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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: sana4kinha

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<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">hi bowya... i think we r chatting for the first time...thanks dear...ya i'll introduce viren as soon as possible...i don't have a clear image abt how i have to take the story ahead...so sometimes it'll be boring...ok.😃...bt surely try to fulfill ur wish in this weekend...</font>

thanx sana, iam waiting to read your chapters, chapter-2 also good,sid's intro hmm nice dear... Continue soon

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tashu20

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

nice chapter dear...😊.

plz continue soon...

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Alphabet26

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

wow sana... nice chapter.. nivi and viren missing in the scene... hope they met on their way to home..😉

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dyhardfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Sana jaan... Can't wait for NivRen to meet. Wonder what everyone reaction will be when they see our beautiful Nivi:) can't wait for the next chapter. Please continue soon jaan. Love ya.

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warg

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Wow dii...loved te update!!
Waitin for viren to arrive n for NivRen's pehla meeting...freaking excited!!
Luv u dii...pls do continue...mwaah..*hugs*

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-Atiya-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: sana4kinha
@mim--thank u so much dear...all want viren's entry...hmm..😆..will do that..

@sunayana--thanks dear...ur scenes r too good..keep writing more...

@Ingiv--thanks dear...🤗

@kinha123-amna(am i correct ?)...thank u so much sweetie...

no dear my name is atiya 😊

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FrozenRain

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

hi all...thanx a lot for all ur lovely comments...sorry for not replying individually...i'm in a hurry...thanx once again..

hi atiya...nice name..will never forget ur name...😃

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-Atiya-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

nyc chapter sana dear 🤗

but i m waiting for viren's entry. 😍

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-Atiya-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: sana4kinha
hi all...thanx a lot for all ur lovely comments...sorry for not replying individually...i'm in a hurry...thanx once again..

hi atiya...nice name..will never forget ur name...😃

thnx dear 😳

u r really sweet

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FrozenRain

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Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Chapter-3

It's already past 4 pm…Nivi rushed to finish her work and grabbed her bag and ran out of the office…She was so happy that her first day went so well..all her colleagues r so co-operative and she got a warm welcome from everyone…while going to the bus stop she was thinking abt the soods and her childhood friends….she tried to remember abt those sweet days…sid was always there to help her in her problems…he used to be her best friend…and she whispered….viren…she cudn't stop smiling when she thought abt how viren used to tease her and sid by imitating the way sid used to call her putul…viren was so naughty bt he was so caring too…they both r the best friends of her…she shook her head and looked at her watch……She was in a hurry to meet her childhood friends…..She speed up her walk and held towards the bus stop…

Viren was driving fast…he is really missing his best friend…tht is his bike….he wore a brown jacket with a white tee and he was again getting annoyed by his dream…He switched on the music system..bt it only helped to drag him more powerfully towards his dreamworld…the melodious music making him to feel the presence of his dream girl…and a small smile flashed through his lips….He started to talk to himself….viren sood…when will that day come…when u'll able to meet ur dream girl…only sid know his dream abt his marriage and love…he want to fall in love with a girl in first sight….Bt unfortunately he cudn't find anyone like that till today…..Sid always teased him and said tht finally he will get marry to a girl according to his family's wish….viren know very well that it's not possible….he felt some unknown happiness and calmness when he saw the roadside board…"Welcome to shimla…hope u'll find ur dream here…."

He looked at his watch…he is getting late…and he drove the car fast..bt he stopped the car when his phone started to ring…It's sid…he parked the car near a store…and attended the phone…hello sid…how r u bhai….he can feel the happiness in sid's voice..i'm fine….plz come home as soon as possible…viren I can't explain u how much happy I'm….. all our childhood memories r here…it's the best moment in my life..and plz jaldi aajavo.. hamari NT dadi made kajar ka halwa for u….if u'll not reach here at correct time then don't blame me after that….

Nahin..bhai…mera halwa…I'm coming home within 15 minutes…I'm in shimla…..he can hear sid's laugh on the other end…When he was abt to get back to the driving seat he saw a girl running behind the bus to get into it….Her white duppatta flying in the air…..her long silky hair shines in the sunlight…he can't believe his eyes…she is simple...and her fragrance filled in the air...he felt like he was dragging towards his dreamland with this angel...finally he found out his dream girl…..bt he felt annoyed as he cudn't see her face…her face was covered with her duppatta bcz of the speed of the wind…and he can only see her big twinkling eyes…he felt tht he is getting lost in her deep eyes…Bt it was too late when he was abt to run behind her to see her properly …she got inside the bus and he stood there watching the bus diminishing from his sight…..

He hitted his leg in the ground…damn…I missed her…..why viren…why…bt he felt so happy that he finally found out his dream girl..now no one can say his dream will remain a dream forever…he turned back and held towards his car..he whispered….thank god.. finally u gave me a glimpse of my dreamgirl…She is so pretty yet so simple…still he can feel the fragrance of her..he said…angel..u plucked my heart like a flower….bt u can't escape from me for a long time…bcz it's not difficult to find u in a small city…and he felt so happy abt his decision to come back to shimla….viren started the car and drove home in a hurry…he just got lost in the music played in the car……haye mera dil chura ke legaya..churane waala..mera ka dil……He cudn't stop smiling and he took a deep breath to control his heartbeats…

Edited by sana4kinha - 14 years ago

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