud writer 👍🏼
n i luvd dis starting..nyc intro
n n i didnt get bored infact i luvd it
continue soon sweetie 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kinha123

hey aamina u also started ff..gudd !!

i used to luv ur random besharam scenes..must say u r very gud writer 👍🏼
n i luvd dis starting..nyc intro
n n i didnt get bored infact i luvd it
continue soon sweetie 🤗

Atiya!!!
Awww bless you sweeti... Thanks for sweet comments,it really means a lot. I was really worried.x
🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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really lovely start n it wasnt borin at all totally love it please continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Aamina I'm so happy that you started your own FF:):):)
You are a great writer and should not feel nervous.
The first chapter was awesome, very detailed... Loved how Nivi was remembering her mum, it was so touching and sad. NivRen didn't meet yet, I would love to see how they meet for the first time, can't wait for your next chapter. Thanks jaan:) love ya... Big hug and kiss for you.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi aamina... u started u own FF.. very nice start... pls continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aww aamina ddii started ur ownn ff great ill read later and comment coz kinda busy right now soz but thannx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow aamina di thank u so so much for starting the ff on my request 🤗 the first chap was absolutely amazing...i just loved it...ofcourse please continue soon waiting for the entry of our hot viren😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Woww...amina dear...u started an ff...awesome start...can't wait to read more...thanx dear..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😃😛hey Aamina my sweetie ,my creative writer😃😛
its too gud that u hav started your ff
i m so happy
u write so beautifully😳
i lov this chapter so much
u r awesom👏 n so is your chapter

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