NivRen FF - Lamha (Ch44/Pg90) - Page 68

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Posted: 13 years ago
thnx guys for ur sweet comments...sorry for not updating this ff...actually lost my connection with the story coz of my busy lyf...n donno what to write...
thnx a million for ur pms...n sorry i cudn't reply to ur pms...m so happy to know that u people lovedthis story this much...so i just wrote a chapter for u guys..justcoz of ur pms...n i know it's too bad...bt i'm posting this to thank u all...but plz excuse my writing coz it'll only make u guys bore...plz bare with me...i donno if i cud continue this or not...bt try to enjoy my small update just for u guys...n thnx once again for ur support n pmss...
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Chapter -44

Viren…!!...nivi whispered….she rubbed her eyes as she is seeing a dream.. viren suddenly moved inside the room and shut down the door behind them…

Viren..tum..is waqth….and why u closed the door..??... viren….r u listening..??...nivi's tension could be recognized from her shaky voice…she cudn't understood what's happening there….

So many questions at one time …nivi look at me….he smiled at her…and hold her hand and placed it on his chest…Then he bent his head and winked at her…suno…mere dil ki dhadkan…this heart is only beating for u…nivi looked at him with wide eyes…

he noticed that nivi still analyzing him with a confused face….nivedita…I know what r u thinking right now…and I was in the same state just few minutes ago….

Look at my eyes…this eyes want to see only ur face….i love u nivedita…and I know only one thing that I can't live without u… He kneeled down in front of her and picked a small red box from his pocket….he slowly opened it while looking at her face...he even havn't blinked once…unknowingly a small curve in her lips changed to a big smile when she saw a simple yet a beautiful ring in that cute box…

Nivi…I expressed my love several times in front of u…and now our families want our rishta…and now I want to ask the same thing…and I know I ignored u throughout the function…it was not intentional….sorry nivi…I was so confused…I don't know why my brain cudn't recognize my heart feelings at that time…they had lost their synchronization…

Nivi sighed….she felt so happy after a long time….viren…I thought…she stopped for a moment..she was hesitant to ask further abt his odd behaviour in the evening…she looked at him for a moment and then continued….viren…I thought that u don't like this marriage…that's why u looked unhappy in the party….

Ohhh…nivi…tht's not true..i'm a budhu…he hit his forehead and leaned towards the wall…and crossed his hands across his chest.. sometimes we cudn't digest the happiness we got unexpectedly…that wht's happening with me right now..it's my dream to get u as my life partner in my life..and now all my dreams r coming true..actually I can't believe this…

Nivi smiled at his excitement..he looks so cute n innocent…and this is the person who is going to be her companion in her life…she wiped her tears which r diminishing his sight from her eyes..

Nivi..kya hua…?..why r u crying…r u happy with this marriage???..i can't see a crying face of my nivi..she could feel the concern in his voice..he cupped her face…and wiped her tears with his fingertips..and he made his face more close to hers..she could feel the hot air coming out of his mouth on her face…

She feel nervous and she slowly made herself free from his hold..and turned to the other side…viren stared at her for moment and then made himself one step forward towards her..

Nivi cudn't face his eyes..she cleared her throat..wohh…viren….kuch nahi…I'm ok…..he smiled at her and moved more close to her and then grabbed her right hand n swirled her around him and finally placed her hand on his chest as he is asking her to feel his heartbeats…

He wrapped his hands around her waist and this gesture from him made nivi so nervous and conscious….she whispered.. viren..ye tum kya kar rahe ho…?...she made some futile attempts to make herself free from his hold.

Mera hone waali beewi se baat kar rahi hoon...he made his hold even more tighter….his reply made nivi to blush badly….

Sharma rahi ho..??...this shyness making u so beautiful…so I would love to see u like this always…then he rubbed his nose on her cheeks..and that sent electric waves to her body…

Viren stopped himself for a moment and whispered on her ears..ab batao…

Nivi raised her eyebrows..kya….???

I love u…bolo na…plzz…he pleaded in front of her like a little boy..

Viren waited to hear the three words from his love…and her big eyes cudn't resist the excitement and charm in his eyes and she struggled to open her mouth…

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Posted: 13 years ago
plz forgive d mistakes coz posted this in a hurry...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
good update Sana...wating for next..want to know whether nivi said love u to viren or not😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
sana ki bacchi !!! u updated 12 days ago n didnt say a word ?! u r so gone... :x

nice cute romance...wish it was longer...still, d romance makes up for d length 😛...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sanaa Dear this is sooo very Romantic, Nivi and Vren came in front of my eyes and I could actually see them romancing, Love them and miss them sooo much Dear, Wish we could get back our Nivren, But we are getting them back through these wonderful and lovely FF, Thanks again Dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sana very romantic chapter. loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
read the full fic its really nice cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Firstly Thanks for updating and Secondly sorry for the late comment anyway awesome update please do try and continue soon. 😊

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